Working Title: Fathers Day

By Dan Lane

The Main Conventions of My Thriller

Danger, Death, Realistic, Twist, Suspense, Tension- it will captivate the audienceFlashback- Information, understand itClose-Ups and Low Key LightingMale Protagonist & Antagonist

The Narrative A Father and Son- Son’s has lost reputation- father has to care of it

CharactersGeorge (Martin’s Father)- Shotgun,Martin- Begging for his lifeBilly (Sub-Character)- Pushed off tree-house Michael C, Hall, Tom Hardy and Gary Oldman

Target Audience ResearchLocation- Empty House, City, Library, Woods, Isolated

Dialogue- Even Response

Key Elements- Twist, Suspense, Realistic, Cliffhangers, Death, Excitement, Music, Few Characters, Flashbacks

My Focus Group Picture- Greyscale (old fashioned)Make characters clear

My Target AudienceTeenagers 15+ to older adults (15-30)Males (Action, Violence)People on Youtube

Things to ConsiderRating: 15- Contains Violent and Threating ScenesCredits at the endSimilar Films: Bourne Franchise,

How Will It Attract The Audience?

Narrative- CliffhangerUnanswered QuestionsSoundtrackTension between Characters