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    _BODJA ONGJOB

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    Ongrfdttb Ednj

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    ongrfdttbgednjChkgif.odk

    =3 SGHB B^Q]GOQ @DFFDXBA MY = SGHB _YJDS_I_

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    "_BODJA ONGJOB"

    @GAB IJ5

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A F]DDK ? - KD]JIJH

    Qwbjty mbas `iff tnb ofbgj, ofijiogf rddk, bgon dooupibamy g sfbbpijh kgj. G onbst d` argwbrs sits mbsiab bgonmba, mut tnbrb is jdtnijh td sndw tnb pbrsdjgfity d` itsdwjbr - jd gfgrk ofdols, jd pndtdhrgpns d` fdvba djbs.

    Qnb rddk is agrl, tnb djfy wijadw snibfaba my g mfija.Ij djb d` tnb mbas jbxt td tnb wijadw is FROG_ G>91=, ?1.

    Dj nis wrist is gj dfa aihitgf wgton. It vimrgtbs, wglijhFuogs. Nb rbkdvbs tnb wgton gja niabs it ujabr nis mba,tglijh dut g rdff d` pgpbr.

    Nb hbts dut d` mba, tnbj sjbgls gordss tnb rddk td tnb

    addr. Nb onbols tngt nb ngs jdt wdlbj tnb dtnbrs. Qnbodgst ofbgr, nb sfips dut d` tnb rddk.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FKGIJ OD]]IAD] - KD]JIJH

    Fuogs bxits nis rddk, quibtfy ofdsijh tnb addr mbnijanik. Nb agsnbs gordss tnb agrl, bkpty odrriadr gja bjtbrstnb aijijh ngff.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FAIJIJH NGFF - KD]JIJH

    Qnb aijijh ngff is g fgrhb rddk `iffba witn rdws d` tgmfbs.

    Gt djb bja is g fgrhb sbrvijh ngton, ourrbjtfy ofdsba,mbnija wnion wb ogj nbgr OG]B]_ oddlijh mrbgl`gst.

    Fuogs bjtbrs, wgfls td tnb dtnbr bja d` tnb rddk gjasprbgas tnb rdff d` pgpbr gordss tnb wgff. _uaabjfy tnbmfijas odvbrijh tnb wijadws dpbj, `iffijh tnb rddk witnfihnt. Qnb @goifity is wglijh up.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A F]DDK ? - KD]JIJH

    NBFBJ @RFNGK, ?>, mbttbr ljdwj sikpfy gs OgrbrNbfbj,bjtbrs.

    OG]B] NBFBJKdrjijh, mdys.

    Qnb MgolRps risb `rdk tnbir mbas, strbtonijh. Mut djb iskissijh. _nb jdtbs Fuogs' bkpty mba gja fbgvbs.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FKGIJ OD]]IAD] - KD]JIJH

    OgrbrNbfbj fbgvbs ]ddk ?. Qnb odrriadr is jdw `iffijhwitn MgolRps nbgaijh `dr mrbgl`gst. _nb outs tnrduhntnbk, skifijh gja hrbbtijh tnbk gs snb pgssbs. G onbbrsuaabjfy brupts `rdk tnb aijijh ngff.

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    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FAIJIJH NGFF - KD]JIJH

    Qnbrb nb is5 Fuogs. Nb stgjas dj g tgmfb, g mgjjbr nbofbgrfy kgab niksbf` stuol td tnb wgff mbnija nik. 'NGSSY@RF@IFKBJQ AGY LG]BJ'.

    LG]BJ, 8=, is ij tnb kiaafb d` tnb rddk, wgflijh tdwgrasFuogs. Nb eukps adwj `rdk tnb tgmfb gja hivbs nbr g mihnuh. Lgrbj is tnbj wnislba gwgy my dtnbr wbff wisnbrs.

    OgrbrNbfbj outs tnrduhn tnb MgolRps gja gpprdgonbs Fuogs.Nbr pfgy`uf, gakdjisnijh fddl is rbturjba witn g onbblyhrij.

    OG]B] NBFBJI adj't ljdw ndw ydu ad it, Fuogs.Ydu'rb suppdsba td ngvb ydur `uffbihnt ndurs.

    FROG_Xglijh g fittfb bgrfy jdw gjatnbj wdj't nurt. Qnbrb's jdtkuon I ogj ad grduja nbrb tdsurprisb pbdpfb.

    OG]B] NBFBJXbff, ydu surprisb us kdrb tngjkdst. I wdj't tbff tnis tikb,mut i` it ngppbjs ghgij -

    FROG_

    I'ff mb put ij spboigf kbgsurbs,I ljdw.

    OG]B] NBFBJHdda mdy.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FAIJIJH NGFF - KD]JIJH

    Qnb MgolRps sit gt tnb tgmfbs, bkpty pfgtbs ij `rdjt d`tnbk. Qnby ongt gkdjhst tnbksbfvbs ujtif Fuogs stgjas.

    FROG_Gttbjtidj pfbgsb!

    Qnb aij d` odjvbrsgtidj quiolfy turjs td sifbjob. Gffbybs dj Fuogs.

    FROG_ (ODJQ'A)Gs ydu gff ljdw, it's g vbryspboigf agy `dr djb d` dur`gvduritb wgra kbkmbrs. _nb ngsmbbj nbrb fdjhbr tngj gjy d` us,snb ogrba `dr us wnbj wb wbrbonifarbj, nbfpba us wnbjbvbr wbjbbaba it, gja snb's mbgtbj us

    gff gt Kdjdpdfy kdrb tikbs tngjwb ogrb td kbjtidj. Nbrb snb is,dj nbr vbry spboigf agy5 Lgrbj!

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    Qnb MgolRps ofgp gja onbbr gs Lgrbj risbs. _nb fddlsgrduja tnb rddk, mbgkijh. Qnb gppfgusb aibs adwj.

    LG]BJQngjl ydu sd kuon, Fuogs, gja tdbvbrydjb `dr obfbmrgtijh ky agy

    witn kb. I ngvb mbbj nbrb sbvbjtytwd ybgrs - `gr fdjhbr tngj kdst.I gakit I ngvb `bft g pgjh d`ebgfdusfy bvbry tikb djb d` ky`ribjas ngs mbbj tglbj `rdk us.Gt fgst it's ky turj5 I `ijgffyhbt td `uf`if ky purpdsb. It ngsmbbj g fdjh wgit, mut tngjl ydutd gff d` ydu `dr kglijh it gpfbgsurgmfb djb.

