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xdkY jyif tajccHynmtxufwef;ausmif;om;rsm;taejzifh ausmif;oHk; jrefrmuAsm vufa&G;pifyg uAsmrsm;udk avhvm&mwGifvnf; pmtkyfyg uAsmpyfenf;rsm;ESifh wGJzufavhvm&ef taxmuftul jzpfEdkifygonf/ omreftm;jzifh ausmif;om;wdkYonf oHayguf? oHcsyf? av;vHk;pyfvuFm?a'G;csKd; tp&Sdaom vG,fulonfhuAsmpyfenf;rsm;udk prf;oyfa&;zGJYMunfhoifhMuonf/ uAsma&;zGJYrI0goemxHk NyD; uAsmPfcHaumif;aom ausmif;om;rsm;taejzifh pmtkyfyg uAsmpyfenf;trsKd;rsKd;udkomru? jyifyrS uAsmtrsKd;rsKd;udkyg zwfIavhvm enf;,la&;zGJYMunfhEdkifygonf/ uAsmpyfenf;rsm; oduRrf;xm;Hkjzifh ajymifajrmufaom uAsmaumif;rsm; a&;zGJYEdkifpGrf;NyD[k rrSwf,lEdkifaomfvnf; uAsmpyfenf;rsm;udk avhvmwwfuGrf;xm;jcif;onf uAsmaumif;rsm;a&;zGJ YEdkif&ef tajccHaumif;w&yf&&Sdxm;jcif;yif jzpfygonf/xkdYaMumifh q&mrsm;ESifh ausmif;om;rsm;onf vdktyfcsuf tenf;trsm;tvkduf? 0goemtEkt&ifhtvdkuf pmtkyfyg uAsmpyfenf;rsm;ESifh erlemjyuAsmrsm;udk ESpfoufaysmf&TifpGm vG,fvG,fulul zwfIavhvmoGm;Muapvdkygonf/
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11rdk;rc rD'D,m pme,fZif;tzGJUu pDpOfxkwfa0onf
rmwdum
pOf taMumif;t&m pmrsufESm
1/ jrefrmtu&mrsm; 12
2/ toHtrsKd;rsKd; 16
3/ towftrsKd;rsKd; 18
4/ oHayguf 20
5/ oHcsyf 25
6/ av;vHk;pyfvuFm 27
7/ &wk 33
8/ a'G;csKd; 39
9/ BwdcsKd; 43
10/ av;csKd; 46
11/ oHcsKd 52
12/ wsmcsif; 56
13/ tdkifcsif; 60
14/ vGrf;csif; 63
15/ aw;xyf 66
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12 rdk;rc rD'D,m pme,fZif;tzGJUu pDpOfxkwfa0onf
tcef; (1)jrefrmtu&mrsm;
o&
jrefrmbmomwGif tajccHo& (11) vHk;&Sdonf/ 4if;wkdYrSm t? tm? td? tD? tk? tl? at?tJ? atm? atmf? tdk wdkYjzpfonf/ o&qdkonfrSm rnfonfhtu&mudkrQ rrDScdk&bJ rdrdbmom toHxGufqdkEdkifaom tu&mrsm; jzpfonf/
Asnf;
Asnf;qdkonfrSm o&ESifhrSDwGJzufrSom toHxGufEdkifaom tu&mrsm;jzpfonf/
jrefrmAsnf; (33) vHk; &Sdonf/ 4if;wdkYrSm -u c * C ip q Z ps n# X ! Pw x ' " ey z A b r, & v 0 o[ V t wdkYjzpfonf/
o& ESifh Asnf; aygif;pyfyHk
Asnf;jzpfaom ]]uf}}udk o&jzpfaom ]]t}}ESifh aygif;vQif ]]u}} [l toHxGufonf/ xdkenf;wl-
uf + t = u uf + td = uduf + tm = um uf + tD = uDuf + tm; = um; uf + tD ; = uD;uf + tk = uk uf + ath = auhuf + tl = ul uf + at = auuf + tl; = ul; uf + at; = au;
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13rdk;rc rD'D,m pme,fZif;tzGJUu pDpOfxkwfa0onf
um&ef
