status report: implementation of the writing fundamentals
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The Writing Fundamentals Program:Three Years of Implementation
Presentation to the Board of Education
January 19, 2017
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Philosophy and Purpose
• The Writing Fundamentals Units of Study provides a focus for instruction that aligns with the NYS Learning Standards, as well as a sequence of lessons based on models of best practices in teaching writing, and incorporates higher-level thinking strategies and utilizes the Depth of Knowledge (DOK) model.
• Students use cognitive and metacognitive self-regulation strategies to monitor and guide their own learning processes.
• Writing Fundamentals Units of Study provide multiple opportunities for students to think deeply and critically about what they read and write, from analyzing writer’s craft, to planning and revising their drafts, to publishing a piece of writing with a clear purpose and with ‘audience’ in mind.
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The Writing Process
The Goal of the Writing Process:Writing to Independence through
the following steps:
• Immersion• Generate Ideas• Select • Collect• Draft• Revise• Edit• Publish• Celebrate
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Kindergarten
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The Writing Workshop Process
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First Grade Fourth Grade
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Sample Units of Study
Units of Study:
• How Writers Work• Functional • Biography• Feature Article• Editorial• Narrative• Poetry• Book Review• Author Study• ‘How To’ Books• Persuasive Writing 5
launch unit
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Writing Workshop: Lesson Structures
Interactive Read-Aloud Mini-Lesson
Group Share(5-10 m)
Independent Writing and Small-Group
Work (20-30 m)
Read-Aloud and
Discussion(20-30 m)
Group Share
(5-10 m)
Independent Writing Time and
Teacher Conferring(30-40 m)
Mini-Lesson
(10-15 m)
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Where Are We Now?
How Have We Grown?
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• District-wide consistency of instruction • Student growth through common and familiar
structures and expectations
• Teacher growth through professional development
• Teacher expertise and creativity is maintained and encouraged
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Primary Grades: Importance of Preparation & Procedures
Grade 1Grade K
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Kindergarten – Writing Workshop“How Writers Work”
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They conference with the teacher as they move
through the writing process.
Writers use pictures and words to tell about events in their lives.
Writers select topics that matter to them. They write what they know about.
They “turn and talk” with partners to share their thinking and ideas. Writers take risks and try new things.
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Kindergarten – Immersion and Generating Ideas
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Kindergarten – Illustrations & Details
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• Colorful details create images for the readers.
• Illustrators use pictures to help tell stories.
• Illustrators create pictures to support the text.
• Illustrators plan and make decisions about where to place their pictures in a book.
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Kindergarten –Narrative Writing: Beginning, Middle, and End
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Cover Page
Beginning Middle End
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Grade 1 – Elaboration
• Writers are ‘saying’ more by adding feelings, thoughts, small steps, details and author’s craft.
• Elaboration is shown in adding words, pictures, lines, pages and/or books.
• Students use colored pencils to
make their writing stronger.
• Charts are used as a reference to
help develop independent writers.
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Grade 1 – Elaboration
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Writers use • Strong beginnings• BIG BOLD words• Ellipses• Speech bubbles• Sentence flaps• Thoughts• Characters talking• Colored pencils• More pages
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Grade 1 – Peer Conferencing
• Conferencing allows students to be heard by their peers.
• Teachers can first model how to ask questions to add more information, from general requests to “tell me more” to more specific “who, what, where, when, why, and how” questions.
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Students can learn to revise by asking questions about their writing and the writing of others during conferences with the teacher and with peers.
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Grade 1 – Peer Conferencing(Note: This is now a PDF and cannot be played as a video any longer.)
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Grade 6 Conferencing
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Grade 4 - Author’s Craft Using Mentor Texts
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-Students learn to “read like writers” as they listen to, discuss, and observe a mentor text, Saturdays and Teacakes, by Lester Laminack.
-As you read the mentor texts, there will be many places to stop and marvel at the author’s craft.
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“Show, Don’t Tell”
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Creates mental images in readers’ minds.
Allows the reader to follow the author into a captured moment and feel what they have experienced.
Makes writing more interesting and effective.
Students are given time to explore and practice using this technique.
