mid year exam form 4 2011
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SULIT 1119/1Time: 1 hour 45 minutes
This question paper consists of two sections: Section
A and Section B. Answer both sections. You are advised to spend
about 45 minutes on Section A and one hour on Section B.
Section A: Directed Writing
You are advised to spend about 45 minutes on this section.
Question 1
You are the head prefect of your school. You have been given thetask of organizing the upcoming canteen day. You have been told tocome up with a rough plan on the various aspects of the event.Write a report to the principal giving him your proposal for this
event.1. Food Stalls
To be set up and managed by each Form 4 class.
Types of food sold will vary according to the class in charge.
2. Game-stands
Six different carnival style game booths
Managed by the form 2 classes
Prizes to be sponsored
3. Stage performances
Handled by Pn. Saloma, Cultural Club Advisor.
Approximately seven events.
4. Security
Prefects board to be in-charge.
Two prefects to be stationed at each entrance to the school Several groups to patrol the corridors.
When writing your report, you should remember:
* to address it to the principal.* to use all the points given.* to elaborate on the points given.* to use the format of a report.
(35 marks)
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Section B: Continuous Writing
[ 50 marks]
You are advised to spend about one hour on this section.
Question 2
Write a composition of about 350 words on one of the following
topics:
(a) Things that I would change about myself.
(b) Describe someone whom you look upon as a role model.
(c) Health is better than wealth. What is your opinion?
(d) Write a story that begins with, ``I turned over the question
paper..
(e) Fears
KERTAS SOALAN TAMAT
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Section A : DIRECTED WRITING
This question is assessed as follows :
1) Allocation of Marks :
FORMAT : 3 marks
CONTENT : 12 marksLANGUAGE : 20 marks
----------TOTAL 35 marks
======2) FORMAT & CONTENT MARKS :
FORMAT MARKS
i) F1 = To : The Principle of SMK _______________
ii) F2 = From : [Name], Head Prefect of SMK ________________iii) F3 = Title
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Sub-total 3CONTENT
(All keywords must be mentioned or paraphrased before anycontent point can be awarded. If any idea is incomplete, content
point cannot be awarded)
C1 Food stalls to be set up and managed by form 4classes.
1
C2 Types of food sold will vary according to the class in
charge.
1
C3 Six different carnival-style game booths. 1C4 Booths managed by the form 2 classes. 1C5 Prizes to be sponsored. 1C6 Stage performances handled by Pn. Saloma, Cultural
Club Advisor1
C7 Approximately seven events. 1
C8 Prefects board to be in-charge of security. 1C9 Two prefects to be stationed at each entrance. 1C10 Several groups to patrol the corridors. 1C11 Proposed date of event. 1
C12 Reason for choosing the date. 1Sub-total
Grand Total
1215
DIRECTED WRITING LANGUAGE
Mark
Range
Description of Criteria
Language accurate with occasional first draft slips
Sentence structures varied and sophisticated
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19 20
Sentence length and type employed to achieve intendedeffect
Vocabulary wide, sophisticated and used with precision
Punctuation accurate and helpful
Spelling accurate
Paragraphs unified and well-linked
Topic consistent and relevant
Style formal, informative and concise
Tone always appropriate for a speech
B
16 18
Language accurate with minor or first draft errors
Sentences varied in length and type
Complex structures confidently used
Vocabulary wide, conveying intended shades of meaning withsome precision
Punctuation and spelling almost always accurate
Style and tone appropriate for a speech
Writing relevant and interest is sustained throughout the
speech
C
13 15
Language largely accurate
Simple structures no errors, mistakes in moresophisticated structures - tendency to use one type of structure
Vocabulary adequate to convey meaning but not precise
Sentences some variety of length and type
Punctuation and spelling generally accurate
Paragraphs some unity but with inappropriate linkage
Writing relevant but interest is not sustained throughout thespeech
Style and tone appropriate for a speech
D
10 12
Language sufficiently accurate
Patches of clarity
Sentence length and type - limited
Sentence structures - mistakes with more complex sentences
Vocabulary adequate but lacks precision
Spelling simple words are spelt correctly; errors in unfamiliarwords
Punctuation - generally correct
Style and tone appropriate for a speech
Paragraphs - lacks unity
E
7 9
Meaning never in doubt
Single Word Errors (SWEs) frequent and hampers reading
Sentence structures simple, accurate but not sustained
Vocabulary - limited
Spelling simple words are accurate; errors in more difficultwords
Punctuation frequent errors
Style and tone at times, inappropriate for a speech
Paragraphs lacks unity
Meaning fairly clear
Single Word Errors (SWEs) frequent and impedes reading
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SULIT 1119/1U (i)
4 6
Sentences a few accurate structures
Spelling and Punctuation numerous errors
Paragraphs sometimes used correctly
Style and tone often inappropriate for a speech
U (ii)
2 3
Multiple Word Errors (MWEs) requires re-reading andre-organising before meaning becomes clear
Sense decipherable
Sentences one or two accurate simplesentences
Content comprehensible
Style and tone hidden by density of errorsU (iii)
0 1
Almost entirely impossible to recognise as English
Whole sections - do not make sense or copied from text
0 mark awarded if writing makes no sense at all frombeginning to end
Answers
Question 1
To : Principal of S.M.K Kampung Tun
From : Vijay Shan, Head Prefect of S.M.K Kampung Tun 1st
May, 2008
Title : Proposal For School Canteen Day
The most suitable date on which to organise the schools
annual canteen day would be on the 27th of June 2008. This would
be the Friday after the semester exams, and therefore the studentswould enjoy themselves more.