um&ef [lonfrSm tu&m\ tqHk;oHjzpfonf/ ]]um&E}} [laom ygVdpum;rSm qif;oufvmaom pum;jzpfonf/ Oyrm - ]]u}}tu&m\toHonf ]]t}} jzpfonf/ ]]um}}tu&m\toHonf]]tm}}jzpfonf/ ]]um;}} tu&m\ toHonf ]]tm;}} jzpfonf/ ]]cJ}} [kqdkvQif ]]tJ}} um&ef[k
od&rnf/ ]]pl;}}[kqdkvQif ]]tl ;}} um&ef[k od&rnf/ um&ef,l&mwGif tu&m\tqHk;oHcsif;tnD,lonfvnf; &Sdonf/ wydk'fESifh wydk'fwdkY\tqHk;&Sd toHcsif; tnD,lonfvnf;&Sdonf/ ESpfydk'f?oHk;ydk'f paom 0guswdkY\ tqHk;&Sd toHcsif; tnD,lonfvnf; &Sdonf/ tu&m\ tqHk;um&efudk0Pum&ef? pmydk'f\tqHk;um&efudk y'um&ef? 0gus\tqH k;um&efudk 0gusum&ef [lac:Muonf/
um&ef (64) yg; &Sdonf/ atmufwGif; Z,m;jzifh azmfjyxm;ygonf/
t um&efrsKd; tm um&efrsKd; tm; um&efrsKd;
t tm tm;td () tD () tD;tk (O) tl (OD) tl; (OD;)ath at ({) at;tJh t,f tJatmh atmf atm (Mo)tdk Y tdk tdk;tuf - -atmuf - -tdkuf - -tifh tif tif;atmifh atmif atmif;tdkifh tdkif tdkif;tpf - -tOfh tOf tOf;tnfh tnf tnf;twf - -tdwf - -tkwf - -tefY tef tef;tdefY tdef tdef;tkefY tkef tkef;tyf - -tdyf - -
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tkyf - -
tHh tH trf;tdrfh tdrf tdrf;tHkY tHk tHk;28 + 18 + 18 = 64
um&efwlrsm;
atmufygwdkYonf um&efwlrsm; jzpfMuonf/um; = pm;? 0g;? ig;? vm;? xGm;? wm;? yGm;? ysm;/cif = rif ? Muif? jrif? pif? vGif? &Sif/aumif; = axmif;? armif;? aomif;? ausmif;? apmif;/ar = az? aqG ? a0? ajr? a&T? aiG/prf; = *srf ;? pGrf;? urf;? zrf;? vrf;/apm = arm? awm? aom? ajym? aum/at; = ai;? av;? awG;? aqG;? a&;/wdk; = Nzd K;? pdk;? rdk;? tdk;? BudK;? qdk;/xGwf = uRwf ? vGwf? qGwf? rGwf? &Twf/eD = wD? pD? &D? NyD? csD? oD? nD/
txufygtwdkif; um&efoabmudk odatmif tBudrfBudrf txyfxyf avhusifh&rnf/ xdkYjyifwvHk;csif;xyfrQru ESpfvH k;wGJ? oHk;vHk;wGJ? av;vHk;wGJ ponfjzifh um&eftxyf? eabxyfrsm;udkvnf;avhusifhoifhonf/
atmufwGif erlemjyxm;ygonf/
1/ rmrm 6/ rmrm csmcsmvmyg/ omom ,m,m/
2/ ntcg 7/ yef;ydawmufrif;vrom/ vrf;wavSsmufoif;/
3/ apmaz 8/ rJZmawmifajcaemaus/ oJomaomifajr
4/ pHkNrdKifwGif ; yGJcganmifa&/xHkBudKifoif;/ 9/ ay;p&mvnf; aiGr&Sd
5/ a&wHcG ef ajy;p&mvnf; ajrr&Sd/a[r0ef 10/ tMuHr&Sd aemufvdkuf
qefr&Sd aumufpdkuf/
txufyg erlemrsm;udkrSD; trsKd;rsKd;avhusifhMunfhyg/ txl;ojzifh pum;yHkrsm;? pum;xmrsm;udk avhusifhMunfhvQif ydk vG,fvG,fulul oabmaygufygvdrfhrnf/ txl;rSwf&efrSm um&efnDatmif
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15rdk;rc rD'D,m pme,fZif;tzGJUu pDpOfxkwfa0onf
avhusifh&mwGif toHvnf;nD? towfvnf;nDvQif taumif; qHk;jzpfonf/ odkY&mwGif uAsmhoabm
onf &GwfqdkrIudk y"mexm;aomaMumifh toHnD towfrnDyJvnf; pyfqdkavh&SdMuonf/ Oyrmtm;jzifh -yef;vdkarT;ygapprf;vdkat;ygap [laompum;wGif ]]yef;}}ESifh ]]prf;}}onf towf rwlacs/ odkY&mwGif toHudk