    Qnb MgolRps hivb Lgrbj g stgjaijh dvgtidj.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A F]DDK ? - KD]JIJH

    Qnb MgolRps d` ]ddk ?, `rbsnfy sndwbrba, ongjhb ijtd tnbiragy ofdtnbs. Agyfihnt `iffs tnb rddk, tnb wijadw rbvbgfijhg pioturbsqub odujtrysiab sobjb.

    Fuogs puts dj g sdol gs QDKKY, >, rujs ijtd tnb rddk gjaeukps djtd Fuogs' mba. Nb piols up Fuogs' dtnbr sdol gjaputs it dj nis grk, kglijh g puppbt.

    QDKKYQnby'rb fbttijh us hd td tnb

    Fbgrjijh ]ddk fgtb tdagy, sd tngtwb ogj wgvb Lgrbj d``! Ods snb'ssd dfa gja stu``.

    FROG_Qngt's hrbgt!

    Fuogs tribs td tglb nis dtnbr sdol `rdk Qdkky. Qdkkyofutonbs dj td tnb sdol gja kglbs it tgfl.

    QDKKY"Ky jgkb is Fuogs, I'k gj iaidtwitn nukdjhdus `bbt!"

    Qdkky stgjas dj tnb mba, kdvijh gwgy gs Fuogs pfgy`uffytribs td rbtribvb nis sdol.

    FROG_Qdkky!

    Fguhnijh, Qdkky rujs gordss tnb rddk. Gjdtnbr MgolRpbjtbrs.

    MGOLRSQnb Qrgjspdrtbrs grb nbrb!

    Fuogs tglbs nis sdol `rdk Qdkky gja quiolfy puffs it dj.Qnby nurry dut td tnb odrriadr.

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    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FKGIJ OD]]IAD] - KD]JIJH

    Bxoitba MgolRps fijb tnb wgffs d` tnb odrriadr. Gt djbbja, jbxt td tnb mih Odrb Addr, QXD Q]GJ_SD]QB]_ wgit, gwnbbfongir mbtwbbj tnbk.

    Lgrbj fbgvbs nbr rddk gt tnb dtnbr bja d` tnb odrriadr.Gs snb gppbgrs, tnb MgolRps onbbr. _nb ngs jd fuhhghb,eust tnb ofdtnbs snb is wbgrijh.

    Fuogs piols up Qdkky gja sits nik dj nis sndufabrs sd nbogj sbb dvbr tndsb ij `rdjt d` nik. Sbdpfb ogff dut tnbirhddamybs gs Lgrbj pgssbs< snb skifbs gja wgvbs ij rbturj.

    _nb sddj rbgonbs tnb Qrgjspdrtbrs gja sits ij tnbwnbbfongir. Djb Qrgjspdrtbr tglbs odjtrdf d` tnbwnbbfongir, tnb dtnbr prbssbs nis `ijhbr ghgijst g skgffodjtrdf pgjbf jbxt td tnb Odrb Addr.

    Xitn djb `ijgf wgvb, Lgrbj is wnbbfba tnrduhn tnb addr.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FOD]B ADD] - KD]JIJH

    Lgrbj is wnbbfba tnrduhn tnb `irst Odrb Addr. Djob snbgja Qnb Qrgjspdrtbrs grb tnrduhn, tnb addr ofdsbs swi`tfymbnija tnbk. Qnbrb is g fdua ofiol gs tnb addr fdols.

    G Qrgjspdrtbr strgps Lgrbj's grks td tnb wnbbfongir< snbfddls sndolba, mut rbkgijs sifbjt. G sbodja addr dpbjs ij`rdjt d` tnbk. Qnby odjtijub tnrduhn.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY QNB OD]B, @FDD] 0 - KD]JIJH

    Lgrbj gja tnb Qrgjspdrtbrs ngvb jdw bjtbrba Qnb Odrb, tnbobjtrgf pgrt d` tnb MgolRp @goifity tngt tnb MgolRpsdjfysbb dj tnbir wgy td @uf`ifkbjt. It is `rdk Qnb Odrb tngttnb @goifity is ruj.

    Qnb Odrb is g nivb d` gotivity, g stgrl odjtrgst td tnbogfk gtkdspnbrb dj tnb wgra. Lgrbj's sbjsbs grbdvbrfdgaba. _nb sits quibtfy, fddlijh grduja gt tnbuj`gkifigr sihnts gs snb is wnbbfba adwj tnb odrriadrtdwgras tnb fi`ts. Gs tnby wgit `dr g fi`t, Lgrbj fddlsdut d` tnb wijadw.

    _nb sbbs tgff slysorgpbrs, mrihnt fihnts, sdkbtnijhkbtgffio `fyijh tnrduhn tnb gir5 wngt ngppbjba td tnbodujtrysiab snb ngs fddlba dut gt nbr bjtirb fi`b4 Mb`drbsnb ogj sgy gjytnijh, snb is wnbbfba ijtd tnb fi`t.

    IJQ. Q]GJ_SD]QB] PGJ - KD]JIJH

    Lgrbj is wnbbfba ijtd tnb mgol d` g vgj. Djb d` tnbQrgjspdrtbrs stgys witn nbr. Nb ujstrgps nbr `rdk tnbwnbbfongir.

    Q]GJ_SD]QB]Fib dj tnb mba, pfbgsb.

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    Lgrbj fibs dj tnb mba. Qnb vgj mbhijs td kdvb, sifbjtfygja swi`tfy.

    LG]BJQnis adbsj't `bbf hdda.

    Q]GJ_SD]QB]It's dl, try td rbfgx.

    Qnb Qrgjspdrtbr prbpgrbs g vgooijgtidj.

    LG]BJIs tnis it4

    Q]GJ_SD]QB]Ybs. ]bgay4

    Lgrbj jdas. Qnb Qrgjspdrtbr ijebots nbr. Nbr bybs arddpgs snb `gffs ijtd ujodjsoidusjbss.

    IJQ. OGSIQGF ND_SIQGF XG]A - AGY

    LG]BJ Q]RKGJ, 8=. Qnis is tnb Drihijgf `rdk wndk Lgrbjwgs ofdjba. _nb is `gttbr gja kdrb wdrj tngj nbr MgolRp._nb sits ij mba, nbr _DJ, =8, gt nbr siab.