The first issue to be handled is the food stalls. It proposed that
the stalls should be designated to the form 4 students. Each class
can be given the task of handling one stall. There would be a total of
nine stalls if this is the case. The types of food to be sold will be left
to the discretion of each class. However, the Prefect Board will
monitor them to avoid any unwanted or unhygienic food from being
sold.
Besides the food stalls, it is customary that a few game-stands
are set up. It is submitted that there should be around six booths of
various carnival style games. These booths can be managed by
selected form 2 classes. It is hoped that sponsors can be
approached to provide the prizes for each game booth. These
sponsors may be shop owners or even parents who wish to donate
something.
As for the stage performances, Puan Saloma has agreed to
take charge of the events. As the schools Cultural Club Advisor, she
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SULIT 1119/1would be the best person to handle this aspect of the Canteen Day.
She has proposed approximately seven events for the day.
The Prefect Board will be in charge of security on that day. It
has been decided that two prefects will be stationed at each of the
schools entrance to prevent any students from playing truant.
Several groups of prefects will be assigned to patrol the schoolgrounds and corridors while the event takes place.
It hoped that this proposal is acceptable. Your cooperation is
greatly appreciated. Thank you.
Vijay Shan
(Head Prefect)
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SULIT 1119/1MARKING SCHEME FOR CONTINUOUS WRITING
(SECTION B)
1) The candidates response will be assessed based on impression.
2) The examiner shall read and re-read the response carefully and at the same timeunderline for gross or minor errors or put in insertion marks (^) where sucherrors occur.
3) The examiner should also mark for good vocabulary or expressions by putting amerit tick at the end of such merits.
4) The examiner shall fit the candidates response against the most appropriate bandhaving most of the criteria as found in the band. The examiner may have to refer to upperor lower bands to the band already chosen to BEST FIT the students response to themost appropriate band criteria that are found in the script.
5) Justifythe band and marks given, if necessary, by commenting on the strengths andweaknesses of the candidates response, using the criteria found in the band.
CONTINUOUS WRITING
MARKRANGE
DESCRIPTION OF CRITERIA
A
44 50
Language entirely accurate, with occasional first draft slips
Sentence structures - varied and sophisticated
Vocabulary wide and precise with shades of meaning
Punctuation and spelling accurate and helpful
Paragraphs well-planned, unified and linked
Topic consistent and relevant
Readers Interest aroused and sustained throughout writing
B
38 43
Language accurate, with occasional minor errors or first draftslips
Sentences varied lengths and types, some complex structures
Vocabulary wide and precise with some shades of meaning
Punctuation and spelling almost always accurate
Paragraphs evidence of planning, appropriately linked
Writing relevant
Readers Interest - mostly aroused and sustained throughout
C
32 37
Language largely accurate Sentence some variety in length and type
Simple structures error-free; errors with more ambitiousstructures
Vocabulary wide enough to convey meaning but lacks precision
Punctuation accurate in simple sentences; errors in morecomplex use
Spelling mistakes in more sophisticated words
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Paragraphs show unity, at times inappropriately linked
Writing relevant, lacks originality
Readers Interest aroused but not sustained
D
26 31
Language sufficiently accurate
Patches of clear, accurate language
Sentences some variety in type and length
Vocabulary adequate but not developed to show intendedprecision
Punctuation and spelling generally correct
Writing relevant but lacks interest
E
20 - 25
Meaning never in doubt
Single Word Errors (SWEs) frequent and serious enough tohamper reading
Sentence structures accurate but not sustained for long
Vocabulary limited, simple; difficult to understand in moreambitious structures
Spelling simple words are spelt correctly
Paragraphs lack unity or are haphazardly arranged Writing - some relevance; topic is partially treated
High incidence of linguistic errors
U (i)
14 19
Meaning fairly clear
Single Word Errors (SWEs) very frequent and impede reading/cause blurring
Vocabulary many serious errors of various kinds
Sentences often simple and repetitive; very few accurate ones
Punctuation and spelling sometimes used correctly
Paragraphs lack unity or no paragraphs at all
U (ii)
8 13
Sense - decipherable
Multiple Word Errors (MWEs) very frequent, impede reading /cause blurring; structures require re-reading before beingunderstood
Sentences - only a few accurate sentences; mostly simple ones
Length short
U (iii)
0 7
Writing - almost entirely impossible to read; makes little or nosense at all
Occasional patches of clarity (marks can be awarded)
Vocabulary simple words used
0 to scripts with no sense from beginning to end
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