show, dont tell part 2
TRANSCRIPT
Tell Show Me
The girl is excited. As the girl raced in her ski pod towards the finish line she smiled from ear to ear because she knew she had won!!!!(her heart leapt for joy.)
TRANSCRIPT
Tell Show Me
The girl is excited. As the girl raced in her ski pod towards the finish line she smiled from ear to ear because she knew she had won!!!!(her heart leapt for joy.)