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SIMILARITIES BETWEEN THE TWO SHORT STORY,
HOW TO HOOK A HUSBAND AND MARIAH
1. Both short story is about the marriage in life that we have to face as a human.
2. Both short story is about relationship between family and community. For
example, in the short story of “ Mariah” relationship between Imam and Cik
Yam that is husband and wife while Cik Gu Nab is village community. In the
short story of “How to hook a husband” relationship between Malar and her
parents is family while Muthu is a tenant of the neighbour’s back room.
3. The main character of both short story is women. Malar is the main character
in the short story of How to hook a husband and Mariah in the short story of
Mariah.
5 Important Elements of a Short Story
A short story is a short work of fiction. Fiction, as you know, is prose writing about
imagined events and characters. Prose writing differs from poetry in that it does not
depend on verses, meters or rhymes for its organization and presentation.
CHARACTER
A character is a person, or sometimes even an animal, who takes part in the action of a short story or other literary work.
SETTING
The setting of a short story is the time and place in which it happens. Authors often use descriptions of landscape, scenery, buildings, seasons or weather to provide a strong sense of setting.
PLOT
A plot is a series of events and character actions that relate to the central conflict.
THEME
The theme is the central idea or belief in a short story.
MORAL VALUES
The good habits that must be followed in daily life.
COMPARE AND CONTRAST ELEMENTS IN THE SHORT STORIES.
PLOT
How To Hook A Husband Mariah
1. EXPOSITION
The story is about a
Ceylonese family, who has
five daughters and one son.
Their lives depend on the
father’s pension money.
The parents ask their
daughter to look for
husband by themselves
because they cannot afford
to pay the dowry.
2. RISING ACTION
Malar try the best to hook a
husband. Malar always
follow her mother to
market, temples and
wedding houses and
constant attempt to attract
male attention by wearing a
beautiful dress and
personal adornments. The
situation is become worse
1. EXPOSITION
The story is about Mariah.
A widow who sell nasi
belauk to the villagers. She
was very attractive person
and become an attention to
the men in the village.
“Rumour had it that her
nasi weren't much to crow
about, but it was a
combination of Mariah's
swaying as well as her
smile that made all men
flock to the village square”.
Her husband had passed
away soon after.
2. RISING ACTION
Cik Gu Nab, one of the
local women leaders in the
village come to Cik Yam
house. the reason she
came to Cik Yam house in
not just a usual visit, but
she come to gossip and
slandering about Mariah.
Tuk Imam’s remembering
his past memories about
when Mangales landed a
husband but the eldest,
Malar is still not married.
Then, Malar tries to tackles
Muthu whose they though
work as a bank manager.
She waiting for Muthu pass
by the gates and learn how
to ride a bicycles. After that,
Muthu always attends
dinner at Malar’s house.
3. CLIMAX
Malar’s parents began to
drop hint to Muthu. Muthu
agree to married with
impose certain conditions.
Malar was delirious with
happiness. At the end they
got married.
4. FALLING ACTIONS
After married, Malar stay
leave at the rental room
and plan to move later.
After dinner, the family sits
in the hall. The youngest
brother has asked Muthu
about his salary. Muthu
his unforgettable love of the
Sheikh’s daughter when he
was studying at Pattani.
3. CLIMAX
Tuk Imam asked for his
wife’s permission to marry
Mariah. Cik Yam said "Yes"
to the Imam request. Cik
Gu Leh, the Imam's
emissary, came to Mariah's
house asking for her hand.
Mariah then agrees with the
proposal.
4. FALLING ACTIONS
The wedding is organised.
She took out her savings
and prepared for the
wedding. Guests come to
the house in Kota Bahru
from morning until evening.
tells the truth that he only
gain RM220 every month.
The family shocked
because Muthu only get a
peon pay.
5. RESOLUTION
Malar accepted Muthu
gratefully and still satisfied
because she success to
land a husband.
“Malar turned away. “I don’t
care,” she thought. “I don’t
care at all. After all, I’m
married. At last.”
5. RESOLUTION
Imam kissed Mariah’s hand
for a long time and thanks
to God for His gift.
