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2012 Michigan Community College Press Association Judging Form

Place of award: 

First Place Second Place Third Place Honorable Mention

Category: Sports feature

Headline/title of entry: Spartan basketball takes flight

Contestant’s name: Ehimare Arhebamen and Ian Gallagher 

College name: Schoolcraft College 

Judge’s comments: I can t decide what this story is about. Is it about the Carrier Classic

specifically?

(Well, no, because even though you devoted the first five paragraphs to it, you also told meabout the MSU-Duke game four days later.)

Is it about MSU basketball in general?

(Well, no, because MSU played two exhibition games before the North Carolina and Dukegames and two non-conference games after them [and before your publication date], and you didn’ t tell me about any of those. You also didn’ t tell me anything about MSU ’ s

 players.)

It s fun to write about a good Division I team, and you write well. It s more fun to readanything when you have some idea of what it is you re reading about. You didn t giveyour readers much help in that regard. 

— pcm