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RMEAP Fall 2010 Grade 4 Narrative Writing Scoring Guides for Ideas,
Organization, Style, and Conventions
Mic
hig
an
Ed
uca
tio
nal
Ass
ess
men
t P
rog
ram
An
aly
tic
Ru
bri
c N
arr
ati
ve W
riti
ng
Gra
des
4 a
nd
7
01
23
Ideas
(po
ints
do
ub
led
)
Idea
s ar
e not
focu
sed o
n t
he
task
and/o
r ar
e undev
eloped
.
Tel
ls a
sto
ry w
ith idea
s th
at
are
min
imal
ly f
ocu
sed o
n
the
topic
and d
evel
oped
w
ith lim
ited
and/o
r gen
eral
det
ails
.
Tel
ls a
sto
ry w
ith idea
s th
at
are
som
ewhat
focu
sed o
n
the
topic
and a
re d
evel
oped
w
ith a
mix
of
spec
ific
and/o
rgen
eral
det
ails
.
Tel
ls a
sto
ry w
ith idea
s th
at a
re
clea
rly
focu
sed o
n t
he
topic
and
are
thoro
ughly
dev
eloped
with
spec
ific
, re
leva
nt
det
ails
.
Org
an
izati
on
No o
rgan
izat
ion
evid
ent.
Org
aniz
atio
n
and
connec
tions
bet
wee
n idea
s an
d/o
r ev
ents
are
wea
k.
Org
aniz
atio
n a
nd
connec
tions
bet
wee
n idea
s an
d/o
r ev
ents
are
logic
ally
se
quen
ced.
Org
aniz
atio
n a
nd c
onnec
tions
bet
wee
n idea
s an
d/o
r ev
ents
are
clea
r an
d logic
ally
seq
uen
ced.
Sty
le
Inef
fect
ive
use
of
languag
e fo
r th
e w
rite
r's
purp
ose
an
d a
udie
nce
.
Lim
ited
use
of
languag
e,
incl
udin
g lac
k of
variet
y in
w
ord
choic
e an
d s
ente
nce
s,
may
hin
der
support
for
the
write
r's
purp
ose
and
audie
nce
.
Adeq
uat
e co
mm
and o
f la
nguag
e, incl
udin
g
effe
ctiv
e w
ord
choic
e an
d
clea
r se
nte
nce
s, s
upport
s th
e w
rite
r's
purp
ose
and
audie
nce
.
Com
man
d o
f la
nguag
e, incl
udin
gef
fect
ive
and c
om
pel
ling w
ord
ch
oic
e an
d v
arie
d s
ente
nce
st
ruct
ure
, cl
early
support
s th
e w
rite
r's
purp
ose
and a
udie
nce
.
Co
nven
tio
ns
Inef
fect
ive
use
of
conve
ntions
of
Sta
ndar
d E
nglis
h*
for
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
spel
ling,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion.
Lim
ited
use
of
conve
ntions
of
Sta
ndar
d E
nglis
h* f
or
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
spel
ling,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion f
or
the
gra
de
leve
l.
Adeq
uat
e use
of
conve
ntions
of
Sta
ndar
d
Englis
h* f
or
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
spel
ling,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion f
or
the
gra
de
leve
l.
Consi
sten
t, a
ppro
priat
e use
of
conve
ntions
of
Sta
ndar
d
Englis
h* f
or
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
sp
ellin
g,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion f
or
the
gra
de
leve
l.
C
Bla
nk
Any
conditio
n c
ode
will
res
ult in a
sco
re o
f 0 f
or
all tr
aits
.
B
Ille
gib
le o
r w
ritt
en in a
lan
guag
e oth
er t
han
Englis
h
D
In
suff
icie
nt
to r
ate
* S
tandar
d E
nglis
h is
the
form
of Englis
h m
ost
wid
ely
acce
pte
d for
writing in s
chools
.