t"duxm; pyfqdkxm;jcif;jzpfonf/&Sifr[m&|om& paom yk*dKvfwdkYum; toHnD towfnD pyfqdkavh&Sdonf/ rnfodkYyifjzpfap
um&efEdkifatmif avhusifh&mwGif toHtrsKd;rsKd;xyf avhusifhoifhonf/
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16 rdk;rc rD'D,m pme,fZif;tzGJUu pDpOfxkwfa0onf
tcef; (2)toHtrsKd;rsKd;
uAsmzGJYqdk&mwGif (1) yuwdoH(2) atmufjrpfoH(3) 0doZeDoH (0paygufoH)
[l toHoHk;rsKd;&Sdonf/ atmufwGif Z,m;jzifh jyxm;ygonf/
yuwdoH atmufjrpfoH 0doZeDoHtm tmh = t tm;tD tDh = td tD;tl tlY = tk tl;at ath = ath at;t,f t,fh = tJh tJ;
(1) yuwdoH qd konfrSm atmufjrpfESifh 0doZeD rygaom um&efjzpfonf/ wufoH [lvnf;ac:onf/
(2) atmufjrpfoH qdkonfrS m atmufjrpfygaom um&efpkESifh atmufjrpfrygaomfvnf;atmufjrpfoH &Gwf zwf&aom t? td? tk ponf h um&efpkyif jzpfonf/ oufoH [lvnf;ac:onf/
(3) 0doZeDoH qdkonfrSm 0paygufygaomtoHyif jzpfonf/ edrfhoH [lvnf; ac:onf /uowf? powf? wowf? yowf wdkYrSm atmufjrpfoHuJhodkY toHk;jyKEdkifonf/ xdktowfoHrsm;
udk wdkifoH [l ac:onf/xdktoHoHk;rsKd;teuf yuwdoHac: wufoHudk csDoH [lvnf; ac:onf /atmufjrpfoHac: oufoH? 0doZeDoHac: edrfhoHESifh wdkifoHwdkYudk uAsmvuFm\ tcsoHrsm;
jzpfaomaMumifh csoH [lvnf; ac:onf/uAsmzGJYqdk&mwGif csDoHESifhcsoHwdkYudk wvSnfhpDa&;EdkifvQif okwdom,memaysmfzG,f jzpfonf/
toHae toHxm;? toHoGm; toHvm acsmarm ajyjypfwwfonf/ uAsmpmqdk\ cHpm;rIudkvdkufcsDoHcsoHajyjypfatmif pDuHk;wwf&onf/ Oyrmtm;jzifh atmufygudkcef;ysKdUvm pmydk'fudkIyg/
]]Zmwdykn? *kPfrmejzifhoHy[Hk;pHk;? zufrJhMuHK;om;tm;oHk;axmifxm;? rsKd;av;yg;\
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wufyGm;apmifrmef? vTm;wHcGefudk
jyif;0Sefrkefwdkif;? cwfcsKd;vIdif;jzwfydkif;vSnf;cs? wwfpGrf;vSom;}}
tydk'fwGif ajyjypfom,maom wufoH um&efrsm;udk tvGefroHk;bJ jyif;xefrmausmaomtoHrsm;udkomoHk; zGJYqdkxm;onf udk awGYEdkifygonf/ tvm;wl uAsmyg toHrsm;udk ppfaq;MunfhIEdkifonf/
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uAsmq&m wifrdk;
18 rdk;rc rD'D,m pme,fZif;tzGJUu pDpOfxkwfa0onf
tcef; (3)towftrsKd;rsKd;
towfqdkonfrSm t-o& toH aoatmif owfxm;aom wHcGefvTm;jcif;yif jzpfonf/towf (10) rsKd;&Sdonf/ xdk (10) rsKd;um; -
u owf = uf ... (uuf )i owf = if ... (uif )p owf = pf ... (upf )O (nuav;) owf = Of ... (pOf)n owf = nf ... (rnf )w owf = wf ... (wwf )e owf = ef ... (qef )y owf = yf ... (tyf )r owf = rf ... (urf ), owf = ,f ... (&,f )xdkYjyif jrefrmpmayxJwGif ygVdbmomrS qif;oufvmaom ygVdouf towftu&mwdkYvnf;
