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Monday—March 10, 2014 Subject-Verb agreement occurs when the verb matches the subject of the sentence, depending on whether the subject is singular or plural . Label the sentence, as usual, and also fix any subject-verb errors. Do not add punctuation, just modify the subject or verb. Delilah spend time with Addie Ann.

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Page 1: Monday—March 10, 2014 Subject-Verb agreement occurs when the verb matches the subject of the sentence, depending on whether the subject is singular or

Monday—March 10, 2014

• Subject-Verb agreement occurs when the verb matches the subject of the sentence, depending on whether the subject is singular or plural.

• Label the sentence, as usual, and also fix any subject-verb errors. Do not add punctuation, just modify the subject or verb.

Delilah spend time with Addie Ann.

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Subject-Verb Agreement

• Subjects & verbs should agree.• Why?

• Plural subject=more than one; needs a plural verb• Singular subject=one; needs a singular verb

• Other corrections to the sentence:

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Tuesday—March 11, 2014

• Label the sentence and also fix any subject-verb errors.

Do not add punctuation, just modify the subject or verb.

Delilah spend time with Addie Ann.

Uncle Bump or Elias help Addie Ann gain confidence.

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“Patterns” signpost

• Remember: whenever something repeats; again & again

• Response Questions:1) What is the pattern?

2) Why is this important/significant?

Example

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“Patterns” signpost

QUOTE (Chapter 32) SIGNPOST

RESPONSES

“One plus one equals two…one plus one equals two” (260).

Patterns 1)

2)

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A Thousand Never Evers

• What is the mood/tone of the end of the novel?

• In chapter 34, Ralphie reaches for Addie Ann’s hand.

What does this mean? How can we see this as symbolic?

• Think again about the title of the novel.

What does the title mean? Which events in the novel have shown progress for Civil Rights?

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Seminar Questions• Think of questions that are novel-specific, but also text-to-

world.• Create questions around the topic/big idea of Civil Rights.

• Have all people gained Civil Rights, today? What progress have we made?

• How fair/just was society during the 1960’s? Is injustice still present today? Why?

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Wednesday—March 12, 2014

Delilah spend time with Addie Ann.

Uncle Bump or Elias help Addie Ann gain confidence.

Ethics questions is argumentative; you can respond to both sides of the issue.

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Thursday—March 13, 2014

• Subject-Verb Agreement Practice:

1) Read the following sentences & choose the sentence with the correct subject to match the verb:

a) Young children imitates the actions of their parents.

b) The theater shows a new film every two weeks.

c) The leaders of the countries talks to each other once a year.

d) Orange juice have plenty of essential vitamins.

2) By the time the pizza arrived, the party ___________.

What answer makes the statement correct?

e) Had ended

f) Will end

g) Has ended

h) Is ended

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Argument Pre-Write

• Consider your ethics question for Argument Parts 1 & 2.

• What legal changes could be applied to the situation? • What effect could these changes have?

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Argument Part 3

• We have built our argument by addressing a situation with a fact approach and judgment approach.

• Our final step is to address the situation with a policy approach.

• Part 3 (at least 2 paragraphs) is our argument of policy.

• Argument of policy think about what we did for “The Great Fire” last quarter.

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Argument Part 3

• For this portion of the argument, you will apply a legal change and explain how that affects the novel/characters.

• Example:

Ethics Question: Was it right for Jimmy Worth & Buck to harm Flapjack?Ethical issue: The behavior of Jimmy & Buck towards FlapjackLegal Change: an animal abuse law Application: animal abuse is illegal, so blame transfers to Jimmy & Buck rather than Elias**this might change things for Addie Ann & her family**

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Argument Part 3

• Today’s Task:

Brainstorm legal or social changes that could apply to your ethics question.

You will be arguing how the change would affect the situation described by your ethics question.

{just like when we argued how new laws would reduce fire risk in 1870 Chicago…}

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Argument Part 3 Outlining

Step 1: What is the legal change? How is it connected/relevant to your ethics question?

Step 2: How might this legal change affect things?

