introduction to scientific method, basic statistics and scientific writing
TRANSCRIPT
1. Introduction & Quiz
2. The Scientific Method
3. Methods
4. Results
5. Discussion
6. Introduction
7. Scientific Writing
Overview
1. Introduction & Quiz
2. The Scientific Method
3. Methods
4. Results
5. Discussion
6. Introduction
7. Scientific Writing
1. Introduction & Quiz
2. The Scientific Method
3. Methods
4. Results
5. Discussion
6. Introduction
7. Scientific Writing
The Scientific Method• A systematic process that involves:
• Recognising and formulating a problem
• Collecting data through observation and experiment
• Formulating and testing a hypothesis
• Requires:
• Objectivity
• Repeatability
• Full disclosure of methods, data and results
What is a Hypothesis?
• A tentative statement that proposes a possible explanation for a phenomenon or event.
• Two types:• Alternative hypothesis (H1)
• Null hypothesis (H0)
What is a Hypothesis?
• H1: Exposure to pure oxygen kills cancer cells.
• H0: Exposure to pure oxygen does not kill cancer cells.
• H1 can never be proven.
• Experiments are based around accepting or rejecting H0.
• Aim of scientific research is to reject H0.
Task: Steps of the Scientific Method
Ask question
Do background research
Construct hypothesis
Test with experiment
Analyse results
Draw conclusion
Hypothesis is trueHypothesis is false
or partly false
Report results
Think! Try again
Peer-Reviewed Scientific Journals• Articles are rigorously reviewed by experts in
the same field
• Critical in establishing a reliable body of knowledge
• Should be objective, repeatable and provide full disclosure
“A one-year, multicenter, randomized, controlled trial to evaluate the effect of the low-carbohydrate, high-protein, high-fat Atkins diet on weight loss and risk factors for coronary heart disease in obese persons.”
Introduction
Method
Results
Discussion & conclusion
Question
Background
Hypothesis
Perform experiment
Collect data
Analyse data
Interpret data
Draw conclusions
Scientific Report Scientific Method
Task: Change Blindness Clip
Watch the clip at:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fXWuB7fmGv0
And put the sentences on the next slide, from a Method section describing this experiment, into the correct order.
Task: Reorder these sentences
a) The participants were asked to enter an adjacent hallway.
b) A sign saying ‘Experiment’ was placed above a counter in a reception area.
c) Participants were recruited through advertisements placed around the university.
d) The participants were asked to describe what they had just experienced.
e) A different experimenter stood up from behind the counter and handed the participant an information pack.
f) The researcher crouched down behind the counter, obscured from view, to file the consent form.
g) Participants approached one of the researchers, who was standing behind the counter, and were asked to fill in a consent form.
Task: Original order
1. Participants were recruited through advertisements placed around the university.
2. A sign saying ‘Experiment’ was placed above a counter in a reception area.
3. Participants approached one of the researchers, who was standing behind the counter, and were asked to fill in a consent form.
4. The researcher crouched down behind the counter, obscured from view, to file the consent form.
5. A different experimenter stood up from behind the counter and handed the participant an information pack.
6. The participants were asked to enter an adjacent hallway.
7. The participants were asked to describe what they had just experienced.
The Writing Process
Write in this order:
1. Methods
2. Results
3. Discussion
4. Introduction
5. (Abstract)
1. Introduction & Quiz
2. The Scientific Method
3. Methods
4. Results
5. Discussion
6. Introduction
7. Scientific Writing
MethodsWhat did you do and how?
• Logically ordered sections describing:
• Focus of the study (e.g. participants, bacteria...)
• Experimental design
• Procedures
• Materials
• Statistical methods
• Requires accuracy and precision
• Demonstrates the validity of a study
• Needs to be reproducible
Methods
• Subsections in Atkins article
• Subjects (participants)
• Study design
• Study procedures
• Analyses of samples
• Statistical analysis
Methods
• Sub-sections in Atkins article
• Subjects (participants)
• Study design
• Study procedures
• Analyses of samples
• Statistical analysis
Task: Which part of the Methods section did
these 8 sentences come from?
