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Writing to Summarize Writing to Summarize Presentation by Wayne Bartlett UAB EH 101 Tuesday, June 7, 2011 Questions? Comments? Email Mr. Bartlett at [email protected] Content adapted from The Wisconsin Technical College, “Summary Writing.” Wisc-Online, N.p. Web. June 2, 2011. http://www.wisc-online.com/objects/ViewObject.aspx?ID=TRG2603.

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Page 1: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

Writing to Summarize Writing to

Summarize Presentation by Wayne Bartlett

UAB EH 101 Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Questions? Comments? Email Mr. Bartlett at [email protected]

Content adapted from The Wisconsin Technical College, “Summary Writing.” Wisc-Online, N.p. Web. June 2,

2011. http://www.wisc-online.com/objects/ViewObject.aspx?ID=TRG2603.

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Writing to Summarize Here’s the Plan for Today

20-minute presentation on Writing to Summarize, including a guided practice session

You’ll do a 15-minute practice in pairs We’ll take a 10-minute break We’ll look at your WtS products You’ll do a 15-minute practice WtS by yourself We’ll look at your WtS products from that practice You’ll do a second 15-minute practice

by yourself for turn in to me That will be it for today

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

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But first…a word.

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

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Writing to Summarize Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

This is the Process

WfS is a process—approach it on a step-by-step basis

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

You can do each step; thus,

you can do the whole thing

There are other ways to WfS

Modify for your own use after you try it this way first

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

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Writing to Summarize Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Read the Material

There’s no way around this!

Eliminate distractions to improve effectiveness

Read for understanding first (this might involve looking up words, etc.)

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

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Writing to Summarize Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Re-Read the Material

You might have to re-read it a couple of times, but…

Positive understanding of the material makes the rest easier

Read for structure and organization Combine the Summaries

Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

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Writing to Summarize Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Mark Up the Material

Actually mark on the paper with pen, highlighter, whatever

Identify stages of thought

Trace the author’s argument

Goal: Find the main point (or theme, or whatever you call it)

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

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Writing to Summarize Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Write Short Summaries

of each Stage of Thought

This may not be strictly necessary for short pieces

But imagine yourself doing it

For today’s purposes, we will write short summaries at each stage of thought.

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

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Writing to Summarize Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Combine the Summaries

This creates your final product

Try to maintain the tone of the original

Length? About 20% of original

Check your grammar, spelling, style, usage, all that stuff

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

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Writing to Summarize Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Summaries must not include your opinion!

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

Aim for distance

and transparency

Do not give any hint about what you—as a person—think

The reader can decide what to think about the material

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

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Writing to Summarize Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Give Credit where Credit is Due

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

Credit the author of the work

which you summarize

Do it in MLA format (MLA is Modern Language Association)

Make friends with MLA; you’ll

use it a whole lot in college

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

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Writing to Summarize Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Let’s try one together.

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

You’ll do a couple more

later on your own.

Remember: A timed summarization is coming!

Now’s the time to practice the skills.

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Read the Material

Read for understanding Look up some words? Maybe. How long is this? 103 words. How long might the summary be?

Re-Read the Material

Read for structure

and organization Read to positively understand Re-read several times, if need be

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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Here’s how I would mark this up:

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Here’s how I would mark this up:

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Here’s how I would mark this up:

This part makes an assertion: “For a long time, Islam unified people.”

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Here’s how I would mark this up:

This part makes an assertion: “For a long time, Islam unified people.”

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Here’s how I would mark this up:

This part makes an assertion: “For a long time, Islam unified people.”

This part says “Then that changed.”

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Here’s how I would mark this up:

This part makes an assertion: “For a long time, Islam unified people.”

This part says “Then that changed.”

This part also says what caused the change: “Western ascendency.”

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Here’s how I would mark this up:

This part makes an assertion: “For a long time, Islam unified people.”

This part says “Then that changed.”

This part also says what caused the change: “Western ascendency.”

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Here’s how I would mark this up:

This part makes an assertion: “For a long time, Islam unified people.”

This part says “Then that changed.”

This part also says what caused the change: “Western ascendency.”

This part tells an effect of the change: “Muslim nations adopted Western ideologies.”

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Here’s how I would mark this up:

This part makes an assertion: “For a long time, Islam unified people.”

This part says “Then that changed.”

This part also says what caused the change: “Western ascendency.”

This part tells an effect of the change: “Muslim nations adopted Western ideologies.”

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Here’s how I would mark this up:

This part makes an assertion: “For a long time, Islam unified people.”

This part says “Then that changed.”

This part also says what caused the change: “Western ascendency.”

This part tells an effect of the change: “Muslim nations adopted Western ideologies.”

This part says that something surprising occurred: “Most Muslims remained poor and powerless.”

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Here’s how I would mark this up:

This part makes an assertion: “For a long time, Islam unified people.”

This part says “Then that changed.”

This part also says what caused the change: “Western ascendency.”

This part tells an effect of the change: “Muslim nations adopted Western ideologies.”

This part says that something surprising occurred: “Most Muslims remained poor and powerless.”

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Here’s how I would mark this up:

This part makes an assertion: “For a long time, Islam unified people.”

This part says “Then that changed.”

This part also says what caused the change: “Western ascendency.”

This part tells an effect of the change: “Muslim nations adopted Western ideologies.”

This part says that something surprising occurred: “Most Muslims remained poor and powerless.”

This part tells why the surprising thing occurred “Corrupt and repressive governments.”