rsm;pGm&Sdonf/ 4if;wdkYudk owfxl; [k ac:onf/ ygVdouf towf 26 yg;&Sdonf/ ,if; towf(26) yg;wdkYrSm atmufygtwdkif; jzpfonf/
trSwfpOf towf trnf om"u
1/ uf u-owf u&0duf2/ cf c-owf rkcf3/ *f *-owf b0*f4/ if i-owf tmedoif5/ pf p-owf {u!pf6/ Zf Z-owf {u&mZf7/ Of O(nuav;) owf ,mOf8/ #f #-owf 0#f9/ Xf X-owf ygXf
10/ Pf P-owf Pf11/ wf w-owf twdwf12/ xf x-owf &d,mykxf13/ 'f '-owf yk'f
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19rdk;rc rD'D,m pme,fZif;tzGJUu pDpOfxkwfa0onf
14/ "f "-owf 0ZD&m0k"f15/ ef e-owf Adrmef16/ yf y-owf ZrL'dyf17/ Af A-owf j'Af18/ bf b-owf vmbf19/ rf r-owf tm&mrf20/ ,f ,-owf t"dym,f21/ &f &-owf rm&f22/ vf v-owf wuodkvf23/ 0f 0-owf odOdK0f;24/ of o-owf Oykof
25/ [f [-owf od[f&moD26/ Vf V-owf oD[kdVf
uAsmpDuHk;&mwGif towfcsif; wlnDEdkiforQ wlnDatmif tm;xkwfMuonf/ a&S;ynm&SdwdkYonf(e owfudk e owfcsif;) (r owfudk r owfcsif;) (y owfudk yowfcsif;) (w owfudk wowfcsif;) wlnDatmif *kjyK pyfqdkwwfMuonf/
,cktcgwGif towfwlum&efrsm;jzifh r&Edkifaomtcg towfrwl um&efwdkYudk oHk;pGJ Muonfudkvnf; awGY&wwfonf/ toHudk y"mejyKpyfaomenf;[k rSwf,l&ef jzpfonf/
,if;odkY towfwl ? toHwlrpyfyJ toHwludk t"duxm; pyfqdkvQif ynm&SdwdkY ESpfoufyHkr&/]i e r? w y ESpf&yf? oHwlpyfaomf? ynwfac:xHk;? pmwHk; rnf&} [k refvnfq&mawmf
rdefYqdkcJhzl;onfudk axmuf/
pOf towf trnf om"u
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uAsmq&m wifrdk;
20 rdk;rc rD'D,m pme,fZif;tzGJUu pDpOfxkwfa0onf
tcef; (4)oHayguf
oHayguft"dym,f/ / toHudk aygufa&muf ay:vGifpGm zwf&Gwf&aom vuFmwdktrsKd;tpm; jzpfonf/ jrefrmuAsm pwif oifMum;aomtcg ]uAsmtp oHaygufu} [k qdkdk;&Sdonfhtwdkif;oHaygufudk a&S;OD;pGm oifMum;ay;avh&Sdonf/ oHaygufonf av;vHk; pyfvuFmzGJYenf;\tajccHjzpfonf/ uAsmzGJYenf;trsKd;rsKd;wGif tvG,fqHk;jzpfonf/
oHaygufpyfenf;udk vG,fvG,fodEdkif&ef ]tp av;vHk;? tv,f oHk;? tqHk; ig; ckepf} [lrSwfom;avh&Sdonf/
yxr oHaygufpyfenf; (4 - 3 - 2)
(1) tpydk'fwGif av;vHk; &Sd&rnf/(2) tv,fwGif oHk;vHk; &Sd&rnf/(3) aemufqHk;tcswGif ig;vHk; odkYr[kwf ckepfvHk; &Sdrnf/(4) um&ef,lyHkrSm 4- 3- 2 pepf jzpfonf/ tpydk'f av;vHk; teuf pwkwae&m? tv,f
ydk'f oHk;vHk;teuf wwd,ae&m? aemufqHk; ydk'f ig;vHk; odkYr[kwf ckepfvHk;teuf 'kwd,ae&mwdkYum&efnD&rnf[k qdkvdkonf/
erlem
tp av;vHk; - - - (+)tv,f oHk; - - (+)tqHk; ig; ckepf - (+) - - - /
(odkYr[kwf)- (+) - - - - - /
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21rdk;rc rD'D,m pme,fZif;tzGJUu pDpOfxkwfa0onf
