no ordinary sun by hone tuwhare. mood and tone tone and mood both deal with the emotions centred...
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No Ordinary SunBy Hone Tuwhare
Mood and Tone
Tone and mood both deal with the
emotions centred around a piece of
writing. Though they seem similar and can
in fact be related, they are in fact quite
different.
Tone is the writer’s/director’s attitude toward a subject. While
journalistic writing theoretically has a tone of distance and objectivity,
all other writing can have various tones.
If we were to read a description of a first date that included words and
phrases like “dreaded” and “my buddies forced me to go on the date”,
we could assume that the individual didn’t really enjoy the date.
Tone
Mood
Mood is the atmosphere of a piece of writing; it’s the
emotions a text arouses in a reader.
Hone Tuwhare Born in Kaipara in 1922. Died in Otago 2008. Tribal affiliations; Ngapuhi, Ngati Korokoro, Ngati Tautahi,
Te Popoto, Uri-O-Hau. Apprenticed and worked as a boilermaker. Played a very active role in the Trade Union Movement –
eventually kicked out for being a troublemaker. Began writing poetry seriously at the age of 34. Published many poems in magazines and a number of
poetry collections. "No Ordinary Sun" was published in 1964 and is still
considered one of his most powerful poems. He was the first maori (writing in English) to have poetry published in NZ.
No Ordinary SunUnfamiliar Words
Supplicationa humble and sincere appeal to somebody who has
the power to grant a request
Resiliencethe ability to recover quickly from setbacks
No Ordinary SunUnfamiliar Words
Deferential
Showing or expressing polite respect or courtesy
Ardour
Great passion, enthusiasm, or eagerness
No Ordinary SunUnfamiliar Words
Unheeding
Paying little attention
Vain entreaties
Hopeless appeal, ineffective request
No Ordinary SunUnfamiliar Words
Gallant monsoon
Grand and majestic ‘wave’/’wind’
Trade wind
A wind that blows towards the equator - a major component of the global weather system
No Ordinary SunUnfamiliar Words
enhaloed
A circle/ring of light (in this instance around the cloud)
No Ordinary Sun
Personification
No Ordinary Sun
Personification
Let your arms lack toughness
Who is the poet addressing?
No Ordinary SunPersonification
Let your arms lack toughness
Who is the poet addressing?The tree
No Ordinary Sun
Let your arms lack toughness
What other instances of personification can you find in the poem?
No Ordinary Sun
Personification
Let your arms lack toughness
What other instances of personification can you find in the poem?
O tree/…a deferential head/…your naked arms fall/…More?
No Ordinary Sun – In pairs
Highlight and count the number of times the words no, not, nor are used in the first four
verses.
What does their use suggest?
No Ordinary Sun – In pairs
What kind of associations do the words supplication and enhaloed have?
No Ordinary Sun – In pairs
What relationship does an axe and fire usually have to a tree?
How is the use of this in line five, verse one connected to the bright enhaloed cloud?
No Ordinary Sun – In pairs
What picture of the tree is suggested in verse two with the words
rising sap, inclining head, stirring to the tickle of the rain?
No Ordinary Sun – In pairs
What three activities does verse 3 suggest that the tree used to be involved in before?
No Ordinary Sun – In pairs
What three activities does verse 3 suggest that the tree used to be involved in before?
Wreathed with birds, shield and cool the lovers
Before what?
No Ordinary Sun – In pairs
What is the connection between..CLOUD
MONSTROUS SUNRADIANT BALL
FLASHBLAST
What image do you have in your mind when reading these words?
No Ordinary Sun – In pairs
No Ordinary Sun – In pairsPoetic Devices
AlliterationPersonification
AssonanceRhymeRhythm
Find at least three examples for each in the poem.