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The Day We Got Fired

Date: May 21 2012


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EXT. CITY - EVENING

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LLOID

At last we meet, dragon.

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KENNY

This battle has been a long time

coming, knight.

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Camera pulls out to reveal KENNY holding pepper shaker.

Dialogue

KENNY

Now, taste my fire!

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Kenny begins shaking the pepper

flakes onto Lloid.

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Pepper flakes fall onto Lloid.

Dialogue

LLOID

Gah! What luck that--

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Lloid picks up a lit candle and

begins capturing the pepper

flakes inside.

Dialogue

LLOID (cont'd)

--Merlin gave me a magic globe--

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Lloid adjusts candle, ready to

toss.

Dialogue

LLOID (cont'd)

--that can catch fire--

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Lloid tosses the captured flakes

in Kenny's direction.

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LLOID (cont'd)

--and then shoot it back at you!

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Dialogue

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Kenny recoils from the flakes.

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KENNY

Aagh!

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Kenny reaches down for the

parmesan cheese shaker.

Dialogue

KENNY

Well, I fight your fire...

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Kenny begins shaking parmesan at

Lloid.

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KENNY (cont'd)

with ice!

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Lloid picks up a breadstick from

the basket on the table.

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LLOID

Your ice is no match for...

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Lloid swings the breadstick

through the air as Kenny drops

the parmesan shaker and begins

acting like a dragon.

Dialogue

LLOID (cont'd)

my Sword of Warmth!

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Lloid jabs the breadstick at

Kenny, who grabs it and holds it

to his chest.

Dialogue

LLOID

Swish!

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Camera pans with Kenny as he walks backwards, acting out his death.

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KENNY

Oh no! You have...

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KENNY (cont'd)

slayed the mighty Dragonico!

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KENNY jumps off the side of the table, landing on the booth seat

cushion beneath him.

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KENNY (cont'd)

Gagghh!

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A shadow befalls KENNY.

Dialogue

GREG (O.S.)

Ahem.

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Kenny opens his eyes.

Dialogue

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POV from Kenny as he turns himself upright.

Dialogue

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KENNY (DEFIANTLY)

What?

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Laughter is heard O/S.

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Mellie and Tamara continue

laughing.

Mellie

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TAMARA

Girl, she was dressed

fab-u-less!

Both laugh.

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Mellie lies down.

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MELLIE

Spelled L-E-S-S. That?s funny!

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GREG walks into scene.

Dialogue

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Mellie turns to Greg.

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MELLIE (TO GREG)

Yeah?

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GREG

Mellie, as hostess, maybe you

can...

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GREG (cont'd)

show your friend to her seat.

*chuckles*

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GREG (cont'd)

So that she can contain the two

little brats she brought with

her.

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Dialogue

MELLIE

Those ?two brats? are paying

customers, Greg.

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Dialogue

GREG

Destruction is not an acceptable

method of payment. Do you have

any idea what would happen if

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Greg recoils as a MAN peeks in

through the front door.

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SFX: Ding! Ding!

MAN

Is this still the place that

sells pagers and briefcases?

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Greg takes a deep breath.

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GREG

The sign has a giant pizza on

it. Do you think we sell

pagers?

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MAN leaves in disappointment and

disgust.

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MAN (MUMBLING)

Yeesh! Guy just wants to keep

up with the times and get a new

pager.

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GREG

Are you actually going to order

anything, Tamara?

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Tamara stands up and walks to

the door.

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TAMARA

Actually, I have a nail

appointment to keep.

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Tamara opens the door and

leaves.

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TAMARA (cont'd)

Thanks for agreeing to watch the

kids, Mell.

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MELLIE finishes her diet soda.

Dialogue

SFX: Slurp!

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Dialogue

MELLIE

Waiter, could you get me another

diet cola?

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Dialogue

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Dialogue

SFX: Oven/flame sounds.

(continuous through shot)

CHAD (SINGING)

Ooohhh yeah.

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CHAD (SINGING) (cont'd)

And people will come from all

around and say...

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CHAD uses pan to pull pizza out

from oven.

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?Oh yeah! I wanna put my mouth

on it.?

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And by it, they mean...

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Chad pulls pizza pan from oven

and swings it around to the

table.

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my pizza pie.

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CHAD slides pizza onto the

table.

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GREG

I swear, if I loose this job

because of her, I?m going to...

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CHAD puts pan away.

Dialogue

GREG (cont'd)

WHAT IS THAT?!?

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Chad wipes his hands clean.

Dialogue

CHAD

It?s just my latest and greatest

creation...

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CHAD (cont'd)

SPAGHETTI PIZZA!

