Target Audience Feedback

Lucy Oldroyd, 17 years old.

Lucy gave me feedback on my front cover.She said she loves the colours that I have used for my magazine as they make the magazine stand out and attract an audience, especially for people of her age. She also said she likes how I used a range of pictures and how I positioned the 4 at the bottom of the magazine.Lucy said that she thinks I could’ve made the text of the magazine more Indie like but that you can still tell it is Indie. She said that she would buy my magazine.

Connor Ward, 17 years old and James Ward, 16 years old.

Connor and James both gave me feedback on my double page spread.They said they both liked the pictures that I had used and that they really stand out. James said that he thought it was good how I had included a twitter column answering questions from Kayyah’s fans. Connor also added that the colours I used all connect from the clothing, to the title to the key words and that it was clever.They both said that I should of used a more exciting font for my text and the font was quite boring.