A
Off
-topic
1/2
4/1
1
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 4
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 5
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 6
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 7
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 9
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 10
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 11
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 12
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 14
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 16
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 18
Anchor Paper 1 Anchor Paper 6
Ideas 0 Ideas 2Organization 0 Organization 3Style 0 Style 3Conventions 1 Conventions 3
Anchor Paper 2 Anchor Paper 7
Ideas 1 Ideas 2Organization 1 Organization 2Style 1 Style 2Conventions 1 Conventions 2
Anchor Paper 3 Anchor Paper 8
Ideas 1 Ideas 2Organization 2 Organization 3Style 1 Style 2Conventions 2 Conventions 3
Anchor Paper 4 Anchor Paper 9
Ideas 1 Ideas 3Organization 2 Organization 3Style 2 Style 3Conventions 2 Conventions 2
Anchor Paper 5 Anchor Paper 10
Ideas 2 Ideas 3Organization 2 Organization 3Style 2 Style 3Conventions 2 Conventions 3
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 19
Mic
hig
an
Ed
uca
tio
nal
Ass
ess
men
t P
rog
ram
An
aly
tic
Ru
bri
c N
arr
ati
ve W
riti
ng
Gra
des
4 a
nd
7
01
23
Ideas
(po
ints
do
ub
led
)
Idea
s ar
e not
focu
sed o
n t
he
task
and/o
r ar
e undev
eloped
.
Tel
ls a
sto
ry w
ith idea
s th
at
are
min
imal
ly f
ocu
sed o
n
the
topic
and d
evel
oped
w
ith lim
ited
and/o
r gen
eral
det
ails
.
Tel
ls a
sto
ry w
ith idea
s th
at
are
som
ewhat
focu
sed o
n
the
topic
and a
re d
evel
oped
w
ith a
mix
of
spec
ific
and/o
rgen
eral
det
ails
.
Tel
ls a
sto
ry w
ith idea
s th
at a
re
clea
rly
focu
sed o
n t
he
topic
and
are
thoro
ughly
dev
eloped
with
spec
ific
, re
leva
nt
det
ails
.
Org
an
izati
on
No o
rgan
izat
ion
evid
ent.
Org
aniz
atio
n
and
connec
tions
bet
wee
n idea
s an
d/o
r ev
ents
are
wea
k.
Org
aniz
atio
n a
nd
connec
tions
bet
wee
n idea
s an
d/o
r ev
ents
are
logic
ally
se
quen
ced.
Org
aniz
atio
n a
nd c
onnec
tions
bet
wee
n idea
s an
d/o
r ev
ents
are
clea
r an
d logic
ally
seq
uen
ced.
Sty
le
Inef
fect
ive
use
of
languag
e fo
r th
e w
rite
r's
purp
ose
an
d a
udie
nce
.
Lim
ited
use
of
languag
e,
incl
udin
g lac
k of
variet
y in
w
ord
choic
e an
d s
ente
nce
s,
may
hin
der
support
for
the
write
r's
purp
ose
and
audie
nce
.
Adeq
uat
e co
mm
and o
f la
nguag
e, incl
udin
g
effe
ctiv
e w
ord
choic
e an
d
clea
r se
nte
nce
s, s
upport
s th
e w
rite
r's
purp
ose
and
audie
nce
.
Com
man
d o
f la
nguag
e, incl
udin
gef
fect
ive
and c
om
pel
ling w
ord
ch
oic
e an
d v
arie
d s
ente
nce
st
ruct
ure
, cl
early
support
s th
e w
rite
r's
purp
ose
and a
udie
nce
.
Co
nven
tio
ns
Inef
fect
ive
use
of
conve
ntions
of
Sta
ndar
d E
nglis
h*
for
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
spel
ling,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion.
Lim
ited
use
of
conve
ntions
of
Sta
ndar
d E
nglis
h* f
or
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
spel
ling,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion f
or
the
gra
de
leve
l.
Adeq
uat
e use
of
conve
ntions
of
Sta
ndar
d
Englis
h* f
or
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
spel
ling,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion f
or
the
gra
de
leve
l.
Consi
sten
t, a
ppro
priat
e use
of
conve
ntions
of
Sta
ndar
d
Englis
h* f
or
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
sp
ellin
g,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion f
or
the
gra
de
leve
l.
C
Bla
nk
Any
conditio
n c
ode
will
res
ult in a
sco
re o
f 0 f
or
all tr
aits
.
B
Ille
gib
le o
r w
ritt
en in a
lan
guag
e oth
er t
han
Englis
h
D
In
suff
icie
nt
to r
ate
* S
tandar
d E
nglis
h is
the
form
of Englis
h m
ost
wid
ely
acce
pte
d for
writing in s
chools
.
