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Blog Progress Peer Assessment

Blog Author: Jack Parkes

Blog Assessor: Daniel Vidmar

Date: 10/10/13

Question 1 The formatting of the blog

The fonts color and style are a good choice as they are easy to read

and understand throughout the blog. The title of the post is a

different color to the post itself, which is easy to identify between

each post.However although the background is in relation to school,it is difficult to view the blog as there are so many images that it can

be hard to read for some people.

Current Mark: 7/10

Question 2 Your Welcome post

The Welcome post explains what you will be doing throughout the

course, which gives a good idea of what you will be doing this yearand is clearly presented well. It can be improved by giving the reader

the idea of yourself so they can be more interested in what youre

doing in this course.

Current Mark: 9/10

Question 3 Shot Types post

You have included this post with good explanations of each type ofshot and embedded media to give a better understanding of each

shot type by using images and videos. To improve this post you

should include more different shots such as establishing shots with

good explanations of those shots.

Current Mark: 8/10

Question 4 Camera Movements post

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This post includes most of the basic camera movements that is used

in filming with good explanations that are easy to understand. You

should use more embedded media, which can make it easier for the

reader to understand each type of camera movements.

Current Mark 7/10

Question 5 Cut types post

A post about Cut Types cannot be found so unfortunately no marks

can be added.

Current Mark: 0/10

Question 6 Rule Of Thirds post

This post contains a very good explanation of the Rule Of Thirds,

which includes good examples for the reader to understand. You

should give an example of how the Rule Of Thirds should not be used

to create a better understand of the rule.

Current Mark: 9/10

Question 7 Match-on-Action post

The post gives out a detailed explanation of Match-on-Action that

gives a very good example on how it is used in filming. Try and use

more examples so it is easier to understand Match-on-Action.

Current Mark: 8/10

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Question 8 180 Degree rule

This post includes a very good explanation of this rule, which

includes good use of media such as images and a video. I dont

believe that you need to do any improvement on this post as I believe

that there is no for improvements.

Current Mark: 10/10

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Question 9 Continuity

This post includes a detailed post about Continuity Errors and

explains this using embedded media. However you havent included

the definition of Continuity, which that was the task that was set.

Current Mark: 5/10

Question 10 Script Writing

This post has a very good explanation of how to script write by

showing which fonts to use and which program to use, which will

help throughout this year in your media course. Embedded media

also supports this by using a video to explain how to script write. Idont think you need to improve this post.

Current Mark: 10/10

Question 11 Preliminary Task

This post includes a very good evaluation of your Preliminary task,

which shows what you did well and what didnt go well. However

you need to put the video of the Preliminary task to prove that youhave completed the task.

Current Mark: 7/10

Question 12 Narrative of the blog

You have clearly shown the continuation of the blog as you

constantly update your blog and say what you would present in the

blog. To improve try and use a conclusion on each post to keep thereaders more interested in your blog.

Current Mark: 8/10

Question 13 Homework

You have completed most of your blog and done all your homework

however there are some posts they need to be completed such as

posting the Preliminary task.

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Current Mark: 8/10

Total Mark: 96/130

Percentage: 73.8%