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RURAL COMMUNITIES: ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES I would like to say that according to a recent survey (CONDUCTED) BY the Spanish Association of General Medicine, carried out in 25 Spanish villages, the main advantages and disadvantages of living in a rural community are the following: LIVING in a rural community can be considered a great luck for a lot of people that live in a town. Certainly, it has some excellent advantages COMPARED to liFE in the town. THOSE LIVING/THOSE WHO LIVE in the country have a healthier life, the air that they breath is clear, NON POLLUTED, they don’t have to hear the car horns and the garbage truck every morning. OTHER advantages are you will probably pay less for a house with similar features in the country than in the city, also you will probably have more friends because you will meet everybody; HOWEVER, the latter can be considered an inconvenient TOO. On the other hand, if you work in the city you need to commute everyday and it is very TIRING FURTHERMORE/BESIDES, if you go BY CAR/DRIVE YOUR OWN CAR YOU will PROBABLY have traffic jam several times IN THE SAME DAY. Certainly, in the city there ARE more possibilitIES to visit museums, theatres or doing OTHER activities you like. In my opinion, CHOOSING to live in a rural community or a town, you should analyze how you would like to live, because if you don’t choose well, you will feel quite uncomfortable in chosen DESTINATION/ /ABOUT YOUR CHOICE. NB. PLEASE NOTE THAT THE INTRO IS NOT VERY CONVENIENT AS IT IS ALREADY TALKING ABOUT ADVANTAGES OR DISADVANTAGES INSTEAD OF OFFERING A GENERAL/BRIEF INTRODUCTION TO THE TOPIC.

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RURAL COMMUNITIES: ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES

I would like to say that according to a recent survey (CONDUCTED) BY the Spanish Association of General Medicine, carried out in 25 Spanish villages, the main advantages and disadvantages of living in a rural community are the following:

LIVING in a rural community can be considered a great luck for a lot of people that live in a town. Certainly, it has some excellent advantages COMPARED to liFE in the town.

THOSE LIVING/THOSE WHO LIVE in the country have a healthier life, the air that they breath is clear, NON POLLUTED, they don’t have to hear the car horns and the garbage truck every morning. OTHER advantages are you will probably pay less for a house with similar features in the country than in the city, also you will probably have more friends because you will meet everybody; HOWEVER, the latter can be considered an inconvenient TOO.

On the other hand, if you work in the city you need to commute everyday and it is very TIRING FURTHERMORE/BESIDES, if you go BY CAR/DRIVE YOUR OWN CAR YOU will PROBABLY have traffic jam several times IN THE SAME DAY.

Certainly, in the city there ARE more possibilitIES to visit museums, theatres or doing OTHER activities you like.

In my opinion, CHOOSING to live in a rural community or a town, you should analyze how you would like to live, because if you don’t choose well, you will feel quite uncomfortable in chosen DESTINATION/ /ABOUT YOUR CHOICE.

NB. PLEASE NOTE THAT THE INTRO IS NOT VERY CONVENIENT AS IT IS ALREADY TALKING ABOUT ADVANTAGES OR DISADVANTAGES INSTEAD OF OFFERING A GENERAL/BRIEF INTRODUCTION TO THE TOPIC.