sentence structure mrs. wright. what is a sentence? group of words that completes a thought has a...
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Sentence StructureMrs. Wright
What is a sentence?Group of words
that completes a thought
Has a subject and a verb
Some are short, some are long◦ Length does not
determine if a sentence is complete
Examples:◦ Mary reads every
night before she goes to sleep
◦ I’m hungry
What is a fragment?A group of words
that does NOT COMPLETE A THOUGHT
Some fragments are short, some fragments are long◦ Length is not a
determiner
Fragment sentence examplesExample #1
Wrong◦ Because I have a
headache.
Correct◦ Because I have a
headache, I am going to take a nap
Example #2
Wrong◦ After eating three
cheeseburgers and a plate of French fries at lunch with my friends at Heavenly Hamburgers.
Correct◦ I was stuffed after eating
three cheeseburgers and a plate of French fries at lunch with my friends at Heavenly Hamburgers.
What is a run-on sentence?Two or more
sentences improperly joined by no punctuation at all
Often longer than fragments, but length does not determine if a sentence is a run-on
Examples of a run on sentenceExample #1
Wrong◦ I really like Joe he is
such a nice guy. (no punctuation)
Correct◦ I really like Joe; he is
such a nice guy. (semicolon works)
Example #2
Wrong◦ I really like Joe he
is such a nice guy.
Correct◦ I really like Joe
because he is such a nice guy. (because works)
http://theoatmeal.com/comics/semicolon
Too ShortSome sentences are
grammatically correct, but they are too short
Short sentences create a choppy effect and sound elementary
A series of short sentences often repeats words or ideas
Too short exampleExample #1
Wrong◦ I liked the movie. It
was funny. It had a surprise ending.
Correct◦ I liked the movie
because it was funny and had a surprise ending.
Good things about short sentencesIt is easy to
understand
One short sentence in the middle of longer sentences can have a strong impact
Short sentences give the reader a break…a moment to breathe.
Clause
A group of words that contain a subject and a verb
Two types of clauses:
◦ Independent Can stand alone
◦ Dependent Cannot stand alone
Independent Clauses/Complete Sentence
Definition:
Can stand alone
It is a complete sentence
Example:
◦ The woman sang a song.
Dependent Clauses/FragmentDefinition:
Needs more complete thought
Cannot stand alone
Example:
◦ Because she was happy
Why was she happy?
Independent + Dependent ClausesThe woman sang a
song because she was so happy
Which part is the independent?
Which part is the dependent?
◦ (independent + dependent)
Because she was so happy, the woman sang a song.
Which part is the independent?
Which part is the dependent?
◦ (dependent + independent)
Comma SpliceA run-on sentence
Writer has connected two main clauses (complete sentences) with a comma alone
A main clause makes a complete thought, so a comma is not strong enough to join such powerful clauses together
Comma Splice Example
Eliza ran to the store, then she stopped at clown school to pick up her homework.
Eliza ran to the store; then she stopped at clown school to pick up her homework.
Eliza ran to the store and then she stopped at clown school to pick up her homework.