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Here’s how I would mark this up:

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

This part makes an assertion:

“For a long time, Islam unified people.”

This part says “Then that changed.”

This part also says what caused the change: “Western ascendency.”

This part tells an effect of the change: “Muslim nations adopted Western ideologies.”

This part says that something surprising occurred: “Most Muslims remained poor and powerless.”

This part tells why the surprising thing occurred “Corrupt and repressive governments.”

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

“For a long time, Islam unified people.” “Then that changed.” “Western ascendency.”

“Muslim nations adopted

Western ideologies.” “Most Muslims remained

poor and powerless.”

“Corrupt and repressive governments.”

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

Combine the Summaries Maintain Tone of Original Aim for about 20% Length Check Style, Usage, etc.

“For a long time, Islam unified people.” “Then that changed.” “Western ascendency.”

“Muslim nations adopted

Western ideologies.” “Most Muslims remained

poor and powerless.”

“Corrupt and repressive governments.”

“For centuries, Islam unified people. But the rise of the West changed that as Muslim nations adopted Western ideologies. Because of corrupt govern- ments, most Muslims remained poor and powerless.” Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic January 2002: 76-85.

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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For nearly 1,400 years, Islam, though diverse

in sectarian practice and ethnic tradition, has

provided a unifying faith for peoples

stretching from the Atlantic to the Indian

Ocean and beyond. Starting in the 1500s,

Western ascendency, which culminated in

colonization, eroded once glorious Muslim

empires and reduced the influence of Islam.

After the breakup of the Ottoman Empire

following World War I and the decline of

European colonial empires following World

War II, Muslim nations adopted Western

ideologies—communism, secularism,

nationalism, and capitalism. Yet most

Muslims remained poor and powerless. Their

governments, secular regimes often backed by

the West, were corrupt and repressive (Belt,

78).

“For centuries, Islam unified people. But the rise of the West changed that as Muslim nations adopted Western ideologies. Because of corrupt govern- ments, most Muslims remained poor and powerless.” Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic January 2002: 76-85.

Despite Western-style governments, Muslim countries are mired in deep poverty and radical governments. This despite the fact that the religion has existed for several centuries. European colonization ruined the Islamic religion for a long time. You would find it hard to imagine how many Muslims there really are out there. Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic January 2002: 76-85.

Doesn’t follow path of original It’s a little long for this article It shifts to second-person POV

There’s traces of feeling here.

Belt, Don. “The World of Islam.” National Geographic Jan. 2002:

76-85. Print.

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Now you try one. Find a partner. Work in pairs. Show your work Be ready to

share your summary

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

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As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

15 minutes.

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

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Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 33: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

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14 minutes.

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Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 34: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

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Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

13 minutes.

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ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 35: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

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Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

12 minutes.

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ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 36: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

Read the Material

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Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

11 minutes.

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ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 37: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

Read the Material

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Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

10 minutes.

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 38: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

Read the Material

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Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

9 minutes.

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 39: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

Read the Material

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Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

8 minutes.

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 40: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

Read the Material

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Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

7 minutes.

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 41: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

6 minutes.

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 42: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

5 minutes.

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 43: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

4 minutes.

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 44: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

3 minutes.

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 45: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

2 minutes.

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

Page 46: Presentation for EH 646 on Tuesday

As governor, Calvin Coolidge became

nationally famous during the Boston police

strike of 1919. In defiance of police depart-

ment rules, a group of Boston policemen had

obtained a union charter from the American

Federation of Labor. Police Commissioner

Edwin U. Curtis suspended 10 of the union’s

leaders, and the next day almost three-fourths

of Boston’s more than 1,500 police officers

went on strike. Bands of hoodlums roamed

Boston for two nights, smashing windows and

looting stores. Coolidge mobilized the state

guard and order was restored. When Curtis

fired the 19 suspended policemen, the

president of the labor union protested to

Coolidge. In reply, Coolidge made his

famous declaration: “There is no right to

strike against the public safety by anybody,

anywhere, any time” (Mayer, 814).

Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

1 minute.

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Mayer, George H. “Calvin Coolidge.” The World Book

Encyclopedia. 1979 Edition. 1979.

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Great Job! Let’s take a break.

Return in 10 minutes.

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Writing to Summarize Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

Now you try one : Summarization Exercise A

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

You’ve had a close look at this. We did one together. You did one in pairs.

Take 15 minutes Follow the steps just as before Work alone and show your work Be prepared to share & defend

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Writing to Summarize Read the Material

Re-Read the Material

Mark Up the Material:

ID Stages of Thought

Trace the Argument

Look for Key Terms

Find the Main Point

Write Short Summaries of Each Stage of Thought

“Thank you, sir; may I have another?”

Summarization Exercise B

Combine the Summaries Maintain tone of original Aim for about 20% length Check style, usage, etc.

Presentation by Mr. Bartlett Questions or comments to [email protected]

It’s a little longer: take 20 min. Follow the steps just as before Work alone and show your work This one’s for turn-in to me for

grading and return to you on Thursday.

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Writing to Summarize Writing to

Summarize Presentation by Wayne Bartlett

UAB EH 101 Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Questions? Comments? Email Mr. Bartlett at [email protected]

Content adapted from The Wisconsin Technical College, “Summary Writing.” Wisc-Online, N.p. Web. June 2,

2011. http://www.wisc-online.com/objects/ViewObject.aspx?ID=TRG2603.