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  • 7/25/2019 Sophisticated Simple Sentence

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    Writing Sophisticated Simple Sentence

    Examples of simple sentencesinclude the following:

    1. Joe waited for the train."Joe" = subject, "waited" = verb

    Sophisticated:Good: Joe, who is my classmate and best friend, waited for the train.

    Good: Joe waited for the brand new train at the old station for one hour.

    Excellent: Joe, who is my classmate and best friend, waited for the brand new trainat the old station for one hour.

    . !he train was late."!he train" = subject, "was" = verb

    ophisticated: !he ver# old and slow train coming from $anila was late for nearl# two hours.

    %. & loo'ed for $ar# and amantha at the bus station."&" = subject, "loo'ed" = verb

    ophisticated: & loo'ed for $ar# and amantha, who are both nursing students from (ondon, atthe bus station in !acloban )it#.

    *. $ar# and amantha too' the bus."$ar# and amantha" = compound subject, "too'" = verb

    ophisticated: $ar#, who is a nurse from (ondon, and amantha, a nurse from +merica, too' the!acloban )it# tourist bus to visit the rovincial -ospital in the town of alo.

    . $ar# and amantha arrived at the bus station earl# but waited until noon for the bus."$ar# and amantha" = compound subject, "arrived" and "waited" = compound verb

    ophisticated: $ar# and amantha, who are both nurses from (ondon and +merica, arrived atthe !acloban )it# new bus station earl# with all their bags of medical suppliesand e/uipment but waited until noon for the bus to pic' them up to their hotelin the town of alo.

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    !o avoid boring simple

    sentence, tr# the

    following tric's.

    anpahusa# o panpahalaba la ini hi#a. &mu la gin0describe hi Joe. 7isan ini tanggalon, as#a la gihap it

    anpahusa# o panpahalaba la ini gihap hi#a. &mu lagin0describe an train. 7isan ini tanggalon, as#a la