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Feed back from NicoleWhat went well:Firstly, I think that the pictures really relate to school life and are quite interesting and different to what you might normally see on a contents page. Also, the title font is bold and eye-catching and the other fonts are quite quirky and relevant to school life.

Even Better if:However, the improvements could be to use only 2 fonts so the page isn't too busy with different fonts and choose another font to make it more readable. You could also space out the texts a bit more to help with the clearness.

Finished Table of contents.I made more space between the subheadings by using Grid. I also added more space between each line under the columns. I changed the font of this to the same font I used for the majority of the page. This was so it didn’t look too ‘busy’ , ultimately I only used two fonts. This made the table of contents flow and come together more. I put ‘The Fold’ in capitals to make it stand out more, I did this because I wanted it to differentiate from the other text on the page. Under each page number, I made the text bigger and bolder to make it clearer to read. I used Grid to line up each column and the end of the picture at the bottom left with the start of the picture at the top right. I resized the picture at the bottom left to make it fit in more, as when I changed the size and the positioning of the text, there wasn’t the same amount of space. I moved the number twenty down on the picture at the top right as it was over the book a small bit.