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    Tyler Davis

    Anthony Borrero

    ENGL 1101-068

    6 December 2012

    Revision: The Ways Hunters Engage with Literacy

    Just at the crack of dawn, several men make their way through the woods for a morning

    of deer hunting. They layout the deer lick, distribute the corn, and climb up to their stands where

    they will patiently wait for the mornings first buck.

    The men quiet down when they hear a crackling in the leaves. Walking towards the deer

    lick comes a young buck, eager to get his minerals. The hunters turn the safety off of their guns

    and take aim. The deers head pops up as if he senses harm. One of the hunters sees this as his

    only opportunity to shoot before the deer runs off, and he squeezes the trigger. The deers body

    falls quickly to the ground.

    The prior narrative is a sample scenario of hunters who have unified to take part in a

    session of hunting. Most would not realize the important role that literacy plays in these kinds of

    circumstances. The purpose of this essay is to analyze the ways that hunters partake in literacy

    during hunting excursions. In order to conduct this discussion, I will write about how huntsmen

    examine their environment, how they analyze animals tracks, and how they read animals

    movements in order to decide when to execute their attack. By discussing these points, I would

    like for hunters, both experienced and inexperienced, to have an understanding of how to read

    a variety of the aspects of hunting and to sharpen their skills in hunting.

    The act of hunting has a very long history, originating all the way back to the beginning

    of mankind. It began in ancient tribes, solely, as a means of acquiring food for the tribes

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    communities. As time progressed and hunters perfected their skills, they began taking a liking to

    hunting and began viewing it as a hobby. Today, hunting is still a way that people earn food, but

    it has become popular mostly for the thrill that killing a wild animal provides a predator. Hunting

    has become one of the favorite pastimes of many individuals and groups (Blain).

    One group that has formed because of the members common interest in hunting is a

    group of friends, and some family members, from Randleman, NC who call themselves the

    Hunting Crew. The group began in the fall of 2000 by high school friends Chad Davis, Michael

    Cassata and Trevor Martin who enjoyed doing many things together (Cassata). They played

    sports together, had classes with one another, and hung out together almost every weekend. Each

    of them appreciated hunting with their fathers while growing up, and decided they would like to

    all go hunting together (Cassata). On their first few hunting trips together, the boys went to

    Chads dads 35-acre wooded-land, along with their 20 gauge shot guns in their deer stands.

    They didnt have any techniques or strategies for how they would hunt; they just shot when and

    if they saw a deer (Cassata). Every now and then, they would bring along some of their other

    friends and after they came hunting with them for a while, they became part of the clique. The

    group now has about ten participants, though they have never had all of them hunt together at the

    same place or time (Cassata).

    The members of theHunting Crew agree that the main goal of the faction is just to have

    fun and be able to bond with one another. Michael says the real reason he comes is show all the

    guys how its done. His intention is to trace and slay the most immense deer to ever live and

    earn all the bragging rights to rub in the rest of the group members faces (Cassata). The way that

    he talks to the other hunters is in a cocky way, but also conveys a joking-tone when he speaks to

    them. This shows that hunters dont have to be a hundred percent serious a hundred percent of

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    Other major activities that deer involve their selves in are mating and sleeping

    (Huntland). Knowing these deer activities will further the hunters knowledge as to what actions

    to take and approaches to use for when they go hunting.

    There is a procedure that on must go through before being capable to hunt

    unaccompanied. The Hunter Safety Course must be taken before hunting by ones self which can

    be done online and for less than twenty dollars. The next step is to register and involve oneself in

    the Field Day, which is a hands-on instruction time that demonstrates how to properly handle a

    gun. Accomplishing the course will grant a prospective hunter with a Hunter Education

    Certificate, which will have a code on it that is required to purchase a hunting license (North

    Carolina Hunter's Ed Course). Purchasing a hunting license for a typical North Carolinian adult

    costs $500 (NC Wildlife).

    There are also some things that hunters should do to prepare the site before the day of the

    hunt. The site should be set a few weeks preceding to the day you plan to hunt in an effort to lure

    in game. Trevor says that he likes to use deer lick and corn for luring in his game. They will get

    so used to coming here to eat, he says, that they will more than likely come here on the day

    that we hunt (Martin). He also says that the reason for using the deer lick is so that the deer can

    get their minerals, which they need in order to survive healthfully (Martin). The location of the

    deer stands or blinds should also be determined before hunting. The stand or blind must be

    placed in aposition where you can view the deer from any location that they will be doing any of

    their activities on the site (Martin). Having a wide view of the deer will allow more opportunities

    for shooting the deer.

    The men also commented on a few differences between effective hunters and ineffective

    hunters. Effective hunters will know what they want to do and how they want to do it. They will

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    already know what kinds of methods and techniques they will use, where they will be situated,

    know when and where to talk, and they will know when the right time to shoot is (Martin). On

    the contrary, an ineffective hunter would have no plan ahead of time, they might move about the

    location, not know when they need to be quiet, and might shoot at random times, scaring away

    the rest of the deer (Martin). Overall, an effective hunter will know what they are doing and are

    usually experienced hunter who has learned these traits over time, whereas an ineffective hunter

    does not know what their doing because they are probably an inexperienced hunter who has not

    been through the same learning experiences as an experienced hunter has (Cassata). Effective are

    the ones who walk away with a kill.

