Scientific Writing Task 3

Comments on "the Use of Immersive Virtual Reality In the Learning Sciences :

Digital Transformations of Teachers, Students, and Social Context" By Andini Indyanita

Structure

• The structure is clear and well classified.

• Every section contains the right-placed content.

Clarity

• The title is clear. It is explaining the summary of the article.

• The sentences used is not difficult to read.

Content

• The subject and purpose is clearly stated.

• The research conducted is well presented.

Understanding

• Content and structure of this article is easy to read and understand.