jamari storyboard revision

8/9/2019 Jamari Storyboard Revision

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Fade in. Camera

pans from blue sky

and clouds down to

an elementary

school.


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Action: Camera pans across elementary school playground.

Camera stops on a boy wearing a raincoat.

Action: Boy looks over as a

kickball rolls up to his feet.

Action: Boy looks off screen

right.


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Action: Boy with spikey

hair runs on screen out of

breath. Raincoat boy

looks at him emotionless.

Action: Spikey hair boylooks up at Raincoat boy

while other kids walk up.

Action: Spikey hair boy

looks off screen left and

makes a puzzled face.


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POV shot of Raincoat

boy. Raincoat boy

stares back.


looks up.

POV shot of sunny day.

Birds fly by.


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looks back off screen

left with disdain.


shrugs shoulders.

Action: Punches hand,

decides to beat the

raincoat boy up.


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Action: Boy motions to

other kids to go after

that kid.

Action: Bullies walk

left.

Action: Bullies walk up

to Raincoat boy.


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Dialog:

Spikey hair boy Hey,little nerd

Dialog:

Spikey hair boy - you

think its gonna rain?

Dialog:

Raincoat boy Leave

me alone.


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Action: Little boy stops

Raincoat boy from

walking away.


walks up punching his

hand. Raincoat boy

looks back at him with

concern.

Action: Big boy slides into

scene. Raincoat boy looks

up at him nervously.

Dialog:

Little boy He looks like a

giant banana!


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Action: Swing riders

grimace and react to scene

off screen.

Sound effects of bullying

and fighting.

Action: Raincoat boy is

knocked back intoempty scene.

Action: Raincoat boy stares

back at bullies with a

serious face.


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Action: Raincoat boy

reaches back and grabs

his hood.

Action: Boy throws the

hood over his head,

covering his eyes and

most of his face from

view.

Action: Spikey kid tosses

kickball in the air as all

the bullies laugh.


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Dialog:

Spikey hair kidCmon

guys

Action: Bullies turn andwalk away from the

screen.

Dialog:

Spikey hair kid - weve

got a game to

Action: A large column

of wind blasts the

bullies.

Dialog:

AAAAAH!


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Action: Bullies hit the

ground as wind column

flies away.

Action: Raincoat with

arm outstretched.

Action: Raincoat drops

arm.


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Action: Raincoat inhales.

Action: Raincoat exhales

slowly.

Action: Raincoats eyes

glow from under hood.


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Action: Raincoat stretches

arms out. Clouds darken

and swirl above him.

Action: Raincoats feet lift

off the ground.

Action: Raincoat lifts into

the sky, with clouds

surrounding him. It begins

to rain.


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Wide shot of the

playground. Sunlight is

choked off and pouring

rain begins.

Action: Swing riders stop

swinging, hunch theirshoulders and squint their

eyes from the rain.

Action: Swing riders get up

and run off screen.


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Action: All the kids run from

the playground.

Action: Raincoat hovers in

place. Lightning strikes.

Screen goes black. Title

screen.


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Action: Raincoat hovering

in rainstorm.

Camera pans backwards through

school window into classroom.

Dialogue:

Voice of Teacher: and dont

forget about tomorrows math

quiz.

Dialogue:

Teacher Oh, and it looks

like its raining pretty hard

out there, so were going to

skip recess today and review

for the quiz.


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Action: Jamari looks up

startled.

Camera pans left.

Action: Jamari looks back

over his shoulder and sees

Raincoat over the

playground.

Action: Jamari raises his

hand.

Dialogue:

Jamari May I be excused?


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Dialogue:

Teacher Okay, Jamari, but

were going to review for the

quiz in five minutes.

Dialogue:

Jamari Five minutes? Then

lets go!

Action: Jamari reaches down to

the books under his desk.


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Action: Jamari pulls out a copy

of the Bible.

Dialogue:

Jamari - Therefore, if anyone

is in Christ, he is a new

creation. The old has passed

away; behold, the new has

come! (from 2 Corinthians

5:17)

Action: Jamari holds the Bible

to his chest and they glow.


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Jamaris shoe transforms in a

flash to armored shoe.

Shot of Jamari with power orbaura surrounding him.

Action: Jamari anticipation of

take off.


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Action: Jamari zips off

screen leaving only a power

trail (ala Powerpuff Girls).

Action: Rubble falls from the

ceiling where Jamari jumped

through. Kids look up dazed.

Action: Rain pours in the

hole from outside.

Dialogue:

Kid WOOT!


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Dialogue:

Teacher - sigh.

Action: Streak of light out of

the school roof.

Action: Jamari lands in the

playground.


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Dialogue:

JamariHey up there, itsrecess time.

Dialogue:

JamariCan you turn off the

rain please?

Dialogue:

Raincoat No. They

pushed me and made funof me.


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Dialogue:

Jamari Someone made

fun of you? Well, you

have to cast your

problems off of yourself

and let God solve things

for you.

Dialogue:

RaincoatThey shouldnt

have made fun of my

raincoat. Now its gonna

rain.

Dialogue:

JamariI cant let you do

that. Youre going to ruinrecess for everybody.


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Action: Raincoat glares

down at Jamari, eyes

glowing.

Action: Jamari glares back.

Action: Raincoat points his

hand out.


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Action: A shadow falls

over Jamaris head.

Action: A wall ofrainwater falls over

Jamari.

Action: Raincoat raises

hand up.


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Action: Raincoat

clenches his hand.

Action: The rainwatercloses in around

Jamari, intensifying.

Action: Camera pans

back. Raincoat looks

at the rainfall.


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Action: Raincoat turns

his head, folds his arms

and frowns.

Action: Jamari shivers

inside the rainwater.