1. Subjects were instructed to read the manual and follow the program as described.
2. Potential subjects were excluded if they had clinically significant illnesses, were taking lipid-lowering medications, were pregnant or lactating, or were taking medications that affect body weight.
3. Serum total cholesterol, high-density (HDL) cholesterol and triglyceride concentrations were assayed according to procedures recommended by the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention.
4. The subjects were randomly assigned at each site, with use of a random-number generator, to follow either the low carbohydrate diet or the conventional diet.
5. For the first two weeks, carbohydrate is limited to 20g per day and is then gradually increased until a stable and desired weight is achieved.
6. Triglyceride values were not normally distributed, so the log-transformed values were analyzed.
7. Body weight was measured with the use of calibrated scales (Detecto 6800, Cardinal) while the subjects were wearing light clothing and no shoes at baseline and at weeks 2, 12 and 52.
8. All subjects provided written informed consent.
Task: Methods1. Subjects were instructed to read the manual and follow the
program as described. Study procedures
2. Potential subjects were excluded if they had clinically significant illnesses, were taking lipid-lowering medications, were pregnant or lactating, or were taking medications that affect body weight.
Subjects
3. Serum total cholesterol, high-density (HDL) cholesterol and triglyceride concentrations were assayed according to procedures recommended by the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention.
Analyses of samples
4. The subjects were randomly assigned at each site, with use of a random-number generator, to follow either the low carbohydrate diet or the conventional diet.
Study design
Task: Methods
5. For the first two weeks, carbohydrate was limited to 20g per day and was then gradually increased until a stable and desired weight was achieved.
Study procedures
6. Triglyceride values were not normally distributed, so the log-transformed values were analyzed.
Statistical analysis
7. Body weight was measured with the use of calibrated scales (Detecto6800, Cardinal) while the subjects were wearing light clothing and no shoes at baseline and at weeks 2, 12 and 52.
Study procedures
8. All subjects provided written informed consent.Subjects
1. Introduction & Quiz
2. The Scientific Method
3. Methods
4. Results
5. Discussion
6. Introduction
7. Scientific Writing
ResultsWhat did you find or see?
• Focus on results relating to your hypothesis / objectives
• Group into subsections and order logically
• May be illustrated using tables or figures
• Should document or clarify, but not duplicate, data in text or other graphics.
Results• Focus on results relating to your hypothesis /
objectives
• Objective: “A one-year, multicenter, randomized, controlled trial to evaluate the effect of the low-carbohydrate, high-protein, high-fat Atkins diet on weight loss and risk factors for coronary heart disease in obese persons.”
Results• Focus on results relating to your hypothesis /
objectives
• Objective: “A one-year, multicenter, randomized, controlled trial to evaluate the effect of the low-carbohydrate, high-protein, high-fat Atkins diet on weight loss and risk factors for coronary heart disease in obese persons.”
Results• Focus on results relating to your hypothesis /
objectives
• Objective: “A one-year, multicenter, randomized, controlled trial to evaluate the effect of the low-carbohydrate, high-protein, high-fat Atkins diet on weight loss and risk factors for coronary heart disease in obese persons.”
Results• Focus on results relating to your hypothesis /
objectives
• Objective: “A one-year, multicenter, randomized, controlled trial to evaluate the effect of the low-carbohydrate, high-protein, high-fat Atkins diet on weight loss and risk factors for coronary heart disease in obese persons.”