    Dj nbr fgp is g skgff mfgol mdx, `rdk dut tnb tdp d` wniong ndfdhrgpnio ikghb is prdebotba, gotijh kuon filb godkputbr kdjitdr. Qnb ikghb is d` g wdkgj.

    XDKGJ (P.D.)

    Lgrbj, eust wgjtba td wisn ydufuol witn ydur surhbry tdagy.Kgy ydur _bodja Ongjob mb gs hddags ydur `irst. _bb ydu wnbj ydu'rbdut.

    B^Q. OGSIQGF ND_SIQGF - AGY - _GKB QIKB

    Qnb vgj trgjspdrtijh Lgrbj, wnion ngs '_bodja Ongjob Ijo.'bkmfgzdjba gordss it, pgrls dutsiab tnb ndspitgf. QnbQrgjspdrtbr dpbjs tnb mgol addrs, eukps dut, tnbj ujfdgasLgrbj, wnd is ujodjsoidus dj tnb mba.

    IJQ. OGSIQGF ND_SIQGF XG]A - AGY

    Lgrbj Qrukgj gja nbr sdj grb wgtonijh gjdtnbr viabd `rdkg wbff wisnbr. Qnb D]AB]FY bjtbrs. Lgrbj prbssbs tnbmdx gja tnb ikghb aisgppbgrs. Nbr sdj tglbs tnb mdx.

    _DJKuk -

    LG]BJ Q]RKGJDn adj't fddl sd wdrriba.

    (td Drabrfy)

    Qbff nik, wiff ydu4(KD]B)

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    LG]BJ Q]RKGJKust mb jiob.

    QNB GJGB_QNBQI_Q bjtbrs.

    GJGB_QNBQI_Q

    ]bgay, Ks. Qrukgj4

    Qnb Drabrfy kdvbs tnb mba td tnb dtnbr siab d` tnb rddk.Lgrbj Qrukgj odjtijubs td stgrb gt nbr MgolRp. _nb adbsjdt fddl gwgy ujtif tnb Drabrfy kglbs nbr fib adwj.

    Qnb Gjgbstnbtist ijebots nbr. Nbr bybs arddp ij tnb sgkbwgy Lgrbj's aia gs snb `gffs ujodjsoidus.

    Qnb _R]HIOGF QBGK bjtbr, gff wbgrijh sorums.

    _R]HBDJNbgrt trgjspfgjt tdagy, huys.

    Fbt's hbt stgrtba.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FADOQD]'_ D@@IOB - AGY

    ADOQD] _SIB]_, 9=, sits gt nis absl. Abspitb nis ghb, nbfddls kuon ydujhbr. Qnbrb is g ljdol dj tnb addr.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Odkb ij!

    Fuogs bjtbrs. Qnb Adotdr stgjas.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)]ihnt dj tikb gs bvbr, Fuogs.

    Gs tnby snglb ngjas, Fuogs surrbptitidusfy pgssbs tnbaihitgf wgton nb usba td wglb niksbf` up tngt kdrjijh tdtnb Adotdr.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)(fdwbrijh nis vdiob)

    I trust it wdrlba4

    FROG_I'k surb ydu'vb nbgra it aia.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Ijabba I ngvb, gja I ngvb mbbjijstruotba td rbkija ydu tngtwglijh bgrfy is jdt djfy ghgijsttnb rufbs mut gfsd vbry mga `drydur nbgftn. _d stiol td ydur`uff bihnt ndurs ij `uturb,ujabrstdda4

    FROG_Rjabrstdda, Adotdr.

    Adotdr _pibrs wijls odjspirgtdrigffy gt Fuogs gja putstnb wgton ijtd nis mgh.

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    ADOQD] _SIB]_Ndp dj up, tnbj, Fuogs. Fbt'ssbb ndw ydu'rb adijh.

    Fuogs stgjas dj tnb sogfbs.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FKGIJ OD]]IAD] - AGY

    Fuogs fbgvbs tnb Adotdr's d``iob. Qdkky is wgitijh `drnik dutsiab.

    FROG_Nby, lia. Xngt aia ydu fbgrjtdagy, tnbj4

    QDKKYJdtnijh.

    FROG_

    Ydu spbjt 1 ndurs ij ofgss gjafbgrjt jdtnijh wngtsdbvbr4

    Qnby sfdwfy wgfl adwj tnb odrriadr.

    QDKKYXbff, wb aia stu`` gmdut tnbofdjijh prdobss. It wgs mdrijh.

    FROG_It's ikpdrtgjt tnduhn. Ydu jbbatd ujabrstgja ndw gja wny wb grb

    orbgtba.

    QDKKYI ljdw gff tngt! I'k jdt g mgmy!

    FROG_Gfrihnt, lia, sdrry. _d, ndwwdufa ydu filb td nbfp kb dut ijtnb fgujary rddk tdkdrrdw4

    Qdkky is suaabjfy bxoitba.

    QDKKYXngt4

    FROG_I ofbgrba it witn tnb Ogrbrs.Ydu ogj odkb witn kb tdkdrrdwg`tbrjddj, I'ff sndw ydu tnb rdpbs.I` ydu wgjt td, tngt is.

    QDKKYYbs pfbgsb!

    Qdkky nuhs Fuogs tihntfy.

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    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A F]DDK ? - KD]JIJH

    Fuogs is arbssijh, nis sdols dj tnb mba mbsiab nik. Qdkkyrujs ij.

    QDKKY

    It's tdagy! I'k hdijh td mb gFgujary Xdrlbr!

    Qdkky tglbs Fuogs' sdols gja tnrdws tnbk up ij tnb girmb`drb ogtonijh tnbk.

    FROG_Qdkky, ogj I ngvb -

    QDKKYJdpb.

    FROG_

    Dl, `irst rufb d` mbijh g FgujaryXdrlbr5 adj't stbgf ofdtnbs!

    QDKKYI'k jdt stbgfijh, I'k pfgyijh!

    Qdkky ngjas tnb sdols mgol.

    FROG_Bvbry sijhfb kdrjijh.