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Dialogue

GREG

So, what you?re saying is you?ve

just given up on trying to be

normal.

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CHAD

It?s like I always say, just

because we live in Medio City...

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CHAD (cont'd)

doesn?t mean we have to live in

mediocrity.

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Chad begins to slice pizza.

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GREG

Clever.

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GREG

Why is today marked in red?

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CHAD stops slicing.

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CHAD (MATTER-OF-FACTLY)

Because I invited The Brothers

to come in and try my new pizza.

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CHAD goes back to slicing pizza.

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CHAD (cont'd)

They should be here any minute.

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GREG (PANICKED)

YOU WHAT?!?

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SFX: Ding! Ding!

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MELLIE sits up.

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MELLIE

Uh, can I help you two?

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Dialogue

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GREG darts to the front of the

restaurant as the children

continue to make a mess.

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Dialogue

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Greg reaches into his pocket.

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GREG

I?ll give you $20 to hide under

the table until your babysitter

comes back.

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KENNY

$20 each and we clean up quick,

too.

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GREG

Deal.

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MELLIE

And how is it that one of you is

short and fat while the other is

tall and skinny?

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MELLIE (cont'd)

What do your parents look like?

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GREG (O.S.)

Mellie!

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GREG (cont'd)

That?s no way to treat our

esteemed guests!

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MELLIE

I just don?t get it. I thought

Italians were all handsome.

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GREG

Well, unfortunately for our

payroll, they don?t pay you to

think. We could sure save a lot

of money that way.

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GREG

Welcome, gentlemen! I?m Greg,

your head waiter.

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GREG (cont'd)

This is Mellie, your hostess.

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GREG (cont'd)

And Chad?s in the back putting the finishing touches on your

exclusive meal.

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GREG (cont'd)

Mellie, why don?t you do your

job and show them to the best

seat in the house?

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BROTHER #1

Let?s-a-go!

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MELLIE

And the architecture was

inspired by the great American

pizza restaurants from the

1600?s?

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Dialogue

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Greg pulls up table cloth.

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GREG

Huh?

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Mellie sits The Bros. down and

hands them a menu.

Dialogue

MELLIE

Here we are! The best seat in

the house...

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MELLIE (cont'd)

right next to the cash register.

Feel free to grab some cash,

since it is your money.

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MELLIE (O.S.) (cont'd)

You can use it for whatever you

want, like mani-pedis.

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MELLIE (cont'd)

Not that I do that! No, I just

store expense those.

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GREG pushes MELLIE to the side.

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GREG

Thank you for that, Mellie!

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GREG

Let?s start you fellas off with

some drinks, shall we? I?m

thinking two cold colas?

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BROTHER #1

Ooouugh.

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GREG (TAKEN ABACK)

Oh, um?two diet colas then?

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BROTHER #1

Woohoo!

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GREG

Well okay then. Mellie will get

those for you as I read you...

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Greg pulls a small stack of

index cards from his back

pocket.

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GREG (cont'd)

a few words that Chad, our chef,

has prepared to help explain his

creation. "Italy: Pizza.

Pasta. The Mona Lisa Smile.

The boot shape."

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CHAD peeks in from the "order

up" window.

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GREG (cont'd)

"The Leaning Tower of Pizza.

The Eiffel Tower. Those little

weird-looking cars. Momma."

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Dialogue

GREG (cont'd)

When the moon hits your eye like

a big pizza pie?

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Dialogue

GREG (cont'd)

You know what?

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CHAD ducks out of window. Greg

inches toward the kitchen door.

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GREG (cont'd)

I think I?ll just go check on

your pizza.

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Camera pans with GREG.

Dialogue

GREG

It should be just about ready. I know he?s been perfecting it for

you and I?ve been right behind him the whole wwwaaaayyyy!

SFX (on collision): THUNK!

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Suspenseful music plays as each successive shot fades into the

next, almost as if in slow motion.

Dialogue

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GREG (SLOW MOTION)

Nnnnnoooooooo!

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SFX (O.S.): SPLAT!

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Dialogue

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GREG and CHAD slowly peek around

booth corner.

Dialogue

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Dialogue

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MELLIE

Um, we?re actually out of diet.

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TAMARA

Mellie, where?d the kids go?

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Children emerge from underneath

table.

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KENNY AND LLOID (IN UNISON)

Here we are!

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Dialogue

KENNY

That mean man made us clean for

him and then told us to be quiet

and get under the table.

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Dialogue

BROTHER #1

Ooouuhgh.

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BROTHER #1 (V.O.)

You?re-a-fired!

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