1. 1. Question 5- how did you attract/address your audience? Locked Up
2. 2. Question 5-how did you attract/address your audience? Primary audience: Our film locked up is a documentary about a boy that was taken from his family and was found by a neighbour. With some scenes that maybe will disturb people our main audience would be people aged 18 and above. The film could be hard to understand and maybe confusing to younger viewers. Secondary audience; Our secondary audience is aimed at teen youth. It can have a hidden message so they think about whom they are talking to on the streets and not to talk to strangers because this sort of thing can happen to anyone. It also shows how it affects other people not just the person taken. Although it might be interesting it also shows the risks of being around strangers. Music choice; For our film locked up we chose wasting my young years by London grammar. We chose this song because it is relevant to the story as he had wasted his childhood because he was taken away and locked up. It helps make the storyline more clear for the viewers making it easier to watch and can appeal to more people.
3. 3. This is our Questionnaire
4. 4. Fed Back from peer assessor These are some of the results we got from survey. We also asked another people different question. To Emily martin we asked; even if its a genre you didnt normally watch, is there anything you would improve and why? Emily: its normally a genre id watch Im more in to girly and action films but after watching the opening of this film it looks really interesting and Id probably watch it if it real. If I had to improve the opening it would have to be the interview part at the end and it doesnt look real and the girl is a poor actor and looks very uncomfortable during the seen. Also the way she is sitting makes it look more unreal. They should either re-film it or cut it but apart from that I enjoyed it.
5. 5. What went well & Improvements What went well; One of the things that went well in our film opening was our shots and photos in the cabin; I got some good feedback from my class when they watched it. They said it was realistic and they could imagine someone living in them conditions. We also got some good feedback about the editing and titles. Improvements; If we had to redo the film opening I would change the interview seen as we got some bad feedback about it and shot more of James in the cabin.
6. 6. What went well & Improvements What went well; One of the things that went well in our film opening was our shots and photos in the cabin; I got some good feedback from my class when they watched it. They said it was realistic and they could imagine someone living in them conditions. We also got some good feedback about the editing and titles. Improvements; If we had to redo the film opening I would change the interview seen as we got some bad feedback about it and shot more of James in the cabin.