“He came forward, took
Mariah's hand in his own
and kissed it fervently and
long, inhaling the heady
scent of Mariah's Tabu
perfume. The Imam
managed a hoarse "Thank
You, God, for Your
Bounty," before Mariah's
perfume completely
enveloped him and his
senses”.
PLOT : HOW TO HOOK A HUSBAND
EXPOSITION
Malar was asked by her parents
to look for a husband because
they cannot afford to pay the
dowry. In fact, Malar was 25
years old.
CLIMAX
Malar’s parents began to drop
hint to Muthu. Muthu agree to
married with impose certain
conditions. At the end they got
married.
FALLING ACTIONS
Muthu tells the truth that he only
gain RM220 every month. The
family shocked because Muthu only
get a peon pay.
RISING ACTION
Malar try the best to hook a
husband. Malar tries to tackles
Muthu whose they though work
as a bank manager. She
waiting for Muthu pass by the
gates and learn how to ride a
RESOLUTION
Malar don’t care about the job of his
husband. Instead she accepted
Muthu gratefully and still satisfied
because she success to land a
husband.
PLOT : MARIAH
EXPOSITION
Introduction of Mariah
Nasi seller
CLIMAX
Tuk Imam asked for his wife’s permission to marry Mariah.
FALLING ACTIONS
The wedding is organised.
Tuk Imam and Mariah were married.
RISING ACTION
Gossip by the villagers
(women)
Flashback of Tuk Imam’s
past.
RESOLUTION
Imam kissed Mariah’s hand for a long time and thanks to God for His gift.
CHARACTERS
How To Hook A Husband Mariah
Main character
Malar
Eldest sister in a family
– 25 years old
Loyal and obedient wife
Very proud of her
husband
Ambitious
Very determined to
hook a husband
Tall, and big women
she has an enormous
breast and hips
Other characters
Muthu
Muthu has a thick,
longish hair.
He is a tenant of the
back room
He is a humble man
and not too choosy
because he accepts
Malar even she has a
big size.
Main character
Mariah
A widow
- “mariah had been
married once, but her
husband had passed
away soon after”
Nasi belauk seller
- “mariah was a nasi
seller in molo, in fact the
nasi seller in molo”
Beautiful and flamboyant
Other characters
Tuk Imam
Head of the mosque
Pious
Respectable
Referent to solve problem.
Cik Yam
Perfect wife
Good cook
“Her (Cik Yam) culinary skills
were not her only attribute; her
housekeeping was also a
model to be followed by other
womenfolk in the village. One
Malar’s father
He is a pensioner.
“Father is a pensioner”.
He is the head of family
He like to praise people
“A good chap. So humble, so
modest. Difficult to find boys
like that, nowadays”.
Malar’s mother
She is a responsible
mother “The mother
had done everything
she could to enable her
( Malar) to meet boys”.
She is a motivator. She
become a motivator to
Malar for looking a
husband
“Grab whom you can and
don’t let go”.
could always call at the Imam’s
house at any time of the day,
guaranteed to be greeted by a
well-turned-out wife, hot
tepung and fragrant
surroundings.”
(pg 72-73)
Cikgu Nab
Gossip
Loves to find other’s fault
Hopeless cook
Jealous wife
Cik Gu Nab sent threatening
messages to Mariah
Cikgu Leh
Cik Gu Nab’s husband and
Tuk Imam’s friend
Represent Tuk Imam in asking
Mariah’s hand for marriage
THEMES
How To Hook A Husband Mariah
1. Women’s hope
The possible theme of this
story is the women’s hope.
Malar was hope that she will
get a husband by dressed in
bright sarees and following her
mother to the temple and
wedding- houses but she still
do not has a husband. Malar
also hope that there is an
encourage response from
Muthu after she took herself
around her gate everyday at
5.45 p.m. But after two weeks,
Muthu did not give an
encourage response to her
and she gave up.
2. Causes of the custom of Indian
marriage
In the custom of Indian
marriage, a woman needs to
provide a dowry for men.
- “Forget Ceylonese
men, they won’t even
look at you without a
dowry”.