erlemjy uAsmrsm;
1/ zGJYEGJYa&;pD - - - (+)uAsmoD - - (+)arhqD ay;vdkuf&m/ - (+) - - - /oHcsKdpyfvm; - - - (+)aw;xyfvm; - - (+)arum; rodyg/ - (+) - - - /zwfMunfhjyefvQif - - - (+)olYpm,Of - - (+)arhwGif r&Sif;yg/ - (+) - - - /cspfygaMumif;vm; - - - (+)rkef;aMumif;vm; - - (+)arum; rodyg/ - (+) - - - /
aiGwm&D
2/ a&mifjcnfajcmufoG,fb0*fu,ftHhzG,f q,fh&Spfjzm/
3/ &eHYrjy,fyef;pHy,fcufoG,f ESmarmif;jzm/
4/ ysKdysKd&G,f&G,faemifhaqGr,fcspfzG,frsm;onfom/
5/ rif;qufig;oG,f&SifbdkYr,feef;v,fwifonfom/
6/ ydefaumavSi,fjrpfyifv,ftvG,frul;om/
7/ ESif;wzGJzGJwydkYwGJaygufvJiHkum;um;/
9/ ra&mifhr&Jqm;ysm;jrJtrJwpfESifhig;/
10/ rdk;r&GmyJclukdvTJcETJqifumxm;/
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11/ erf;ruHk
vSrsKd;pHkydkufNcHKwauG;auG;/12/ csrf;rvHk
cef;a&TbHkwlpHkrpufao;/
13/ a&TMumy'HkyGifh0giHkxHkxHkoif;ysH YarT;/
14/ wdrfndKyHkYyHkYrdk;tHkYtHkYaqmfvIHYajrmufavnif;/
15/ rjyefrwHkYwNyHKUNyHKUcspfwHkYrajyvQif;/
pdEausmfol OD;Mou0dvuPmowfyHk
avhusifhcef;
1/ atmufygpmydk'fwdkYudk oHaygufuAsm jzpfvmatmif jznfhyg/(u) jrom;aumufyif
v,f,mjyif- (+) - - -/
(c) anmif;&GufavcsD- - (+)ryD0dk;w0g;/
(*) - - - (+)&Gmonfhrdk;jynfusKd;twGufyg/
2/ atmufygtaMumif;t&mwdkYudk oHaygufwpfyk'fpD zGJYyg/(u) wdkYawm&Gm(c) eHeufcif;(*) yef;O,smOf
3/ atmufyg oHaygufrsm;wGif rSmaomae&mrsm;udk jyifay;yg/(u) oHk;vlYxdyfyef;
xGwfMuiSef;yGifhvef;usufoa&/
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23rdk;rc rD'D,m pme,fZif;tzGJUu pDpOfxkwfa0onf
(c) pmusufMuyg
ntcsdefom,mMunfEl;zG,f/(*) aiGMu,fjzLazG;
qGwfvdkY,lb,foljzpfoenf;/
'kwd, oHaygufpyfenf; (4 - 3 - 1)
oHaygufpyfenf;wGif 4 - 3 - 1 um&efyHkpHudk oHk;onf/erlem/ / ESvHk;npfnrf ; - - - (+)
vlrdkufoGrf ; - - (+)vrf;udkrodEdkif/ (+) - - - - /
erlemjy uAsmrsm;
(1) wGif;jyif tdyfzeftwefwefrSefap&Sifh opm/
(2) wazsmufqdwfqdwfrsufpdrSdwfydwfwHk zHk;wHk zGifh/
(3) vlysif; vlNydef;pdwfrxdef;bdef;udk pm; rIdif/
u0dvuPmowfyHk
avhusifhcef;
1/ atmufygwkdYudk oHaygufjzpfatmif jznfhpyfyg/(u) aiGESif;ykvJ
aqmif;OD;yGJ(+) - - - - /
(c) BudKwifjyifqif- - (+)oifwdkYtm;xkwfMu/
(*) - - - (+)wdkYtm;xm;EGm;nDaemifESifhyg/
rSwfcsuf/ / oHaygufpyf enf; tajccH &vQif ig;vHk;csESifhjzpf ap? ckepfvHk;csESifhjzpfapoifhawmfovdk pyfqdkEdkifonf/
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24 rdk;rc rD'D,m pme,fZif;tzGJUu pDpOfxkwfa0onf
ckepfvHk;cs&mwGifvnf; -