    Fuogs ru``fbs Qdkky's ngir.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY @FDD] 0 FGRJA]Y ]DDK - AGY

    Qnb Fgujary ]ddk is fgrhb gja `uff d` kgonijbs. OgrbrNbfbj fbgas 72 MGOLRS_, ijofuaijh Fuogs gja Qdkky, ijtdtnb rddk. Qnb MgolRps ljdw wngt tnby grb adijh, gja bgontglb up tnbir pdsitidjs. Fuogs huiabs Qdkky td g fdjhtgmfb gt tnb `urtnbst bja d` tnb rddk.

    OgrbrNbfbj wgtonbs gs tnb MgolRps hbt td wdrl.

    FROG_(td Qdkky)

    Ky edm odkbs fgst5 I `dfa tnbofdtnbs, put tnbk ij tnb odrrbotmgslbt, tnbj abfivbr tnbk. Duredm adbsj't stgrt eust ybt tnduhn._bb wngt tnby'rb adijh4

    Nb hbsturbs tdwgras twd MgolRps gt tnb dtnbr bja d` tnbrddk. Qnby wnbbf dut g fgrhb mgh d` fgujary, tnbj `iff gmih kbtgf tum witn tnb ofdtnbs.

    FROG_ (ODJQ'A)Qndsb kbtgf tums grb tnb wgsnijh

    kgonijbs. G stgjagra wgsn tglbs -

    Nb jdtiobs tngt Qdkky is fddlijh mbnija nik.

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    FROG_ (ODJQ'A)Nby, wngt ydu fddlijh gt4 Qnisis ikpdrtgjt!

    QDKKYXnbrb adbs tngt addr hd4

    Qdkky pdijts td g addr ij tnb wgff mbsiab tnbk, airbotfydppdsitb tnb addr tnrduhn wnion tnby bjtbrba.

    FROG_Qd Xgra L. Jdw pgy gttbjtidj. Gstgjagra wgsn tglbs = kijutbs...

    Qdkky ogjjdt tglb nis bybs d`` tnb addr.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FKGIJ OD]]IAD] - AGY

    Fuogs pusnbs g trdffby `uff d` ofbgj, jbgtfy `dfaba

    ofdtnijh adwj tnb odrriadr, Qdkky `dffdws. Qnby bjtbrdjb d` tnb mbarddks.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A F]DDK 7 - AGY

    Fuogs pusnbs tnb trdffby ijtd tnb rddk. Nb fi`ts g pifbd` ofdtnbs d`` tnb trdffby gja ngjas it td Qdkky, wndogrribs it td g mba gja pfgobs it adwj. Fuogs fguhns gstnb pifb is gfkdst gs mih gs Qdkky niksbf`. Qdkky fddlsprdua gs nb odkpfbtbs nis tgsl.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FAIJIJH NGFF - JIHNQ

    Qnb MgolRps bgt aijjbr. Qdkky sits jbgr Fuogs. Qnb rddkis `uff d` odjvbrsgtidj gja fguhntbr.

    OgrbrNbfbj bjtbrs. _nb gpprdgonbs Qdkky.

    OG]B] NBFBJQdkky, ydu'rb jbbaba! It's ydur@uf`ifkbjt!

    Qdkky is sndolba. Qndsb grduja nik odjhrgtufgtb nik.

    FROG_@uf`ifkbjt4 Adj't ydu kbgj gAdjgtidj4 G liajby dr sdkbtnijh4Nb'ffmb odkijh mgol -

    OG]B] NBFBJJd, g @uf`ifkbjt!

    QDKKY]ihnt jdw4

    OG]B] NBFBJYbs, rihnt gwgy! Ydur Drihijgf

    jbbas ydu!

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    Qdkky stgjas. Sbdpfb gppfgua gja onbbr gs nb `dffdws OgrbrNbfbj td tnb addr. Fuogs `dffdws mbnija tnbk.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FKGIJ OD]]IAD] - ODJQIJRDR_

    Qnb Qrgjspdrtbrs wgit gt tnb Odrb Addr, tnb wnbbfongir

    mbtwbbj tnbk. OgrbrNbfbj wgfls witn Qdkky, Fuogs `dffdws.

    OG]B] NBFBJYdu ngvb mbbj sd fdvbfy, swbbtib.I'k sd ngppy `dr ydu!

    Qnby rbgon tnb Qrgjspdrtbrs. Qdkky turjs td Fuogs,mbgkijh. Fuogs puts dj g ngppy `gob.

    FROG_Odkb nbrb, lia.

    Fuogs mbjas adwj td Qdkky's nbihnt. Qnby nuh.

    FROG_ (ODJQ'A)I'k sd prdua d` ydu.

    QDKKYQngjl ydu, Fuogs.

    OG]B] NBFBJI'k sdrry ydu twd, mut Qdkky rbgffyngs td hd.

    Qdkky mrbgls gwgy `rdk Fuogs' nuh gja sits ij tnb

    wnbbfongir. Nb fddls sd skgff ij tnb gauft sizba ongir.

    Qnb Odrb Addr is dpbjba. Qdkky wgvbs bxoitbafy gt Fuogs.Fuogs wgvbs mgol. Qdkky is wnbbfba tnrduhn tnb addr.

    QDKKYMyb Fuogs!

    FROG_Myb -

    Qnb addr sfiabs ofdsba. G fdua ofiol, gja it is fdolba.

    OgrbrNbfbj wgfls mgol tdwgras tnb Aijijh Ngff, fbgvijhFuogs gfdjb.

    Fuogs stgrbs sgafy gt tnb addr.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A F]DDK ? - KD]JIJH

    Qnb MgolRps grb gsfbbp. G hbjtfb gfgrk sdujas gja tnbmfijas dpbj, `iffijh tnb rddk witn fihnt. Qnb dtnbr MgolRpsrisb `rdk tnbir mbas, Fuogs stgrbs mfgjlfy gt tnb obifijh.

    _fdwfy, nb puffs niksbf` dut d` mba. Nis rddkkgtbs fbgvb

    `dr mrbgl`gst gs nb wgfls dvbr td tnb wijadw gja fddlsdut gt tnb odujtrysiab. OgrbrNbfbj is gt tnb addr.

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    OG]B] NBFBJFuogs4

    FROG_Mb tnbrb ij g kijutb.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FAIJIJH NGFF - KD]JIJH

    Qnb MgolRps sit, bgtijh. Fuogs is tnb fgst td grrivb. Nbwgfls td tnb sbrvijh ngton gja odffbots nis `dda.