Results
• Group into subsections and order logically
• Subsections
• Weight
• Attrition (drop outs)
• Urinary ketones
• Blood pressure
• Oral glucose tolerance test
• Serum lipoproteins
Results
• Group into subsections and order logically
• Subsections
• Weight Main focus of study
• Attrition (drop outs) Related to weight results
• Urinary ketones Related to weight results
• Blood pressure
• Oral glucose tolerance test
• Serum lipoproteins
Results
• Group into subsections and order logically
• Subsections
• Weight Main focus of study
• Attrition (drop outs) Related to weight results
• Urinary ketones Related to weight results
• Blood pressure Secondary focus of study
• Oral glucose tolerance test Secondary focus of study
• Serum lipoproteins Secondary focus of study
Results
• May be illustrated using tables or figures
• Should document or clarify, but not duplicate, data in text or other graphics.
Descriptive statistics
• Variables- characteristics of interest
Eye colour StatsAbility Siblings Height
• Observations - observed values of variables
green Good 0 174
hazel Very good 1 155
blue Good 3 167
green Poor 0 165
brown Poor 2 148
brown Moderate 5 160
…
• Categorical
Nominal e.g. eye colour (brown,blue,green,…)Ordinal e.g level of statistics experience prior
to this course (poor,moderate,…)
• Numerical
Discrete e.g Number of siblings (0,1,2,…)Continuous e.g. Height (140-210cm)
Types of Data
Display numerical discrete data
• Stem-and-leaf plot of number of siblingsUnit of stem: 1
0 | 000000000000000000000000
1 | 000000000000000000000000000
2 | 00000000000000000
3 | 000
4 | 0000000
5 | 0
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
11 | 0
…but wait, there’s more!
• Mean – add answers up, then divide by number of replies:
• Median – middle value of sorted answers:
425.180
11x15x14x73x32x171x270x24
11 5 4 4 4 4 4 4 4 3 3 3 2 2 2 2 2 2 2 2 2 2 2 2 2
2 2 2 2 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0
Display numerical continuous data
• Stem-and-leaf plot of HeightUnit of stem: 100cm
14 | 111478889
15 | 012223355677788889
16 | 000022333344555556777778888999
17 | 00111244555566789
18 | 012335
Measure of spread
• Variance – amount of variability around the mean
• Standard deviation –
• IQR – Interquartile range
Shape
• Skewness – measure of extent to which shape is lopsided rather than symmetrical(i.e. when mean=median).
• Positive skew – more data to the right of the mode than left (i.e. mean > median)
• Negative skew – more data to the left of the mode than right (i.e. mean < median)
Normal distribution
• Most common
• Symmetrical –mean=median
• ‘bell-shaped’
• ‘normal’ – it was once thought that all things in natural world corresponded to this shape
The z- transformation
• Values of data come in many forms, e.g.
1. x=50 marks out of 100
2. x=178cm
3. x=55s
• Transform into z-scores via formula:
std
meanx
The z- transformation
• Comparing marks
My mark was 80 out of 100, where the average mark was 60, and the std deviation was 10.
My friend’s mark was 26 out of 30, where the average mark was 20, and the std deviation was 2.
Who did better, taking into account that the marks are scaled?
Task 1 – Summarising
• Age of cars: 1,1,1,2,2,4,5,7
• Age of cars with outlier: 1,1,1,2,2,4,5,70
Calculate the mean and the median
• Questions:
When should you use the median instead of the mean?
How would you describe the shape of the data sets?
Randomisation
Let’s look at this video on random sequences….
Random Sequences: Human vs Coin
(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H2lJLXS3AYM)
Drawing a random sample
1. identify all of the members in your population, you must be able to list them in what is called a sampling frame.
2.use a Table of Random Numbers, or use a Random Number generator to get a set of random numbers
3.draw the corresponding elements from the sampling frame
Some Random Numbers
18 48 20 16 5 47 45 23 38 1715 22 44 46 13 30 7 25 50 416 29 2 27 19 2 9 11 50 27
45 35 1 13 46 38 32 41 31 266 15 40 19 44 39 49 48 43 84 29 14 37 36 22 16 7 47 5
17 42 21 25 3 34 23 30 28 3318 12 10 24 20 34 19 10 35 2324 18 41 43 28 40 47 4 48 72 32 15 27 1 30 44 6 16 36
49 31 46 8 21 38 37 25 17 22
Moral of the story
Humans are not very good at picking at
random –Bias is almost
guaranteed to be introduced
Use random numbers when drawing a sample!