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Vivid Verbs Through Mentor Texts
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Vivid Verbs Through Mentor Texts
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Cliff DiverWritten by Kingston
My stomach lurched as my friends and I sprinted to the next waterslide at Splish Splash. I peered up at the “Cliff Diver” which stood a frightening fifty feet in the sky. I had a bad feeling about this ride, but I dashed under the gate and rushed up the stairs. By the time I made it, I was exhausted.
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First Grade Transition Words
Fourth Grade Transition Words
FirstIn the beginningNextAfter thatFollowingAlsoFinallyIn conclusion
Soon afterAfter a whileLater that dayBefore long
One eveningEarlier that dayAs I…
Suddenly
HoweverMeanwhile 23
passing of time
suspense
setting
Author’s Craft: The Power of Transitions
contrast
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Author’s Craft: The Power of Transitions
“One evening, somewhere between Columbus Avenue and Central Park, Solomon Singer wandered into a small restaurant called the Westway Cafe.”
– An Angel For Solomon Singer
“Before long she came back with two big tomato sandwiches on hamburger buns.”
- Saturdays and Teacakes
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Author’s Craft: The Power of Transitions
Showing Movement Over Time
“It was summer in the summer of the year when the relatives came. They came up from Virginia. They left when their grapes were nearly purple enough to pick, but not quite.” – The Relatives Came
“And the relatives drove on, all day long and into the night, and while they traveled along they looked at the strange houses and different mountains and they thought about their dark purple grapes waiting at home in Virginia.” – The Relatives Came
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One by one my friends yelled, “Woohoo!”
At last, it was my turn. I took one gargantuan
breath. I wondered, will I fall off the slide? Then,
WHOOSH! I crossed my hands and flew down
the slide with lightning speed. This is fun!
Before I knew it…SPLASH! Water gushed onto
my face. As I climbed off the water slide, I
thought about how I couldn’t wait to go on the
fifty foot Cliff Diver again.
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Author’s Craft: Inner Dialogue
“Inner dialogue is simply the speech of a character to himself. He hears it and the reader hears it, but other characters have no idea what’s going on in his head.”
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Why Inner Dialogue is Essential in Fiction?• Replicates real life
thoughts and scenarios.
• Creates a deeper connection between the reader and the characters.
• Helps control the pacing of the story, keeping the reader interested.
• Conveys messages that cannot necessarily be spoken out loud.
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Author’s Craft: Conversational Dialogue
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• Develops voice and tone of the characters
• Conversational dialogue provides contrast within a narrative by breaking up action and description.
• With careful thought in its placement and use, it will keep the reader interested and makes a literary piece an enjoyable experience for the readers.
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Student Presents His Writing Piece(Note: This is now a PDF and cannot be played as a video any longer.)
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Tools of the Trade
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Kindergarten Writing Center Kindergarten Writing Folders
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Tools of the Trade
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Fourth-Grade Writing Center Fourth-Grade Writing Notebooks
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Assessment: Checklists and Rubrics
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Differentiation of Instruction
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Some students are given explicit drawing lessons, on how to use simple shapes to create pictures, while other students focus on adding details to their work.
Graphic organizers can be used to help focus and organize students’ writing.
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Professional Development (PD)
Results of Professional Development:
– To cultivate professional growth among our faculty, improve the quality of instruction, and ultimately guide and inspire students to be motivated, independent, skilled writers
– Job embedded PD: In-house consultants and the opportunities it provides
• Peer collaboration/co-working sessions
• Lab Structure: Pre-briefing, Demo lesson, Debriefing
• Reflection, revision, decision making for future lesson implementation (among teachers and with consultants)
• Networking: Developing meaningful, accessible relationships with program consultants
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Professional Development:Our Consultant Modeling a Mini-Lesson for Teachers
Generating Topics for Informational Text: (“FUNctional" Writing )
Using “Turn & Talk” Partnerships
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Increased instructional consistency
within & across grade levels
Differentiation: PD helps to address
individual student’s strengths and areas of needed growth
The Purpose and
Importance of Professional
Development
Providing opportunities for teacher growth; it
honors professional educators
Ongoing professional
development; the PD evolves
developmentally only over time
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Writing FundamentalsThree Years of Implementation...
A Successful Evolution
Thank You
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