1. Female vs female
Widow is considered as
underclass which she
would be socially
oppressed
2. Sacrifice of a wife
The possible theme of
this story is the sacrifice
of a wife. This is because
the story is about a wife
was willing to have a co-
wife only for the
happiness of her
husband.
3. Life can be hard and be ready
to face it
Cik Yam faced a problem
that disappointed her
heart because her
husband want to marry
another women and Cik
Yam firstly cannot accept
the fact but after she is
calm, she faced the
problem positively by
accepting her husband
request.
SETTINGS
How To Hook A Husband Mariah
1. PLACE
Resident neighborhood:
Malar’s house is two doors
to the left from the old
pensioner house which is
Muthu have rent a room.
Every day, Malar learns to
ride a bike along ground
and try to tackle Muthu
Market, wedding houses
and temples. : Malar
always went marketing
daily, went to temple every
Friday and attended every
wedding in town for hook a
husband.
Clinic: Mangales work as a
nurse at a clinic.
Cameron Highland: Muthu
and Malar went a
honeymoon at Cameron
Highland.
Pensioner’s house: Muthu
has rented a back room in
the house.
Hall: Malar and Muthu
would be left practically
alone in the hall after
dinner. Besides, the truth
about Muthu’s job is
1. PLACE
small village town in Molo
where Mariah sell the nasi
- “Mariah was a nasi seller in
Molo”.
PATTANI, SOUTHERN
THAILAND
- (Flashback) “ the Imam
became transported to
another time, his
youth….”
- The place where Tuk
Imam studied be an
Imam
- “When the Imam was a
young man of fifteen his
father had voiced his
wish for his son to be
sent to Pattani in
Southern Thailand to
learn under a tutelage of
a well known Sheikh.
Mosque where Imam is
having the prayer
- “He left the table, took
his ablutions and quickly
went to the mosque”.
Cik Yam's house where Cik
Gu Nab came to gossip.
exposed in the hall. Cik Yam and Imam’s
Bedroom
- “ Cik Yam threw the
tudung saji on the
floor, narrowly missing
the Imam’s foot, then
ran sobbing to their
bedroom”.
2. TIME
Evening : every evening,
Malar will draping herself
around gate to waiting
Muthu back from work.
Sunday Night: Muthu
attend dinner at malar’s
house every Sunday night.
After dinner: After dinner,
Malar and Muthu would be
left practically alone in the
hall and the truth about
Muthu’s job is exposed.
2. TIME
Morning :
- “In that particular
morning, the Imam was
with the men, falling on
Mariah’s nasi belauk with
much relish”.
Lunch time
- “Is lunch ready,
Yam?”Asked the Imam.
Thursday night when the
Imam asked for his wife
permission to take Mariah
as a second wife.
3. SOCIAL CONDITION
A poor family with five
daughter which is requires
to hook a husband by
themselves because their
father not afford to pay the
dowry.
3. SOCIAL CONDITION
Malay family and village
society are the social
condition for this short story
MORAL VALUES
How To Hook A Husband Mariah
1. Don’t judge a book by its cover.
Malar thought that Muthu
work as a bank manager
because she always saw
Muthu bring the briefcase
and dressing smartly.
2. We must have determination to
achieve what we want.
Malar did not give up easily
hooking a husband.
3. We have to honest to the others
We have to be honest to
other people although we
have a weakness. The
people will also know at last
when the secret is
exposed.
4. Accepting the truth
Eventhough Malar knew
that her husband just a
peon in bank, but she loves
her husband very much.
1. Not talk other people matter
especially slandering.
Cik Gu Nab said that
Mariah put “something” in
her nasi.
2. Willing to sacrifice for the lover.
Cik Yam was willing to
sacrifice to have a co-wife
for her husband happiness.
3. Become honest people
Tuk Imam told the truth to
his wife about his old love
on Sheikh’s daughter.
4. Respect the others
Imam was respect to his
first wife by asking her
permission before getting
married with Mariah.
TASK 2
I like the short story “Mariah” because this story has a very interesting plot.