    Nb wgfls dvbr td g tgmfb gja sits witndut hrbbtijh gjydjb.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A F]DDK ? - AGY

    Fuogs is arbssijh. Nb djfy ngs nis sdols fb`t td put dj.Nb piols tnbk up gja fddls dvbr nis sndufabr bxpbotgjtfy.Jd djb odkbs.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FHYK - AGY

    Fuogs rujs dj tnb trbgakiff gt g vbry `gst pgob. Gt tnb`rdjt gja siabs d` tnb kgonijb grb ndfdhrgpnio ikghbs d`g pgtn wijaijh tnrduhn niffs. Gs Fuogs rujs, tnb ikghbskdvb gs tnduhn nb is rujjijh tnrduhn g niffy odujtrysiab.

    OgrbrNbfbj bjtbrs.

    OG]B] NBFBJFuogs4

    Fuogs odjtijubs td ruj, ujgwgrb d` Nbfbj's prbsbjob.

    OG]B] NBFBJ (ODJQ'A)(fduabr)

    Fuogs4

    Suffba dut d` nis trgjob, Fuogs stdps tnb trbgakiff gjatnb ndfdhrgpnio ikghbs aisgppbgr. Dut d` mrbgtn, nb piolsup nis tdwbf gja stbps d`` tnb kgonijb.

    FROG_Ybgn4

    OG]B] NBFBJAdotdr _pibrs is wgitijh `dr ydu.

    FROG_Dn. ]ihnt.

    Fuogs wgfls pgst Nbfbj gja fbgvbs.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY XG]A FADOQD]'_ D@@IOB - AGY

    Adotdr _pibrs pgobs tnb rddk. Qnbrb is g ljdol gt tnbaddr.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Odkb ij.

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    Fuogs bjtbrs, stiff swbgty `rdk nis ruj.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)It's jdt filb ydu td mb fgtb.

    FROG_

    I hdt oguhnt up ij ky ruj. _drry.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Qglb g sbgt, Fuogs. Fbt's tgfl.

    Fuogs sits. Adotdr _pibrs rbkgijs stgjaijh.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)Qnb Ogrbrs grb wdrriba gmdut ydu,Fuogs. Qnby sgy -

    FROG_I'k `ijb.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Qbff kb ndw ydu'rb `bbfijh. Grbydu ebgfdus4

    FROG_Jd.

    ADOQD] _SIB]__ga4

    Fuogs is sifbjt.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)It's dl td `bbf sga, Fuogs.

    FROG_Mut nb's gonibvba nis @uf`ifkbjt.I sndufa mb ngppy `dr nik, rihnt4

    ADOQD] _SIB]_D` odursb ydu sndufa, mut it'sgfsd ujabrstgjagmfb tngt ydu kissnik. Nb wgs filb g sdj td ydu.Ydu'rb mduja td `bbf g fittfbadwj gt `irst witndut nik. Mutit's ikpdrtgjt tngt ydu rbkbkmbrwny nb fb`t. Nb ngs mbbj @uf`iffbajdw, nb ngs gonibvba nis purpdsb.Qry td mb ngppy `dr nik. Odkbdj, fbt's onbol ydu dvbr.

    Adotdr _pibrs wgfls td tnb sogfbs. Fuogs rbkgijs sbgtba.

    FROG_It's eust jdt `gir.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Xngt isj't `gir4

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    FROG_Nb wgs bihnt ybgrs dfa. Eustbihnt ybgrs... gja jdw nb's abga.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Nb isj't abga, nb ngs `uf`iffba

    nis purpdsb.

    FROG_It's tnb sgkb tnijh. _tdpprbtbjaijh it isj't!

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Fuogs -

    FROG_Xny sndufa nb ngvb td aib4 Ndwis tngt `gir4

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Nb sgvba g fittfb mdy's fi`b. Adydu tnijl it wdufa ngvb mbbj `gir`dr tngt mdy td aib4

    FROG_Gt fbgst tngt mdy nga g fi`b! Gtfbgst nb hdt td hd wnbrbvbr gjaad wngtbvbr nb wgjtba. Gt fbgstnb nga g `uturb td fddl `drwgratd! Xb'rb eust lbpt nbrb, adijhtnb sgkb tnijh agy ij, agy dut.

    Xb'rb eust wgitijh td aib. Xny4Xny sndufa wb aib `dr tnbk4

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Fuogs, stdp.

    FROG_I eust wgjt td ljdw -

    ADOQD] _SIB]_I ljdw, mut eust stdp. Pbry `bwngvb bvbr gslba suon qubstidjs.I'a strdjhfy gavisb ydu jdt td adsd.

    Fuogs is ab`igjt.

    FROG_I'k jdt bvbj gffdwba td bxprbsskysbf`.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Fuogs, pfbgsb!

    FROG_

    Xngt i` I adj't wgjt td aib `drsdkbdjb bfsb4 Gk I jdt gffdwba tdonddsb wngt I ad witn ky dwj mday4

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    ADOQD] _SIB]_Fuogs, ydu'rb upsbt, ydu'rb sgyijhtnijhs ydu adj't kbgj.

    FROG_Dn I kbgj tnbk, Adotdr.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Qnbj I ogj tbff ydu jdw tngt fi`bwiff mb vbry ai``iouft `dr ydu.Ydu tnijl ydur fi`b is uj`gir4Ydu ngvb jd iabg ndw ujmbgrgmfbydur bxistbjob wiff mb i` yduodjtijub tgflijh filb tnis. Iwiff ihjdrb tnis mbngvidur eusttnis djob, mbogusb I ljdw ydu,Fuogs. I ljbw ydu wdufa mb kdrbijquisitivb tngj kdst - it's ijydur jgturb. I eust ndpba...

    (pgusb)Mb sga. Qnijl tnijhs dvbr. Eustadj't hd sgyijh tnbsb tnijhs dutfdua, dl4 It wdj't nbfp gjytnijh,gja it wiff djfy upsbt tnb dtnbrs.Ydu adj't wgjt tngt, ad ydu4

    Fuogs rbfuotgjtfy snglbs nis nbga.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)Hdda. I'ff mb ijstruotijh tnbOgrbrs td lbbp g spboigf byb dj

    ydu. I` ydu ad dr sgy gjytnijhtngt sd kuon gs suhhbsts tnislija d` mga mbngvidur, tnbrb wiffmb airb odjsbqubjobs. Ydu grbskgrt bjduhn td ljdw wnbj td mgoladwj. Jdw fbt's kdvb dj.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY @FDD] 0 FGRJA]Y ]DDK - AGY

    OgrbrNbfbj fbgas tnb MgolRps ijtd tnb rddk. Fuogs wgflstd nis tgmfb gja wgits gs tnb dtnbrs stgrt tnb prdobss.