A
Off
-topic
1/2
4/1
1
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 4
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 6
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 7
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 8
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 10
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 11
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 12
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 13
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 15
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 16
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 18
Anchor Paper 1 Anchor Paper 6
Ideas 1 Ideas 1Organization 0 Organization 2Style 1 Style 1Conventions 1 Conventions 2
Anchor Paper 2 Anchor Paper 7
Ideas 1 Ideas 1Organization 1 Organization 2Style 1 Style 1Conventions 1 Conventions 2
Anchor Paper 3 Anchor Paper 8
Ideas 1 Ideas 2Organization 1 Organization 2Style 1 Style 3Conventions 1 Conventions 2
Anchor Paper 4 Anchor Paper 9
Ideas 2 Ideas 2Organization 1 Organization 3Style 2 Style 3Conventions 2 Conventions 3
Anchor Paper 5 Anchor Paper 10
Ideas 2 Ideas 3Organization 1 Organization 3Style 1 Style 3Conventions 2 Conventions 2
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 19
Mic
hig
an
Ed
uca
tio
nal
Ass
ess
men
t P
rog
ram
An
aly
tic
Ru
bri
c N
arr
ati
ve W
riti
ng
Gra
des
4 a
nd
7
01
23
Ideas
(po
ints
do
ub
led
)
Idea
s ar
e not
focu
sed o
n t
he
task
and/o
r ar
e undev
eloped
.
Tel
ls a
sto
ry w
ith idea
s th
at
are
min
imal
ly f
ocu
sed o
n
the
topic
and d
evel
oped
w
ith lim
ited
and/o
r gen
eral
det
ails
.
Tel
ls a
sto
ry w
ith idea
s th
at
are
som
ewhat
focu
sed o
n
the
topic
and a
re d
evel
oped
w
ith a
mix
of
spec
ific
and/o
rgen
eral
det
ails
.
Tel
ls a
sto
ry w
ith idea
s th
at a
re
clea
rly
focu
sed o
n t
he
topic
and
are
thoro
ughly
dev
eloped
with
spec
ific
, re
leva
nt
det
ails
.
Org
an
izati
on
No o
rgan
izat
ion
evid
ent.
Org
aniz
atio
n
and
connec
tions
bet
wee
n idea
s an
d/o
r ev
ents
are
wea
k.
Org
aniz
atio
n a
nd
connec
tions
bet
wee
n idea
s an
d/o
r ev
ents
are
logic
ally
se
quen
ced.
Org
aniz
atio
n a
nd c
onnec
tions
bet
wee
n idea
s an
d/o
r ev
ents
are
clea
r an
d logic
ally
seq
uen
ced.
Sty
le
Inef
fect
ive
use
of
languag
e fo
r th
e w
rite
r's
purp
ose
an
d a
udie
nce
.
Lim
ited
use
of
languag
e,
incl
udin
g lac
k of
variet
y in
w
ord
choic
e an
d s
ente
nce
s,
may
hin
der
support
for
the
write
r's
purp
ose
and
audie
nce
.
Adeq
uat
e co
mm
and o
f la
nguag
e, incl
udin
g
effe
ctiv
e w
ord
choic
e an
d
clea
r se
nte
nce
s, s
upport
s th
e w
rite
r's
purp
ose
and
audie
nce
.
Com
man
d o
f la
nguag
e, incl
udin
gef
fect
ive
and c
om
pel
ling w
ord
ch
oic
e an
d v
arie
d s
ente
nce
st
ruct
ure
, cl
early
support
s th
e w
rite
r's
purp
ose
and a
udie
nce
.
Co
nven
tio
ns
Inef
fect
ive
use
of
conve
ntions
of
Sta
ndar
d E
nglis
h*
for
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
spel
ling,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion.
Lim
ited
use
of
conve
ntions
of
Sta
ndar
d E
nglis
h* f
or
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
spel
ling,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion f
or
the
gra
de
leve
l.
Adeq
uat
e use
of
conve
ntions
of
Sta
ndar
d
Englis
h* f
or
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
spel
ling,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion f
or
the
gra
de
leve
l.
Consi
sten
t, a
ppro
priat
e use
of
conve
ntions
of
Sta
ndar
d
Englis
h* f
or
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
sp
ellin
g,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion f
or
the
gra
de
leve
l.
C
Bla
nk
Any
conditio
n c
ode
will
res
ult in a
sco
re o
f 0 f
or
all tr
aits
.
B
Ille
gib
le o
r w
ritt
en in a
lan
guag
e oth
er t
han
Englis
h
D
In
suff
icie
nt
to r
ate
* S
tandar
d E
nglis
h is
the
form
of Englis
h m
ost
wid
ely
acce
pte
d for
writing in s
chools
.
