Circle or underline 3 examples of descriptive language in each body paragraph.

If 3 are not present, corrector must write specific suggestions to add descriptive language.

Once revision suggestions are noted, the corrector should show me the suggestions s/he made, and I will give him/her a grade for his/her revision suggestions.

Finally, the corrector should check for G.U.M. errors (grammar, usage, mechanics)

Narrative essay revising and editing