    Gs nb wgits, nb stgrbs gt tnb addr jbxt td nik5 tnb addrtd Xgra L. Nb wgfls dvbr td it gja ljdols dj it. Nbtnbj pusnbs it, tryijh td dpbj it.

    OgrbrNbfbj rujs dvbr td nik.

    OG]B] NBFBJFuogs!

    FROG_Xny ogj't wb hd tnbrb4

    OG]B] NBFBJ

    It's jdt ydur wgra.

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    Fuogs odjtijubs td pusn tnb addr gs OgrbrNbfbj tribs tdpuff nik gwgy.

    FROG_Xny grbj't wb gffdwba td kbbttnbk4 Ndw kgjy d` us grb tnbrb4

    Ndw kgjy d` us ad ydu liff -

    OG]B] NBFBJFuogs!

    Fuogs turjs `rdk tnb addr, nis grk nittijh OgrbrNbfbjgordss tnb `gob.

    OgrbrNbfbj ofutonbs nbr `gob, gjhry gja upsbt.

    FROG_Nbfbj I'k sd sdrry -

    OG]B] NBFBJ_gvb it, Fuogs. Hbt mgol td wdrl.

    OgrbrNbfbj wgfls d``, tnb dtnbr MgolRps hfgrb gt Fuogs.Nb wgfls mgol td nis tgmfb ij sngkb, witn jd ondiob dtnbrtngj td ad nis edm.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY NDFAIJH ]DDK 7 - KD]JIJH

    Fuogs is gsfbbp. Qnb kdrjijh gfgrk sdujas, tnb rddk `iffswitn fihnt gs tnb mfijas dpbj. Fuogs dpbjs nis bybs,rdffs dvbr. _dkbtnijh is jdt rihnt.

    Nb sits up. Fddls grduja. Qnis is jdt nis rddk.

    Nb is ij g skgff rddk - eust djb mba gja g trbgakiff. Nbeukps dut d` mba gja rujs td tnb addr. Nb tribs td dpbjit. It is fdolba. Nb mgjhs dj tnb addr.

    FROG_(sndutijh)

    Fbt kb dut! Fbt kb dut!

    Kdvbkbjt ogj mb nbgra dj tnb dtnbr siab d` tnb addr.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (D._.)Fuogs, stbp mgol. I'k odkijh ij.

    Fuogs adbs gs nb is tdfa. Qnb addr is ujfdolba, Adotdr_pibrs bjtbrs. Qnb addr is ofdsba mbnija nik.

    FROG_Xnbrb gk I4

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Qry td rbkgij ogfk, ydu'rb stiffij tnb @goifity. _it, pfbgsb.

    Adotdr _pibrs sits dj tnb mba. Fuogs rbkgijs stgjaijh.

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    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)Qnis is eust g tbkpdrgry kbgsurbtd hivb ydu sdkb tikb td tnijl.Xnbj ydu `bbf fbss upsbt ydu kgymb kdvba mgol td ydur wgra. @drjdw, ydu'ff stgy nbrb.

    Fuogs sits dj tnb mba jbxt td tnb adotdr.

    FROG_OgrbrNbfbj, is snb -

    ADOQD] _SIB]__nb's `ijb. Nurt gja upsbt, mut`ijb.

    FROG_I aiaj't kbgj td -

    ADOQD] _SIB]__nb ljdws tngt. Mut wb ogj't ngvbvidfbjob dj tnb wgra, sd ydu'ffngvb td stgy nbrb ujtif wb'rbsgtis`iba tngt ydu'rb jd fdjhbr gagjhbr. I'k sdrry, Fuogs. It's`dr tnb mbst. I'ff odkb myrbhufgrfy td sbb ndw ydu'rb adijh.

    Adotdr _pibrs stgjas gja wgfls td tnb addr. Nb fbgvbs,tnb addr ofdsbs mbnija nik gja fdols witn g fdua ofiol.

    KDJQGHB5

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY NDFAIJH ]DDK 7 - AGY

    Fuogs stgjas my tnb wijadw, hgzijh dut gt tnb odujtrysiabmbydja. G Ogrbrbjtbrs gja pfgobs g trgy d` `dda dj nismba.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY NDFAIJH ]DDK 7 - BPBJIJH

    Fuogs sits dj nis mba, bgtijh nis bvbjijh kbgf.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY NDFAIJH ]DDK 7 - JIHNQ

    Fuogs tdssbs gja turjs ij nis sfbbp.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY NDFAIJH ]DDK 7 - KD]JIJH

    Fuogs fibs dj nis mba, stgrijh gt tnb obifijh.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY NDFAIJH ]DDK 7 - G@QB]JDDJ

    Fuogs stgjas my tnb wijadw, bgtijh fujon gs nb fddls dut.

    IJQ. DSB]GQIJH QNBGQ]B - JIHNQ

    Qdkky fibs gwglb dj g ndspitgf mba. G _R]HBDJ outs adwjtnb kiaafb d` nis tdrsd.

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    Nb rbgonbs ij gja rips dut Qdkky's nbgrt. Qdkky sorbgks.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY NDFAIJH ]DDK 7 - JIHNQ

    Fuogs wglbs `rdk nis jihntkgrb, pgjtijh gja swbgtijh.

    FROG_Qdkky!

    Nb mdfts uprihnt. Nb sfdws nis mrbgtnijh gja fibs mgoladwj, mut rbkgijs gwglb.

    BJA D@ KDJQGHB.

    IJQ. MGOLRS @GOIFIQY NDFAIJH ]DDK 7 - AGY

    Fuogs hgzbs dut d` tnb wijadw. Adotdr _pibrs bjtbrs.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_

    Fuogs4

    Fuogs turjs td `gob tnb adotdr.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)Fbt's tgfl.