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um&efpepfudk yHkpHjzifhjyNyD;jzpf pmjzifh xyf&Sif;rjyawmhyg/ ausmif;ol ausmif;om;rsm;em;IyfaxG;rnfpdk; tus,frjyjcif; jzpfygonf/
aw;xyfonf apmif;? ywvm; paom wl&d,mypnf; wckckESifh oDqdk&aom aw;uAsmrsKd;jzpf&m aw;xyfudk oDqdkwwfatmif avhusifh&monf/
rEav;acwfonf aw;xyfxGef ;um;aom acwfjzpfonf/ OD;ykn? tcsKyfwef;q&maz?
awmiforefv,fpm; armifazi,f paom pmqdkwdkY\ aw;xyfrsm;udk &SmazGavhvmMu&ef jzpfonf/
erlemjy aw;xyfrsm;
1/ olajymif,if acgifuGefYvdkYaMumif0HhwJh vlyga&SmifrwGefY ausmufaomfrm,ifaemufawmfyg oHacsmif;/aysmhMupdkY nDvG,f,ifa&TqD0,f csufwJhza,mif;/tdk;awmfu rJhydef,if&GJUvdrfvdrf pavmif;/
olcsKd,if MuHacsmif;yghPfapmif; cg;rl/wrmyif xdyfzsm;uMuuf[if;cg; oD;EdkifwJhvl/
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olrnf;u arSmifulr,f
oljzL,if jzLcsif;yghMuifcsif; Muifr,fqdkudk;qavmufydk/qdk;MupdkY wu,fqdk,if'jrAdkvfvkyfEdkifiJhav;/
OD;ykn
2/ pnf;pdrfawmf,pfrl;vdkY? rjzpfzl; Em? uopfOD; od*FgrSm? tvdrmvGefom;/ / a&Tig;oef;ESpfuka#rSm? tazsmfajz MuL;a&mhovm;/ / bolYurS rrIvmw,f? ukPmw&m;/ / vlY&Gmudk Iygjim;r,fvdkY? bk&m;udkol0g/ tifMuifNrdKif ukdefeef;rSm? pm pmwrf;xdk;vsufyg/ / aum0dvomryg?tdkEmodMum;iJh? bk&m;udk udk;uG,frSef? qifcJhjrefjref/ / axmifpu K rSdefcJhjyefvQif? pdefrsufrSef
qufr,fyghav;/ OD;ykn
3/ a&T0wbHktkyf? pmvkyfwdkif; igyg? b,fawmhurS vlY&Gmudk? rIwmr&Sd/ pdwfnpfwdkif;tjypfwifonf? igbk&if rdk;utod/ / tusifhwef pm*DrSm? wqHjcnfr&Sd/ / b,folYrSm bmr&Sdw,fvdkY?igrod xifw,f/ / b,fzl;pm b,frSmnm;wmvJ? igodMum;odyg&JUuG,f/ / u,foifhrS igu,fr,f?wu,fyif {uefrS wfygawmh? 0w&yfig;bHkpH? aMu;wGufrnfMuH/ / raumif;rI usKyfMuHvQif?a&Tpm&Hpl;ygaphav;/ /
OD;ykn
avhusifhcef;
1/ erlemjyxm;aom aw;xyfrsm;teuf ESpfouf&m wpfyk'f\ um&ef,lyHkudk azmfjyyg/2/ aw;xyf[lonf tb,fenf;/3/ aw;xyfpyfwwfvdkvQif rnfodkYusifhoHk;&rnf[k OD;yknu rSmoenf;/4/ atmufygtaMumif;t&mwdkYudk aw;xyfzGJYyg/
(u) jrwfq&m(c) bk&m;yGJawmf(*) rdk;aomufcsdef
uAsmq&m wifrdk;
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rdk;rc\ *kPfxl;aqmifrsm;
2011 rdk;rcrdwfaqGrsm; = tifeft,f'Daxmufulonfh EdkifiHa&;tusOf;om; 600
2010 oufBuD;pmayynm&Sif - armifom&? OD;0if;az? armifpGrf;&nf? a':rmrmat;
2009 ckESpf rdk;rccspfolrsm; - tifeft,f'DygwD? vlxk pdef0if;? armif0Ho? tawG;tjrif r*Zif;
2008 ckESpf - rdk;rccspfolrsm; - [Hom0wD OD;0if;wif
tMuHay;tzGJY
wifrdk; (2003-2006)? armifpGrf;&nf (2003 rS)? rmrmat; (2006 rS)? OD;0if;az (2006 rS)?