4. P-value
• Probability of getting a test statistic equal or more extreme than the one sampled, given that the null hypothesis is correct
• ‘evidence for the null’
• Use computer program to calculate, here the p-value would essentially be equal to 0.
5. Conclusion
• Compare p-value to significance level and either accept or reject the null hypothesis based on the evidence
‘if the p-value is low, the null must go!’
• p-value=0 < α=0.05, so reject the null
• In conclusion: ‘We have strong evidence that marine reserves do lead to bigger fish within their boundaries’
Results: Tables• Good for showing specific data or
statistics in a small space.• More concise than text
• More accurate than figures
Results: Tables• Good for showing specific data or
statistics in a small space.• More concise than text
• More accurate than figures
• Table number and title always go at the top
• Most important elements read down, not across
• Each row and column title starts with a capital letter
• There is ‘white space’ in the table
• The table ‘stands alone’
• The reader doesn’t need to refer to the text to understand the data
Results: Figures• Present numeric data in visual form
• Graph
• Photograph
• Flow-chart
• Map
• Diagram
• Good for general comparisons, trends, distributions and cycles
• Figure number and title always go below
• Label axes clearly and include units
• Distinguish data sets from each other and include a key
• Figure should ‘stand alone’.
1. Introduction & Quiz
2. The Scientific Method
3. Methods
4. Results
5. Discussion
6. Introduction
7. Scientific Writing
DiscussionWhat do your results mean?
Elements to include:
• State the study’s major findings
• Explain the meaning and importance of the findings
• Relate the findings to those of similar studies
• Consider alternative explanations for the findings
• State the clinical relevance of the findings
• Acknowledge the study’s limitations
• Make suggestions for future research
DiscussionWhat do your results mean?
Things to avoid:
• Overpresentation of results
• Overinterpretation of results
• Unwarranted speculation
• Inflation of the importance of the findings
• Tangential issues
• Criticism of other studies
• Conclusions that are not supported by the data
Discussion• State the major findings of the study
• Should be the first paragraph
• Should not include data or refer to the study design
“The results...demonstrate that the low-carbohydrate, high-protein, high-fat Atkins diet produces greater weight loss...than a conventional high-carbohydrate, low-fat diet for up to six months,but that the differences do not persist at one year.”
Discussion• Explain the meaning of the findings and why they
are important
“The difference in weight loss between the two groups in the first six months demonstrates an overall greater energy deficit in the low-carbohydrate group, despite unrestricted protein and fat intake in this group and instructions to restrict energy intake in the conventional diet group.”
The lack of significant difference between the groups at one year is most likely due to greater weight regain in the low-carbohydrate group and the small sample size.
These data suggest that long-term adherence to the Atkins diet may be difficult.”
Discussion• Relate the results to those of similar studies
• Point out similarities“Our data suggest that ketosis was unlikely to be responsible for the
increased weight loss with the low-carbohydrate diet, since we did not find any relation between the presence of urinary ketones and weight loss. This suggestion is supported by Smith et al (2005) and Jones et al (2006), who also found a lack of relationship between ketosis and weight loss.”
Discussion• Relate the results to those of similar studies
• Point out similarities“Our data suggest that ketosis was unlikely to be responsible for the
increased weight loss with the low-carbohydrate diet, since we did not find any relation between the presence of urinary ketones and weight loss. This suggestion is supported by Smith et al (2005) and Jones et al (2006), who also found a lack of relationship between ketosis and weight loss.”
Discussion• Relate the results to those of similar studies
• Point out similarities“Our data suggest that ketosis was unlikely to be responsible for the
increased weight loss with the low-carbohydrate diet, since we did not find any relation between the presence of urinary ketones and weight loss. This suggestion is supported by Smith et al (2005) and Jones et al (2006), who also found a lack of relationship between ketosis and weight loss.”