The plot is very strong and makes me clearly understand about what is this story is
about. Briefly, it makes this story meaningful for those men who want to marry more
than once. The event in this story has taught me many good values. For example, as
a human, we should not talk bad about others people. In this short story, Cik Gu Nab
said that Mariah put “something” in her nasi. She slandering Mariah about something
that Mariah didn’t do. in fact, she didn’t even know either the story she makes is true
or not.
Besides that, I also impressed with the attitude shown by Cik Yam. Cik Yam is
a very good wife to Tuk Imam. She obeys her husband very much and carries out
her responsibility very well. The most major thing that she does is allow her husband
to marry with Mariah. She is willing to sacrifices her love for her husband happiness.
Tuk Imam also is a very honest people. He told Cik Yam about his old love story. I
also learned that we have to be honest in all condition. Then he respects his wife. He
ask his wife permission to marry with Mariah.
On top of that, the moral value of faithful to the religion also found in this story.
Imam was faithful in prayer. He punctual in his prayers. As a Muslim, I learned that
the responsibility to the religious is the most priorities. Cik Yam also will be rewarded
from God for the good deeds. As example, she being obey to her husband and the
most important thing, she allow her husband to marry once again. In Islam, the wife
that allows her husband to marry more than one will be given good reward. Finally,
for the man who married more than once, he must be fair to his wifes.
REFLECTIONS
First and foremost, thank to God because with his blessing, I had successfully
completed the short coursework that had been given to me and entire classmate.
Many thanks to Pn Seethradevi A/P K. Krishnasamy, our lecturer because has
guided me to complete my coursework. I would like to say many thanks to my
friends, who had give the cooperation on completing this coursework.
To complete this coursework, at first, I have to read two short stories given
that are How to Hook a Husband and Mariah. These two short stories are not so long
and I didn’t have a problem completing reading them. In fact, these two short stories
are not so bored and very interesting to read on. After I have finished reading them, I
have to analyse about the elements contain in the short stories. I have to compare
and contrast the plot, characters, settings, theme and moral values.
To complete this task, I have to recall what I have learnt about the elements in
short stories. So I make a reference about it on the internet. Then I can understand
clearly about them. To understand this two short stories are not hard for me because
the language used are not so hard to understand. But, it took me for second reading
to clearly understand the whole stories.
There are many moral values that I get from these two short stories. For
example, we have to be honest to the others. This moral value are contain in two
short stories. Besides, there are many moral values in these two short stories but
these moral values did not contain in both short stories. The moral values stated are
ready to sacrifice our love, not slandering others people, accepting the truth and
determination in life. This moral value are very important to us as a human. I should
use this moral value in my daily life.
Prepared by,
AMRI BIN ZAKARIA
(SN/PJ/BM)
SHORT STORY ELEMENTS
SETTING -- The time and location in which a story takes place is called the setting. For some stories the setting is very important, while for others it is not. There are several aspects of a story's setting to consider when examining how setting contributes to a story (some, or all, may be present in a story):
a) place - geographical location. Where is the action of the story taking place? b) time - When is the story taking place? (historical period, time of day, year, etc) c) weather conditions - Is it rainy, sunny, stormy, etc? d) social conditions - What is the daily life of the characters like? Does the story contain local colour (writing that focuses on the speech, dress, mannerisms, customs, etc. of a particular place)? e) mood or atmosphere - What feeling is created at the beginning of the story? Is it bright and cheerful or dark and frightening?
PLOT -- The plot is how the author arranges events to develop his basic idea; It is the sequence of events in a story or play. The plot is a planned, logical series of events having a beginning, middle, and end. The short story usually has one plot so it can be read in one sitting. There are five essential parts of plot:
a) Introduction - The beginning of the story where the characters and the setting is revealed.
b) Rising Action - This is where the events in the story become complicated and the conflict in the story is revealed (events between the introduction and climax).
c) Climax - This is the highest point of interest and the turning point of the story. The reader wonders what will happen next; will the conflict be resolved or not?
d) Falling action - The events and complications begin to resolve themselves. The reader knows what has happened next and if the conflict was resolved or not (events between climax and denouement).
e) Denouement - This is the final outcome or untangling of events in the story.