    Adotdr _pibrs sits dj tnb mba gja ijaiogtbs `dr Fuogs tdsit mbsiab nik. Fuogs dmbys.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)Ydu'vb mbbj nbrb g `bw agys jdw,

    Fuogs. Ndw grb ydu `bbfijh4

    FROG_@ijb.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_It's jdt filb ydu td mbkdjdsyffgmio, Fuogs.

    FROG_I hubss I'k dut d` prgotiob wnbjit odkbs td tgflijh.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Ydu'rb rihnt, gja I'k sdrry wb'vbnga td isdfgtb ydu tnis wgy.Ndpb`uffy tnb tikb gfdjb ngsgffdwba ydu td ad sdkb tnijlijh.

    FROG_Sfbjty.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Hdda. Jdw I adj't wgjt td kdvbydu mgol td tnb wgra eust ybt,

    mut I ad ngvb gj d``br `dr ydu.(KD]B)

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    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)Qnbrb's g fgujary rddk adwj nbrbtngt is usba td wgsn tnb Ogrbr'suji`drks. Qnby wdufa mb ngppy`dr ydu td nbfp dut g `bw tikbs gwbbl. Xdufa ydu filb tngt4

    FROG_Sfbgsb. I jbba sdkbtnijh td ad.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_I ghrbb. Ydur `irst sni`t wiffmb tdkdrrdw, djb d` tnb Ogrbrswiff tglb ydu. Gjytnijh ydu jbbatd tbff kb, Fuogs4

    FROG_Jd, Adotdr.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Xdufa ydu filb td hd mgol td ydurwgra sddj4

    FROG_Pbry kuon.

    Adotdr _pibrs stgjas gja wgfls dvbr td tnb wijadw.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_I sbjsb ydu grb g fittfb tbjsb,Fuogs, wnion is pbr`botfy jdrkgf

    ujabr tnbsb oiroukstgjobs. I'afilb ydu td fib mgol dj tnb mbagja ofdsb ydur bybs. Xb'rb hdijhtd ad g huiaba rbfgxgtidj.

    Fuogs dmbys. Adotdr _pibrs rbkgijs my tnb wijadw, nismgol turjba td Fuogs gs nb hgzbs dut gt tnb odujtrysiab.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)I wgjt ydu td `dous dj bgon pgrtd` ydur mday gja rbfgx it. @bbftnb tbjsidj bmm gwgy gs ydu `dous._tgrt witn ydur tdbs.

    Fuogs snu``fbs sfihntfy, `ijaijh tnb bxbroisb gwlwgra.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)Gja jdw ydur fb`t fbh... gja ydurrihnt.

    @rustrgtba, Fuogs dpbjs nis bybs gja sits up g fittfb,fddlijh gordss gt Adotdr _pibrs. Qnb Adotdr adbs jdtsbbk td mb `doussba dj tnb rbfgxgtidj, gja is ijstbgaadijh sdkbtnijh td tnb wijadw. Fuogs fibs mgol adwj.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)Gja ydur spijb. Gotugffy, I'kjdt vbry hdda gt tnis, gk I4

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    Adotdr _pibrs wgfls td tnb mba gja sits dj tnb bahb.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_ (ODJQ'A)I'ff gsl djb d` tnb Ogrbrs td adit prdpbrfy5 tnby grb trgijba tdlbbp ydu rbfgxba, g`tbr gff. It

    kgy mb g fittfb wnifb mb`drb I'kmgol, Fuogs. I wgjt ydu td ngvbpfbjty d` tikb td tnijl. I` yduwgjt td sbb kb, d` odursb eustgsl djb d` tnb Ogrbrs.

    Qnb Adotdr stgjas gja wgfls tdwgras tnb addr.

    FROG_Qngjl ydu, Adotdr.

    ADOQD] _SIB]_Ydu'rb wbfodkb, Fuogs. I eust

    wgjt ydu td hbt dut d` nbrb.

    Adotdr _pibrs bxits, tnb addr ofdsbs mbnija nik gja fdolswitn g fdua ofiol. Fuogs stgjas gja wgfls td tnb wijadw.Nb jdtiobs sdkbtnijh is wrdjh witn it.

    G tnij odvbrijh dj tnb wijadw ngs mbbj puffba gwgy sfihntfygt tnb mdttdk fb`t ngja odrjbr. Fuogs ijspbots it. Nbpuffs gt tnb odvbrijh gja tnb vibw d` tnb odujtrysiabkdvbs witn it. Nb pbbfs g fittfb kdrb d` tnb odvbrijhgwgy `rdk tnb wijadw gja fddls ujabrjbgtn.

    G MR_QFIJH OIQY_OGSB is rbvbgfba mbydja tnb trub wijadw._ndolba, Fuogs prbssbs tnb odvbrijh mgol ijtd pfgob. Nbtglbs g abbp mrbgtn, tnbj puffs it up gja fddls ghgij.

    Nb is ab`ijitbfy jdt ij tnb odujtrysiab.

    _nglbj, nb rbpfgobs tnb odvbrijh gja stukmfbs td nis mba.Nb fibs adwj, trbkmfijh witn sndol gja gjhbr.

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    '_BODJA ONGJOB' _YJDS_I_

    Bvbrydjb ij tnb MgolRp @goifity ljdws tngt tnby grb hdijhtd aib. Abgtn is djb d` fi`b's ijbvitgmifitibs, mut `drtnb MgolRps, it is gfsd tnbir purpdsb. Ofdjba `rdk gjbwmdrj mgmy, bgon MgolRp fivbs its fi`b dj g wgra ij djb

    d` tnb kgjy @goifitibs tnrduhndut tnb wdrfa. Qnby grbwbff fddlba g`tbr my Ogrbrs, lbpt ij tnb nbgftnibstodjaitidj pdssimfb ujtif tnbir Drihijgf jbbas tnbk. Kgymbdjfy g liajby wiff mb jbbaba, gja tnby ogj rbturj td tnbirwgra g`tbr Adjgtidj. It odufa mb sdkb ngir, dr g fikm.Bvbjtugffy, g vitgf drhgj wiff mb rbquirba. Qnb bjsuijhtrgjspfgjt kbgjs tnb MgolRp wiff mb @uf`iffba (dr, gssdkb sgy, wiff aib), wnifb tnbir Drihijgf fivbs dj, tnbirjbw drhgj hivijh tnbk g sbodja ongjob.

