S3/4 Portrait EssayWell done!

These slides will help you complete your Portrait Essay.

Have your essay in front of you.

Use the help sheets to add extra bits to your essay.

Write out the extra bits to add to your essay on paper or save on a pen-drive and bring to class.

Then they can be added to the electronic copy of your essay once looked at by your teacher.

Your essay must be finished for the 23rd December 2010

How to use the slides

Slide 2 - follow each of the 10 steps to make sure you have written about every area you need to.

Slide 3 - Look at how to write a good thought you have in a clear sentence.

Slides 4,5,6 - Questions to ask yourself when looking at the portraits you have chosen.

There is a different section for each of the visual elements. For a successful essay you must write about each of the visual elements. Go through each question and if you have not answered the question in you essay already then answer it.

Slides 7,8,9 - Here are lots of describing words and Artist’s vocabulary. Put these words in your sentences.

There is a different word bank of each of the visual elements.

Look at the workbank for ‘Line’ when thinking about the questions for ‘Line’, for example.

Slide 10 - Here’s a writing frame to start you off when writing about the artwork.

How to write an Expressive Essay in 10 steps

1.Write an introduction stating what you will write about. Include Artist’s names and specific titles of artwork.

2. State which artist and artwork you will write about first.

3. Describe first artwork in detail.

4. Describe everything you see.

5. Say what you see and what it tells the viewer specifically about the subject.

6. Use the question sheets. Ask yourself each question and use work bank to add lots of describing words.

7. Find another piece of artwork by the same artist. Compare and contrast both artworks.

8. Repeat steps 2-7.

9. Compare and contrast both artists’ styles, subject matter and how they use the visual elements.

10. Say which artist or artwork you prefer and why.

Due Date – 23rd December 2010

The use of Visual Elements/

Write about each of the visual elements; Line, Form, Texture, Colour, Tone, Shape, Pattern.

Describe a specific part of the artwork.

Describe which visual element you will be writing about.

Use lots of describing words (see word banks).

Describe effect of visual element on –

• Another visual element.

• The person in the portrait and what it tells us about them.

• The composition and how it makes an area stand out.

Is contrast created?

For example..

‘The artist’s use of colour is important. The cold, pale blues, greys and silvers used create a sad mood. ‘

Visual Element

Describing Words

Effect of visual element

Expressive Essay/How to start

State the Artist and title of the portrait you will be writing about.

Describe the portrait in full; say what you see as if describing it to someone who can’t see it.

Describe the Fore-ground, Mid-ground and background.

Describe the subject. If you met the person in portrait describe what you think their personality would be like.

The artist will use the Visual elements and composition to make the most interesting picture they can.

For the best marks you must write about –

The person in the portrait and how the artist tells us about their personality. How the visual elements have been used and how they affect each other, the composition and the subject. Your opinion on the artwork and reasons why you like and don’t like specific parts of it.

Composition This is where the artist has positioned everything in the artwork to –

• Make you look at it; draw the viewer’s eye around the painting and to the focal point.• Create balance and harmony to the whole space of the artwork. • Imagine you had to draw out the artwork in the simplest shapes and lines.

To do..Identify the basic shapes which make up the painting. Look for things which are lined up like a cross, a triangle or circle. Does the shape make any area stand out or bring different parts together or point to anything?

Imagine the painting is a see-saw. Has the artist balanced the painting with different things in different areas?

People have been shown to like things split into thirds. Has the artist split up the artwork into thirds? Say what you see in each third.

The use of Visual Elements/

Questions to ask yourself.

Use word bank to help you with each visual element

LineDescribe what lines can be seen in the portrait.How have the lines been created?Have a lot of lines been used?Do the lines create basic shapes?Do the lines point to anything or make something stand out?Do the lines make basic shapes or make the composition stronger?How does the use of line affect the composition of the portrait?How does the use of line affect the balance of the portrait?

Form

Has the artist made things look 3-D or flat?

Describe how the artist has made something look 3-D or flat; refer to using tone (light and dark).

Are the forms realistic?

How are the forms different from real life?

Describe how the forms are positioned; refer to composition

How do the forms fill the space?

Texture

Write about how different things in the artwork feel.

Look for contrasts of texture and describe them.

Describe how you think the surface of the artwork would feel.

How has the paint or materials been applied to the surface?

The use of Visual Elements/

Questions to ask yourself.

Use word bank to help you with each visual element -

Colour

Use describing words to say what sort of colours you see.

Are there colours which go well together? Give reasons.

Are there contrasting colours?

Are there warm or cool colours?

How do the colours create a mood or feeling to the artwork?

How do the colours link to what is in the artwork and it’s theme.

Tone

What sort of light is in the artwork (natural, Man-Made, low light, bright)?

Where is the light coming from?

What is lit up and emphasised?

What is dark, in shadow and hidden?

How does the use of light and dark tell us about the subject and their personality?

Shape

Describe the sort of shapes you see.

Are there a lot of one sort of shape in different parts of the artwork?

Are there contrasting shapes?

How do the shapes fit together?

How does the position of the shapes affect the composition?

Critical/Art Studies/Word Bank Circle the works you use when responding to an artworkArt Studies VocabularyThe Artist Artwork Title Materials The Viewer The Subject The Subject Matter Still-LifePortrait Self-Portrait Landscape Figure Composition Theme(s) Focal Point Technique Processes Influence Important Represents Transform Study Symbol Perspective Style Background Middle-ground Foreground Composition InfluencedSpace Communicates Perspective Viewpoint Stand out Emphasize Story Personality Narrative Contrast Contrasting Gaze Parts Object Two Dimensional Three Dimensional Surrounding Interior Exterior Weather Atmosphere Engaged Experimentedadd other words you use..