A
Off
-topic
1/2
4/1
1
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 4
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 5
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 6
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 7
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 9
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 10
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 11
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 12
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 14
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 16
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 18
Anchor Paper 1 Anchor Paper 6
Ideas 0 Ideas 3Organization 0 Organization 3Style 0 Style 2Conventions 0 Conventions 1
Anchor Paper 2 Anchor Paper 7
Ideas 0 Ideas 1Organization 0 Organization 2Style 0 Style 2Conventions 1 Conventions 1
Anchor Paper 3 Anchor Paper 8
Ideas 1 Ideas 2Organization 1 Organization 3Style 1 Style 2Conventions 2 Conventions 3
Anchor Paper 4 Anchor Paper 9
Ideas 2 Ideas 3Organization 2 Organization 3Style 1 Style 3Conventions 2 Conventions 3
Anchor Paper 5 Anchor Paper 10
Ideas 2 Ideas 3Organization 2 Organization 3Style 1 Style 3Conventions 2 Conventions 3
Writing - Grade 4 Released Items Fall 2010
MDE/MEAP RELEASED ITEMS 19
Mic
hig
an
Ed
uca
tio
nal
Ass
ess
men
t P
rog
ram
An
aly
tic
Ru
bri
c N
arr
ati
ve W
riti
ng
Gra
des
4 a
nd
7
01
23
Ideas
(po
ints
do
ub
led
)
Idea
s ar
e not
focu
sed o
n t
he
task
and/o
r ar
e undev
eloped
.
Tel
ls a
sto
ry w
ith idea
s th
at
are
min
imal
ly f
ocu
sed o
n
the
topic
and d
evel
oped
w
ith lim
ited
and/o
r gen
eral
det
ails
.
Tel
ls a
sto
ry w
ith idea
s th
at
are
som
ewhat
focu
sed o
n
the
topic
and a
re d
evel
oped
w
ith a
mix
of
spec
ific
and/o
rgen
eral
det
ails
.
Tel
ls a
sto
ry w
ith idea
s th
at a
re
clea
rly
focu
sed o
n t
he
topic
and
are
thoro
ughly
dev
eloped
with
spec
ific
, re
leva
nt
det
ails
.
Org
an
izati
on
No o
rgan
izat
ion
evid
ent.
Org
aniz
atio
n
and
connec
tions
bet
wee
n idea
s an
d/o
r ev
ents
are
wea
k.
Org
aniz
atio
n a
nd
connec
tions
bet
wee
n idea
s an
d/o
r ev
ents
are
logic
ally
se
quen
ced.
Org
aniz
atio
n a
nd c
onnec
tions
bet
wee
n idea
s an
d/o
r ev
ents
are
clea
r an
d logic
ally
seq
uen
ced.
Sty
le
Inef
fect
ive
use
of
languag
e fo
r th
e w
rite
r's
purp
ose
an
d a
udie
nce
.
Lim
ited
use
of
languag
e,
incl
udin
g lac
k of
variet
y in
w
ord
choic
e an
d s
ente
nce
s,
may
hin
der
support
for
the
write
r's
purp
ose
and
audie
nce
.
Adeq
uat
e co
mm
and o
f la
nguag
e, incl
udin
g
effe
ctiv
e w
ord
choic
e an
d
clea
r se
nte
nce
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udie
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nven
tio
ns
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fect
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use
of
conve
ntions
of
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ndar
d E
nglis
h*
for
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
spel
ling,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion.
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ited
use
of
conve
ntions
of
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ndar
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nglis
h* f
or
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
spel
ling,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion f
or
the
gra
de
leve
l.
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uat
e use
of
conve
ntions
of
Sta
ndar
d
Englis
h* f
or
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
spel
ling,
capital
izat
ion,
and
punct
uat
ion f
or
the
gra
de
leve
l.
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sten
t, a
ppro
priat
e use
of
conve
ntions
of
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ndar
d
Englis
h* f
or
gra
mm
ar,
usa
ge,
sp
ellin
g,
capital
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and
punct
uat
ion f
or
the
gra
de
leve
l.
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Bla
nk
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conditio
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ode
will
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sco
re o
f 0 f
or
all tr
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le o
r w
ritt
en in a
lan
guag
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er t
han
Englis
h
D
In
suff
icie
nt
to r
ate
* S
tandar
d E
nglis
h is
the
form
of Englis
h m
ost
wid
ely
acce
pte
d for
writing in s
chools
.
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-topic
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