aMu;rkHOD;aomif; (2007 - 2008)
t,f'Dwm tzGJY
armif&pf (2003)? Zmenf0if; (2004)? rsKd;atmifvif; (2009)? udkOD; (2010)
pmapmif ESifh 'DZdkif;
udkOD;? roEm (2005)? atmifxuf (2010)
toH
a&'D,dkcspfolrsm; (qpf'eD) - OD;yefwsm(2006)?
(eef;azmaq;? apmt,faum? ar&D? cifoufyef? ESif;jrwfcdkif? oHpOf&wem)
owif; ESifh jyefMum;a&; tzGJY (2004)
rdk;rc taxmufawmfrsm;
0kdif;awmfom;rsm;
jrefrmtdkiftufpfyD (2006)? Mo&o (2007)? aumif;uifjym (2008)? rdk;rc0if; (2007)? atmifa0; (2008)?
nGefYaxG; (2008)? aZrdIif; (2008)? oef;pdk;vIdif (2008)? rdk;csKdoif; (2008)? a[refoZif (2008)?
opfaumif;tdrf (2009)? rdk;pJae (2009)? 0if;jrwf (2009)? avmt,fpdk; (2009)? cdkifrmausmfaZm (2009)?
*spfwl; (rkH&Gm) (2009)? yef;csDatmifvwf (2009)? umwGef; apmidk (2010)? umwGef; bDkrm (2010)? yef;csD
atmifxuf (2010)? umwGef; aZmfrIdif;(OuvH) (2010)? &ef0if; (awmifwHcg;) (2010)? cifvGef; (2010)?
Zm0g&D (r,f&Dvef;) (2011)? udkwifat; (2011)? au (2011)? yGifhjzLeEm (2011)? rkd;,Hrc (2011)?
cifESif;vGif (2011)? ol&defxuf (2011)? oef;0if;vIdif (2011)?
rdk;rc uGef,uf
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(1) rdk;rc a&'D,dk - wifrdk;eJY 12 v&moD cHpm;rIrsm;? toHoGif;tifwmAsL; pkpnf;rIrsm;? 2004
(2) rdk;rc a&'D,dk - 2004 ckESpf tywfpOf tpDtpOfrsm; toHzdkifaygif;csKyf? 2005
(3) Zm*em - oD;av;oD;eJY aq;a&mifpkHtNidrfh? 'DAD'D &kyfoHacG? 2006
(4) rdk;rc rD'D,m - vpOfowif;v$mrsm; 2006 aygif;csKyf? yD'Dtufzf pD'D? 2007
(5) Zm*em - 1990 oBuFef oHcsyfrsm; - pD'D &kyfoHacG ? 2007
(6) 2007 oHCmhoydwf ta&;awmfykH "mwfykHrSwfwrf;rsm; - yD'Dtufzf pD'D ? 2007
(7) 2007 oHCmhoydwf ta&;awmfykH trSwfw& aw;oDcsif;? uAsm rSwfwrf;rsm; - 'DAD'D &kyfoHacG? 2007
(8) uAsmq&mBuD; OD;