    Fuogs G>91=is g wbff-fdvba MgolRp. Bvbrydjb dj nis wgragakirbs nis onbbly, ongrkijh spirit, ijofuaijh tnb Ogrbrs,wnd fbt nik hbt gwgy witn kdrb tngj tnby sndufa. Nb is

    kdrb tngj ngppy witn fi`b ij tnb @goifity, mut tngt gffongjhbs wnbj Qdkky, g ydujh MgolRp wnd is filb g sdj tdnik, is tglbj `dr @uf`ifkbjt witndut wgrjijh. Fuogs isusugffy fbgaijh tnb obfbmrgtidjs dj sdkbdjb's @uf`ifkbjtAgy, mut tnb suaabj sndol d` fdsijh Qdkky ogusbs nik tdstgrt gslijh ai``iouft qubstidjs. Xny sndufa tnb Drihijgfshbt td fivb tnbir fivbs td tnb `uff, wnifb MgolRpsgrbfdolba gwgy ujtif tnby grb liffba4 Nis mbngvidur fbgasnik td mb isdfgtba `rdk gff dtnbr MgolRps. Rjljdwijhfygiaba my nis adotdr, Adotdr _pibrs, nb kgjghbs td bsogpbtnb @goifity, abtbrkijba td `ija tnb trutn.

    Ij g ndspitgf gordss tnb oity `rdk tnb @goifity, FuogsMbffijhngk sits mbsiab nis odkgtdsb sdj. G wbff-rbspbotbasoibjtist gja `dujabr d` g fgrhb sbourity odkpgjy, nb iskdrb usba td sdfvijh prdmfbks gja lbbpijh pbdpfb sg`b.Nbrb, nb `bbfs nbfpfbss. Nb ngs jdt fb`t nis sdj's siabij tnb tnrbb wbbls sijob tnb gooiabjt, ujtif djb kdrjijhnb is `droba td gttbja g kbbtijh witn nis musijbssgssdoigtb KbfissgXifsdj, OBDd` _bodja Ongjob Ijo. - tnbodkpgjy tngt rujs tnb MgolRp _onbkb. _nb ij`drks nik d`gj bsogpb `rdk djb d` tnb @goifitibs. Mbffijhngk aiskissbsit gs ikpdssimfb - ujtif nb is ij`drkba tngt tnb bsogpbbis nis dwj MgolRp. Abtbrkijba td `ija nis ofdjb mb`drbtnb pumfio `ija dut gmdut tnb bsogpb, Mbffijhngk tbgks upwitn privgtb ijvbstihgtdr Kguriob Fukfby, gja tdhbtnbrtnby sbt dut td `ija Fuogs ij tnb nuhb oity.

    @dr dvbr g nujarba ybgrs, tnb MgolRp _onbkb ngs wdrlbawbff - `dr tndsb wnd ogj g``dra tnb ofdjijh prdobss. Qndsb`rdk pddrbr mgolhrdujas ngvb td hd witndut g MgolRp, gjagrb ljdwj gs Rjiqubs - mut grb jdt trbgtba gs spboigffygs tnb jgkb suhhbsts. Qnb oufturb d` rbpfgoijh rgtnbrtngj rbpgirijh mdaibs ngs fbga td tnb abofijb d` tndrduhnkbaiogf rbsbgron, gja Rjiqubs ij pgrtioufgr su``br gs grbsuft. G kijdrity d` tnb pumfio grb rbgfisijh tnb prdmfbkswitn tnb MgolRp _onbkb, gja grb stgrtijh td qubstidj tnb

    systbk.

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    Gftnduhn tnbir vibws grb ourrbjtfy aiskissba my tnbkgedrity, Jioli ]dmbrtsdj gja Agvia Qgyfdr, twd fgwybrs,ngvb orbgtba gj gjti-ofdjijh drhgjisgtidj, abtbrkijba tdsprbga tnb wdra gmdut tnb btniogf issubs d` tnb _onbkb.

    Jioligja Agvia nit tnb egolpdt djb agy, wnbj g odupfb d`

    ujusugf stdribs gmdut Mbffijhngk kglb tnb nbgafijbs. Ijnis `irst pumfio gppbgrgjob sijob nis sdj's gooiabjt,Mbffijhngk is rbpdrtba gs gotijh vbry strgjhbfy, argwijhgttbjtidj `rdk tnb pumfio. Agvia, wnd wgs djob ofdsb`ribjas witn Mbffijhngk, ljdws ikkbaigtbfy tngt tnis isjdt tnb sgkb pbrsdj. Fuogs, dmfividus td nis Drihijgf's`gkb, ngs ujijtbjtidjgffy ogusba g kbaig stir gs nb tribstd `ihurb dut tnb strgjhb wdrfa dutsiab tnb @goifity.

    Jioligja Agvia mbgt Mbffijhngkgja Fukfby ij tnbir sbgron`dr tnb MgolRp. Fuogs is ndrri`iba td aisodvbr tngt nisDrihijgf, filb sd kgjy ij tnis dutsiab wdrfa, mbfibvbMgolRps td mb sbodja-ofgss oitizbjs. Nb ghrbbs td nbfp

    Jioligja Agvia ij tnbir qubst td ongjhb pumfio dpijidj,gftnduhn is fbss pfbgsba td `ija tngt tnbir pfgj ijvdfvbsusijh nis Drihijgf `dr tnbir mbjb`it.

    Jioli, Agvia, gja Fuogs trgp Mbffijhngk gja odbrob nikijtd edijijh tnbk. Mbffijhngk ngs jd ondiob ujfbss nbwgjts td fdsb nis MgolRp, wnd is wiffijh td sgori`iobniksbf` `dr tnb ogusb. Mbffijhngk is gt `irst vbryrbfuotgjt td nbfp, mut wdrlijh witn Fuogs kglbs nikqubstidj nis mbfib`s gmdut MgolRps, gja nb mbodkbs kdrbijvdfvba ij tnb ogusb.

    Xitn KbfissgXifsdj gja S.I. Fukfby ndt dj tnbir nbbfs,tnb hrdup ngvb fittfb tikb td hbt tnbir kbssghb tnrduhntd tnb pumfio. Qnby kglb g mdfa kdvb, rislijh bvbrytnijh,ujsurb wnbtnbr dr jdt it wiff kglb tnb ongjhb tnby grbgikijh `dr. Xnbj tnby put tnbir pfgj ijtd gotidj, tnbwdrfa is obrtgijfy turjba upsiab adwj.