• Explain differences “Concerns that diets high in meat might have negative effects on
cardiovascular risk factors were not substantiated by this study. Unlike Skov et al (2001), LDL cholesterol remained unchanged from baseline in the low-carbohydrate group. This may be because absolute meat intakes were considerably lower in our study.”
Discussion• Relate the results to those of similar studies
• Point out similarities“Our data suggest that ketosis was unlikely to be responsible for the
increased weight loss with the low-carbohydrate diet, since we did not find any relation between the presence of urinary ketones and weight loss. This suggestion is supported by Smith et al (2005) and Jones et al (2006), who also found a lack of relationship between ketosis and weight loss.”
• Explain differences “Concerns that diets high in meat might have negative effects on
cardiovascular risk factors were not substantiated by this study. Unlike Skov et al (2001), LDL cholesterol remained unchanged from baseline in the low-carbohydrate group. This may be because absolute meat intakes were considerably lower in our study.”
1. Introduction & Quiz
2. The Scientific Method
3. Methods
4. Results
5. Discussion
6. Introduction
7. Scientific Writing
Introduction
Nature and scope of the problem
Brief review of literature
Justification of investigation (incl. hypothesis)
Objectives
Create
A
Research
Space
Task: Introduction
1. At any given time, approximately 45% of women...a major public health problem.
2. The conventional dietary approach to weight.... have promoted this approach.
3. The Atkins diet, originally published...be the most popular of these diets.
4. More than 10 million copies of Atkins’s...have read any other book.
5. Despite its longevity and popularity...percent after 24 weeks.
6. We conducted a one-year...disease in obese persons.
7. The subjects were randomly...by most dieters.
Task: Match Sentences with SectionsSentence Change
BlindnessAtkinsDiet
At any given time, 45% of women and 30% of men in the US are trying to lose weight.
Task: Match Sentences with Sections
Sentence Change Blindness
AtkinsDiet
At any given time, 45% of women and 30% of men in the US are trying to lose weight. I
Task: Match Sentences with SectionsSentence Change
BlindnessAtkinsDiet
At any given time, 45% of women and 30% of men in the US are trying to lose weight. I
All participants completed a comprehensive medical examination and routine blood tests.
Task: Match Sentences with SectionsSentence Change
BlindnessAtkinsDiet
At any given time, 45% of women and 30% of men in the US are trying to lose weight. I
All participants completed a comprehensive medical examination and routine blood tests.
M
Task: Match Sentences with SectionsSentence Change
BlindnessAtkinsDiet
At any given time, 45% of women and 30% of men in the US are trying to lose weight. I
All participants completed a comprehensive medical examination and routine blood tests.
M
In contrast to similar studies, it was primarily younger participants who failed to notice a change.
Despite our impression that we retain the visual details of our surroundings from one moment to the next, we are surprisingly unable to detect changes to such details.
Overall, 59 percent of subjects completed the study, and 88 percent of those who completed the six-month assessment completed the full study.
Only nine of the 35 participants reported noticing the switch when asked if they had seen anything unusual.
The self-help nature of treatment probably contributed to the drop-out rate of 41 percent.
Participants were directed into a nearby hallway and were interviewed by two researchers.
Task: Match Sentences with SectionsSentence Change
BlindnessAtkinsDiet
At any given time, 45% of women and 30% of men in the US are trying to lose weight. I
All participants completed a comprehensive medical examination and routine blood tests.
M
In contrast to similar studies, it was primarily younger participants who failed to notice a change.
D
Despite our impression that we retain the visual details of our surroundings from one moment to the next, we are surprisingly unable to detect changes to such details.
Overall, 59 percent of subjects completed the study, and 88 percent of those who completed the six-month assessment completed the full study.
Only nine of the 35 participants reported noticing the switch when asked if they had seen anything unusual.
The self-help nature of treatment probably contributed to the drop-out rate of 41 percent.
Participants were directed into a nearby hallway and were interviewed by two researchers.