Step 3: How do you know? (gather textual evidence from the novel to support)

Step 4: Create the normal evidence-rule-conclusion chart to begin working on the argument (same process as used for the argument of policy last quarter, about "The Great Fire")

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Friday—March 14, 2014• Please take out a sheet of paper, the novel, and your

composition book.

• Agenda:

1) Novel test

2) Revise Argument Part 2

3) Begin drafting Argument Part 3

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Monday—March 17, 2014

Remember Subject-Verb Agreement. Fix any errors that you see.

People all over the world celebrates on the 17th day of March to honor the

patron saint of Ireland.

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Subject-Verb Agreement• Review the study sheet!

• To clarify from last week: make it simple

• Singular subject singular verb• Plural subject plural verb

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Argument Part 3 Format• Same paragraph structure • This will be one longer paragraph

Claim

Evidence (2 sentences min.)

Rule (1-2 sentences)

Conclusion (2 sentences min)

Counterclaim

Rebuttal

Overall conclusion: (this could be between 2-4 sentences)

Restate claim by combining claims from all 3 argument parts.

EX: As proved by the evidence, Jimmy Worth & Buck Fowler are mean, thoughtless people for abusing Addie Ann’s cat, Flapjack. An animal abuse law would punish Jimmy & Buck for intentionally harming animals, which is illegal.

Describe “life lesson” by explaining what we learn about the ethical issue.

EX: Through this situation, we can see that Jimmy & Buck’s behavior towards Flapjack is an ethical issue. Though others may think otherwise, Jimmy & Buck most likely acted wrongly.

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Conclusion of Argument

Overall conclusion: (this should be between 2-4 sentences)

Restate claim by combining claims from all 3 argument parts.

EX: {Transition phrase, such as “As proved by the evidence”}, Jimmy Worth and Buck Fowler are mean, thoughtless people for abusing Addie Ann’s cat, Flapjack. An animal abuse law would punish Jimmy & Buck for intentionally harming animals, which is illegal.

Describe “life lesson” by explaining what we learn about the ethical issue.

EX: {Transition phrase, such as “As we can conclude”}, Jimmy and Buck’s behavior towards Flapjack is an ethical issue. Though others may think otherwise, Jimmy and Buck most likely acted wrongly.

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Tuesday—March 18, 2014

Remember Subject-Verb Agreement. Fix any errors that you see.

People all over the world (celebrates, celebrate) on the 17th day of March to honor the

patron saint of Ireland.

Explanation: The purpose of writing (is, are, am) to make an impact.

Explanation:

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Writing…

• A quote from Ms. Gross:

“Good writing is a nice balance between style & substance. The purpose of writing is to make an impact and get to the point. This cannot be accomplished with fluff and empty words.”

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Bad habits are:

• Using “I think” to start sentences.• Using “This is why I think….” as a conclusion.

• WHY? • These are EMPTY words: no substance!• These are redundant and have no meaning.• These are “fluff” that serve to fill up a page.

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Solutions:

• Approach your writing with confidence, not with doubt!

• Writing “I think”/ “I believe”/ “I say” shows some doubt.

**Also, we already KNOW that it is what you think:

You are writing it, so it MUST BE what you think!

Be SURE of your claims!

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Practicing

Which claim is stronger & more powerful?

I think Jimmy Worth and Buck Fowler should not have harmed Flapjack. I think this because Jimmy and Buck hurt Flapjack intentionally. I think this is not right.

Jimmy Worth and Buck Fowler should not have harmed Flapjack.

Revise the rest of it, eliminating empty, fluff words.

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Constructed Response

• Use your skills!

• Prompt:

What was Shana Burg’s purpose for writing A Thousand Never Evers? Use evidence from the novel to support your response.

Tip: All writing, to some degree, is argumentative.

You may approach this as a general persuasive piece, or as an argument piece.

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Wednesday—March 19, 2014People all over the world (celebrates, celebrate) on the 17th day of March to honor the

patron saint of Ireland.

Explanation: The purpose of writing (is, are, am) to make an impact.

Explanation:Each of the students (has/have) a choice of a writing topic.

Many of the students (chooses/choose) to respond to an ethical question.