It is helpful to consider climax as a three-fold phenomenon: 1) the main character receives new information 2) accepts this information (realizes it but does not necessarily agree with it) 3) acts on this information (makes a choice that will determine whether or not he/she gains his objective).
CONFLICT-- Conflict is essential to plot. Without conflict there is no plot. It is the opposition of forces which ties one incident to another and makes the plot move. Conflict is not merely limited to open arguments, rather it is any form of opposition that faces the main character. Within a short story there may be only one central struggle, or there may be one dominant struggle with many minor ones.
There are two types of conflict : 1) External - A struggle with a force outside one's self.
2) Internal - A struggle within one's self; a person must make some decision, overcome pain, quiet their temper, resist an urge, etc.
There are four kinds of conflict : 1) Man vs. Man (physical) - The leading character struggles with his physical strength against other men, forces of nature, or animals.
2) Man vs. Circumstances (classical) - The leading character struggles against fate, or the circumstances of life facing him/her.
3) Man vs. Society (social) - The leading character struggles against ideas, practices, or customs of other people.
4) Man vs. Himself/Herself (psychological) - The leading character struggles with himself/herself; with his/her own soul, ideas of right or wrong, physical limitations, choices, etc.
CHARACTER -- There are two meanings for the word character: 1) The person in a work of fiction. 2) The characteristics of a person.
Persons in a work of fiction - Antagonist and Protagonist Short stories use few characters. One character is clearly central to the story with all major events having some importance to this character -
he/she is the PROTAGONIST. The opposer of the main character is called the ANTAGONIST.
The Characteristics of a Person - In order for a story to seem real to the reader its characters must seem real. Characterization is the information the author gives the reader about the characters themselves. The author may reveal a character in several ways: a) his/her physical appearance b) what he/she says, thinks, feels and dreams c) what he/she does or does not do d) what others say about him/her and how others react to him/her
Characters are convincing if they are: consistent, motivated, and life-like (resemble real people)
Characters are... 1. Individual - round, many sided and complex personalities. 2. Developing - dynamic, many sided personalities that change, for better or worse, by the end of the story. 3. Static - Stereotype, have one or two characteristics that never change and are emphasized e.g. brilliant detective, drunk, scrooge, cruel stepmother, etc.
POINT OF VIEW
Point of view, or p.o.v., is defined as the angle from which the story is told.
1. Innocent Eye - The story is told through the eyes of a child (his/her judgment being different from that of an adult) .
2. Stream of Consciousness - The story is told so that the reader feels as if they are inside the head of one character and knows all their thoughts and reactions.
3. First Person - The story is told by the protagonist or one of the characters who interacts closely with the protagonist or other characters (using pronouns I, me, we, etc). The reader sees the story through this person's eyes as he/she experiences it and only knows what he/she knows or feels.
4. Omniscient- The author can narrate the story using the omniscient point of view. He can move from character to character, event to event, having free access to the thoughts, feelings and motivations of his
characters and he introduces information where and when he chooses. There are two main types of omniscient point of view:
a) Omniscient Limited - The author tells the story in third person (using pronouns they, she, he, it, etc). We know only what the character knows and what the author allows him/her to tell us. We can see the thoughts and feelings of characters if the author chooses to reveal them to us.
b) Omniscient Objective – The author tells the story in the third person. It appears as though a camera is following the characters, going anywhere, and recording only what is seen and heard. There is no comment on the characters or their thoughts. No interpretations are offered. The reader is placed in the position of spectator without the author there to explain. The reader has to interpret events on his own.
THEME -- The theme in a piece of fiction is its controlling idea or its central insight. It is the author's underlying meaning or main idea that he is trying to convey. The theme may be the author's thoughts about a topic or view of human nature. The title of the short story usually points to what the writer is saying and he may use various figures of speech to emphasize his theme, such as: symbol, allusion, simile, metaphor, hyperbole, or irony.
Some simple examples of common themes from literature, TV, and film are: - things are not always as they appear to be - Love is blind - Believe in yourself - People are afraid of change- Don't judge a book by its cover