playing catch up with mobile
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meganstout
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This looks much better! I still think there might be too many fonts, but it is nice that you intro all the fonts used throughout here. I think the odd line spacing and staggering is still throwing it off a bit. Maybe more consistent leading and lining up the width of the text would fix this?
meganstout
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Looks much better here! Thank you
meganstout
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Way better! Thank you again! I don't have to think nearly as much to digest this. Well done.
meganstout
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Still a little worried about the font here. Maybe slightly larger?
meganstout
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this is much better as well, but I think we need to draw more attention to the big take away, which is really the percentage different from the 5% to 9% for mobile.
meganstout
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i think we can remove the overlap of doubletake on top of moment. I'm fine just stacking these.
meganstout
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If we can make these fit above the chart it might work better as the user needs to know this before digesting the bar chart. If it looks weird, I'll trust your judgement.
meganstout
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I like how you refocused this here. We are getting an awkward whitespace issue now, but I'm unsure how to keep the focus you've created and remove the whitespace...thoughts?
meganstout
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Very nice!
meganstout
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Really like what you did here. simple but took care of our worries.
meganstout
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We're still getting that stark feeling here. Please remove.com from ppchero. How does a color background look here? is there a reason you've avoided using color here? We'd like to make the footer smaller and a different color. See attached graphic from email. We're thinking a darker background as well # 2e2e2e