ImageRealistic Simplified Detailed Layered HiddenFlat Monumental Small Intimate Life-size Powerful StarkDecorative Real Unreal Dreamlike Classic Romantic Modern Abstract Contemporary Challenging Extreme Skilful Skill Artificial Scientific Accurate Tilted Slantedadd other words you use..

CompositionFocal Point Balanced Balance Horizontal Vertical Order Ordered Depth Basic Harmony Unity Vanishing PointChaotic Strong Symmetrical Asymmetric Cluttered Busy Close DistantArrangement Diagonal Clear Upward Downward Noisy Cross Line Shape ‘Drawing the viewer/the eye in’ Angle Directionadd other words you use..

MoodFeeling Feelings Emotion Energy Force Serene Relaxed Personalities RelationshipHappy Sad Funny Scary Mysterious Friendly MoodyChaotic Dramatic Quiet Tense Tension Turbulent Exciting Quiet TenseTranquil Powerful Energetic Busy Sinister Dark Sunny MelancholicDistressing Angry Upset Worriedadd other words you use..

Name/Class

Critical/Art Studies/Word Bank Circle the works you use when responding to an artwork

The Visual Elements are used by artists to create eye-catching artwork. They may use all the visual elements in an artwork or focus on using a few or even one.

The 7 Visual Elements are – Line, Form, Tone, Colour, Texture, Shape, Pattern

ColourPalette Primary Secondary Tertiary Warm Cold Bright Bold ExplosionWild Exotic Unconventional Strong Sombre Muted Plain Vivid Quiet Muddy Vibrant Volume Expressive Mixed Spontaneous Lush IntenseHarmonious Contrasting Translucent Opaque Washes Complimentary LimitedClashing Luminous Natural Unnatural Eye-catching EarthyRich Subtle Happy Angry Sad Solid Blocks Monochrome Splash add other words you use..

LineDrawing Sketching Expressive Controlled Simplified Fast Detailed Moving Flowing Linear Broad Hard Soft Outline Defining Defined Broken Organic Geometric Curved Gentle Wandering Slow Strong Restrained Three Dimensional Flat Sinuous Sweeping Elongated Fluid Chaotic Order Jagged Slashed Crude Dancing Heavy Light Subtle Restrained Sensitiveadd other words you use..

Form (3-D Shape)Tonal Light source Direction Depth Solid Structure Forms Bold MouldedPlain Heavy Light Delicate Shadow Emphasised Jutting Quiet Fore-shortening Shapeless Hazy Formless Formlessness Carved Cast add other words you use..

ToneLight Source Light Dark Shades Rendering Rendered Natural Electric Silhouette Harsh Happy Sad Funny Scary Mysterious Friendly MoodyChaotic Dramatic Quiet Reflective Tint Reflecting Golden Evening MorningExciting Quiet Tense Summer Day Night Powerful EnergeticBusy Sinister Dark Sunny Shiny Flat Flash Hint add other words you use..

Texture

Materials Textured Brushstrokes Surface Layered Layer Uneven Built Up Action

Impasto Touch Movement Expression Jagged Mixed Expressive Painterly

Exposed ‘Worked into’ Scumbled Rough Smooth Dry Wet Brittle Reflective

Melted Flakey Cracked Distressed Scraped Sensation Wavy Warped Runny Trickledadd other words you use..

Critical/Art Studies/Word Bank Circle the works you use when responding to an artwork

The Visual Elements are used by artists to create eye-catching artwork. They may use all the visual elements in an artwork or focus on using a few or even one.

The 7 Visual Elements are – Line, Form, Tone, Colour, Texture, Shape, Pattern

PatternRepetition Decoration Detail Beauty Style LightHeavy Embellished Symmetry Eye-catching Stripes Lines OrnateRhythm Sequence Expressive Dabs Swirling Explosion Hypnotic DazzlingDotted Brushed Splattered Fine Elaborate add other words you use..

Shape Figure Geometric Basic Organic Sharp Smooth Cluttered Abstract Cubist

Curved Rounded Jagged Distorted Pronounced Detailed Jutting Hollowadd other words you use..

Scale/SizeProportions Proportioned Life-Size Across Monumental ImmenseNatural Focus Minute Huge Massive Minimal Overwhelming SpreadingPowerful Fat Bulky Slimadd other words you use..

Critical/Art Studies/Writing FrameUse these phrases to start sentences or clearly say what you mean.

The painting shows..

In the painting..

We can see..

This reflects..

The use of..

The artist has focused on..

This affects..

This emphasises..

That makes….stand out.

The eye is drawn to..

There is a contrast between..

This influences..

This creates..

This creates a sense of.

I feel..

In my opinion..

In conclusion..

Tone (light and Dark)

Colour

Texture

Form (3-D Shape)/Shape

Lines

Composition

Mood

Pose/Gaze

Expression

Personality

Subject

Clothes/Costume/Symbols

‘Self Portrait With Stetson’By John Byrne (Scottish, born 1940)Oil on canvas198990 x 70cm

Use of Visual elementsWhat the portrait tells us

Responding to a Portrait