    The men engaged with theHunting Crew say they usually like to inspect the deer tracks

    prior to setting up the site. They can perceive what kind of movement the deer are making; where

    they are coming in and out of the woods, where they acquire their water, etcetera (Martin). They

    also like to read the deer tracks to examine what kind of deermigrate to the location (Martin). As

    many would believe, a smaller footprint means a smaller deer and a larger footprint means a

    larger deer. The diagram below explains what kind of deer each footprint belongs to

    (HuntingNet).

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    A form of communication has not been set by theHunting Crew as their own. They often

    times create signals as needed and each member has to interpret what the others are trying to say.

    They have not taken the time to create their own signals, but they do somewhat use universal

    motions, such as a hand held vertically for someone to stop or a finger in front of their mouth to

    tell someone to be quiet, etcetera (Martin). As for communicating with animals, they use deer

    calls, which they say are remarkably helpful during mating season, as it will lure in the hormonal

    bucks (Martin). They also cover themselves in doe urine for the same purpose; plus, it also helps

    dilute their own scent (Martin). Communication plays an important role in hunting, both with

    one another as well as with the game.

    Chads cabin at High Rock Lake in Lexington, NC has recently become a popular

    location for the men to hunt. The water and woodlands that surround the cabin make it a prim

    location for hunting. At this time of the year, the water level goes down significantly to where is

    it only a river. The wet ground where the water once was allows for the hunters to see many of

    the deer tracks (Martin). They are able to observe where the deer come in and out of the woods

    from, see where the deer get their water, and also where along the bank the deer like to walk

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    (Martin). Since they cannot shoot deer that are on the bank since that is not Chads property, the

    men try to lure the deer onto the property (Martin). They use the deer lick and corn as mentioned

    before as a method of luring the deer. On this property, the men usually sit in a blind that is

    located on the deck of the cabin because itprovides them with maximum view of the back yard

    and is fairly close to where they have the corn and deer lick placed. A blind is a tent-like box that

    is covered in camouflage and fake leaves so that the deer do not pay much attention to it. The

    mens new go-to spot would be paradise for most deer.

    This is the river that flows just behind the property that makes up High Rock Lake. The

    ground was covered by water over the summer and the deer that walk on this ground leave many

    tracks.

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    The men also say it is important to know when to shoot the deer, so they have to be able

    to read the deers actions and decide when to perform their shot. The deer walk very cautiously

    through their paths and the slightest disturbance will send them running away. Thats why the

    hunters have decided that it is important to be able to read what the deer is sensing before it is

    too late and they go home empty handed. Trevor says that when a deer thinks they hear

    something, their head will pop up very quick, and they will take a second to listen for further

    noises by pointing their ears in the direction that the first sound came from (Martin). They will

    proceed even more carefully if they no longer hear anything. If the noise is still there, then they

    run off. To ensure that the deer does not suffer drastically from a shot, the men say it is crucial

    that the deer is shot in one of its vital organs, that way it will not live long (Martin). Shooting in

    one of the vital organs, such as the lungs or heart, will cause a lot of bleeding and will make

    tracking down the deer a lot easier since the blood will leave a trail. The heart and lung are both

    located just above the deers front two legs (Martin). The ability to determine the deers senses is

    a very important skill to have in hunting.

    After a deer is shot, the hunter must then track the deer, because even though injured, the

    deer will still try to escape to save its life. A trail of blood will be left for the men to follow until

    they eventually find the deer and eradicate it (Martin). Once the deer is finally dead, the hunter

    who killed it must report it to the North Carolina Wildlife (North Carolina Wildlife Resource

    Commission). They must do this within 24 hours of shooting the deer. To do this, they must use

    the Big Game Harvest Report Card that was given to them with their big game hunting license.

    On that report card, they punch out a hole next to the kind of animal they killed and call the

    North Carolina Wildlife Resource Commission (North Carolina Wildlife Resource Commission).

    The hunters of theHunting Crew practice these procedures after every kill.

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    The Hunting Crew engages with plenty of literacy, but not in the common way that most

    people would think. They are not reading books or writing papers like most people think of when

    they hear literacy. They are literate in their own way. They read terrain, the actions of animals,

    different situations, and even communicate differently than those who do not participate in

    hunting. Their ways of engaging with literacy varies with the practices of other hunting groups as

    well. TheHunting Crew is truly a unique group and stands apart from all others.Tyler Davis 12/6/12 7:30 AM

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    Works Cited

    Blain, Rebecca. The Evolution of Man - The History of Hunting. 9 November 2012

    .

    Cassata, Michael. History of the Hunting Crew Tyler Davis. 16 November 2012.

    HuntingNet. HuntingNet: Deer Tracks. 20 November 2012

    .

    Huntland. Deer Hunting Guide: Deer Hunting Tips. 20 November 2012

    .

    Martin, Trevor. Information on Hunting Crew Tyler Davis. 16 November 2012.

    NC Wildlife. NC Wildlife: Lifetime License Types. 20 November 2012

    .

    North Carolina Hunter's Ed Course. Official Hunter Safety Education Course. 20 November

    2012 .

    North Carolina Wildlife Resource Commission. N.C. Wildlife Resources Commission: Big

    Game Harvest Reportig. 20 November 2012

    .