Task: Match Sentences with SectionsSentence Change
BlindnessAtkinsDiet
At any given time, 45% of women and 30% of men in the US are trying to lose weight. I
All participants completed a comprehensive medical examination and routine blood tests.
M
In contrast to similar studies, it was primarily younger participants who failed to notice a change.
D
Despite our impression that we retain the visual details of our surroundings from one moment to the next, we are surprisingly unable to detect changes to such details.
I
Overall, 59 percent of subjects completed the study, and 88 percent of those who completed the six-month assessment completed the full study.
Only nine of the 35 participants reported noticing the switch when asked if they had seen anything unusual.
The self-help nature of treatment probably contributed to the drop-out rate of 41 percent.
Participants were directed into a nearby hallway and were interviewed by two researchers.
Task: Match Sentences with SectionsSentence Change
BlindnessAtkinsDiet
At any given time, 45% of women and 30% of men in the US are trying to lose weight. I
All participants completed a comprehensive medical examination and routine blood tests.
M
In contrast to similar studies, it was primarily younger participants who failed to notice a change.
D
Despite our impression that we retain the visual details of our surroundings from one moment to the next, we are surprisingly unable to detect changes to such details.
I
Overall, 59 percent of subjects completed the study, and 88 percent of those who completed the six-month assessment completed the full study.
R
Only nine of the 35 participants reported noticing the switch when asked if they had seen anything unusual.
The self-help nature of treatment probably contributed to the drop-out rate of 41 percent.
Participants were directed into a nearby hallway and were interviewed by two researchers.
Task: Match Sentences with SectionsSentence Change
BlindnessAtkinsDiet
At any given time, 45% of women and 30% of men in the US are trying to lose weight. I
All participants completed a comprehensive medical examination and routine blood tests.
M
In contrast to similar studies, it was primarily younger participants who failed to notice a change.
D
Despite our impression that we retain the visual details of our surroundings from one moment to the next, we are surprisingly unable to detect changes to such details.
I
Overall, 59 percent of subjects completed the study, and 88 percent of those who completed the six-month assessment completed the full study.
R
Only nine of the 35 participants reported noticing the switch when asked if they had seen anything unusual.
R
The self-help nature of treatment probably contributed to the drop-out rate of 41 percent.
Participants were directed into a nearby hallway and were interviewed by two researchers.
Task: Match Sentences with SectionsSentence Change
BlindnessAtkinsDiet
At any given time, 45% of women and 30% of men in the US are trying to lose weight. I
All participants completed a comprehensive medical examination and routine blood tests.
M
In contrast to similar studies, it was primarily younger participants who failed to notice a change.
D
Despite our impression that we retain the visual details of our surroundings from one moment to the next, we are surprisingly unable to detect changes to such details.
I
Overall, 59 percent of subjects completed the study, and 88 percent of those who completed the six-month assessment completed the full study.
R
Only nine of the 35 participants reported noticing the switch when asked if they had seen anything unusual.
R
The self-help nature of treatment probably contributed to the drop-out rate of 41 percent.
D
Participants were directed into a nearby hallway and were interviewed by two researchers.
Task: Match Sentences with SectionsSentence Change
BlindnessAtkinsDiet
At any given time, 45% of women and 30% of men in the US are trying to lose weight. I
All participants completed a comprehensive medical examination and routine blood tests.
M
In contrast to similar studies, it was primarily younger participants who failed to notice a change.
D
Despite our impression that we retain the visual details of our surroundings from one moment to the next, we are surprisingly unable to detect changes to such details.
I
Overall, 59 percent of subjects completed the study, and 88 percent of those who completed the six-month assessment completed the full study.
R
Only nine of the 35 participants reported noticing the switch when asked if they had seen anything unusual.
R
The self-help nature of treatment probably contributed to the drop-out rate of 41 percent.
D
Participants were directed into a nearby hallway and were interviewed by two researchers.