Action: Jamari clenches

his fists and focuses.


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Action: Jamaris Bible

powers activate. The verse

GENESIS 9: 13-15 appear

glowing on the front of hisarmor.

Action: A rainbowmaterializes through the

rain above Jamaris head.

Action: The rain is pushed

away from around Jamari.


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Action: Jamari stands with a

rainbow behind him.

Action: Raincoat turns,surprised.

Dialogue:

JamariCmon, cant you

just turn the other cheek?


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Action: Raincoat points

his finger and lightning

comes out of the clouds.

Dialogue:

Raincoat No.

Action: Jamari jumps to

avoid the lightning strike.

Action: Jamari anticipates

next lightning bolt.


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Action: Jamari jumps off

screen to avoid the next

lightning bolt.

Action: Jamari runs

backwards barely

avoiding lightning bolts.

His armor begins to glow

again.

Action: Jamaris armor

begins to glow again with

PROVERBS 18:10.


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Action: Jamari suddenly

bumps into a pole.

Action: Jamari rubs hishead.

Dialogue:

Jamari Ow

Action: Jamari is startled

from lightning coming off

screen.


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Action: Jamari ducks,

throwing his arms over his

head and the lightning curves

away from him to the pole.

Action: Jamari peeks up

from under his arms.

Action: Lightning is attracted

to the flagpole like a

lightning rod.


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Action: Jamari pumps his

fist yes! as he realizes

that the pole will protect

him from the lightning.

Action: Lightning striking

the pole.

Action: Raincoat stares up

in disbelief.


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Action: Raincoat clenches fists

and lightning strikes again.

Action: Jamari stands still as

lightning curves around him and

strikes the flagpole.

Action: Jamari looks offscreen at

Raincoat with pity.


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Action: Raincoat stares with

frustration.

Action: Raincoat drops his arms

and lowers his head, looking

defeated.

Action: Jamari looks offscreen

at Raincoat sternly.


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Dialogue:

Jamari Are you ready to

stop all this?

Action: Raincoat raises his

arm.

Dialogue:

Raincoat I know how to

take care of you, Jamari.

Camera zooms in to school.


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Establishing shot inside

school kitchen.

Cut to shot of a large bag

of peanuts.

Action: A tornado rises up

out of the bag, lifting thepeanuts up.


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Action: Tornado crashes

through kitchen roof.

Action: Tornado rises upfrom school.

Action: The tornado pours

the peanuts out.


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Action: The peanuts rain

over Jamari.

Dialogue:

Peanuts? Not peanuts!

Action: Jamari falls to his

knees, immediately looking

weak.

Action: Jamari puts his

hand over his stomach

and looks nauseous.


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Action: Raincoat glares

over his shoulder at

Jamari.

Action: Raincoat turns his

head as he flies into the air.

Camera pans back to show

Raincoat fly over to the

school.


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Action: Raincoat waves his

arms towards the school.

Dialogue:

Raincoat (almost whispering):

Everyone is going to leave me

alone.

Action: Heavy rain falls

over the school.

Action: School begins to

sink into the ground.


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Action: Jamaris armor

begins to glow with 1

Thessalonians 5:9 (For God

did not appoint us to sufferwrath but to receive salvation

through our Lord Jesus Christ.)

Action: Jamari leans back

up as the peanuts around

him dissolve away.

Action: Jamari stands up

and looks up off screen.


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Wide shot of Raincoat

focusing a waterfall

looking rain shower over

the school.

Action: Jamari looks

down, defeated.

Action: Camera pans to

the left and a light

appears through theclouds.


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Action: A beam of light

shoots across sky and

connects with Jamari.

Jamaris armor glows

brightly.

Jamaris armor glows with

Matthew 6: 9-13 (The

Lords Prayer)

Action: Camera pans up to

close up of Jamari with

enlightened face. Light is

over shoulder.


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Action: Jamari looks left

and nods in agreement as

the light fades away.

Action: Jamari walks

forward and looks up.

Action: Jamari slowly

floats into the air.


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Action: Wide shot of

Jamari floating up.

Action: Jamari floats upunderneath Raincoat.

Action: Jamari floats up

right in front of

Raincoat.


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Action: Raincoat rears

back with lightning in

his hand.

Action: Jamari puts his

hand on Raincoats

shoulder. Raincoat

looks shocked.

Action: Jamari looks at

Raincoat.


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Action: Jamari bows his

head.

Dialogue:

Jamari Our Father, which

art in Heaven, hallowed be

thy name

Dialogue:

Jamari - Thy kingdomcome, Thy will be done in

earth, as it is in heaven.


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Dialogue:

Jamari - And lead us not

into temptation, but

deliver us from evil

Action: Rain stops, clouds

part and sun pours into

scene.

Dialogue:

Jamari - For thine is the

kingdom, and the power,

and the glory, forever.

Amen.

Action: Raincoats hood

balls back. Kid seems to

snap out of it.


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Action: Raincoat kid looks

around and looks

ashamed.

Action: Jamari looks back

with forgiveness.

Action: Kid opens door in

front of school and holds

hand out to feel for rain.


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Action: Kids pour out of theschool.

Action: Kids back on the

playground.

Action: Jamari and Raincoat

kid land on the ground.


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Dialogue:

Raincoat kid - Im so sorry for

what I did.

Dialogue:

Jamari - Its okay, because no

matter what youve done in your

life, no matter what youve done in

the past, God forgives you.

Action: Jamari powers down

and transforms back to

normal.

Dialogue:

Jamari Lets go play.


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Dialogue:

Jamari Cmon!

Action: Jamari and Raincoat run

into playground.

Action: Camera pans back and

shows wide shot of kids all

over playground.

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