M
1. Introduction & Quiz
2. The Scientific Method
3. Methods
4. Results
5. Discussion
6. Introduction
7. Scientific Writing
Principles of Scientific Writing
• Precision – say what you mean
• Clarity – avoid what you don’t mean
• Conciseness – make every word count
• Objectivity – state things as they are
• Logic – move smoothly from one point to the next
These principles should be applied throughout a scientific report.
Task: Scientific Writing
• “This new process reduces emissions from diesel engines and industrial furnaces.”
• Precision
• Reduces – by how much?
Task: Scientific Writing
• “This new process reduces emissions from diesel engines and industrial furnaces.”
• Precision
• Reduces – by how much?
• Emissions – of what?
Task: Scientific Writing
• “This new process reduces emissions from diesel engines and industrial furnaces.”
• Precision
• Reduces – by how much?
• Emissions – of what?
Task: Scientific Writing
• “This new process reduces emissions from diesel engines and industrial furnaces.”
• Precision
• Reduces – by how much?
• Emissions – of what?
Task: Scientific Writing
• “This new process reduces emissions from diesel engines and industrial furnaces.”
• Precision
• Reduces – by how much?
• Emissions – of what?
• “This new process eliminates 99 percent of nitrogen oxide emissions from diesel engines and industrial furnaces.”
Task: Scientific Writing“In that the ‘Big Bang’, currently the most credible theory about how
the universe was created, explains only the creation of hydrogen and helium, we are left to theorise as to how all the other elements came into being. Having studied the nuclear reactions that constitute the life and death cycles of stars, many scientists believe therein lies the key.”
• Clarity
• Over-the-top formality -> bewildered readers
Task: Scientific Writing“In that the ‘Big Bang’, currently the most credible theory about how
the universe was created, explains only the creation of hydrogen and helium, we are left to theorise as to how all the other elements came into being. Having studied the nuclear reactions that constitute the life and death cycles of stars, many scientists believe therein lies the key.”
• Clarity
• Over-the-top formality -> bewildered readers
Task: Scientific Writing“In that the ‘Big Bang’, currently the most credible theory about how
the universe was created, explains only the creation of hydrogen and helium, we are left to theorise as to how all the other elements came into being. Having studied the nuclear reactions that constitute the life and death cycles of stars, many scientists believe therein lies the key.”
• Clarity
• Over-the-top formality -> bewildered readers
Task: Scientific Writing“In that the ‘Big Bang’, currently the most credible theory about how
the universe was created, explains only the creation of hydrogen and helium, we are left to theorise as to how all the other elements came into being. Having studied the nuclear reactions that constitute the life and death cycles of stars, many scientists believe therein lies the key.”
• Clarity
• Over-the-top formality -> bewildered readers
Task: Scientific Writing“In that the ‘Big Bang’, currently the most credible theory about how
the universe was created, explains only the creation of hydrogen and helium, we are left to theorise as to how all the other elements came into being. Having studied the nuclear reactions that constitute the life and death cycles of stars, many scientists believe therein lies the key.”
• Clarity
• Over-the-top formality -> bewildered readers
Task: Scientific Writing“In that the ‘Big Bang’, currently the most credible theory about how
the universe was created, explains only the creation of hydrogen and helium, we are left to theorise as to how all the other elements came into being. Having studied the nuclear reactions that constitute the life and death cycles of stars, many scientists believe therein lies the key.”
• Clarity
• Over-the-top formality -> bewildered readers
“The ‘Big Bang’ is the most credible theory for the creation of the universe. Nevertheless, the ‘Big Bang’ explains the creation of only helium and oxygen. What about the other elements? Many scientists believe that they arose from nuclear reactions that occur in the life and death cycles of stars.”
Task: Scientific Writing
• “Because the receiver presented the radiometer with a high-flux environment, it was mounted in a silver-plated stainless steel container.”
• Clarity• What is mounted in the container?
Task: Scientific Writing
• “Because the receiver presented the radiometer with a high-flux environment, it was mounted in a silver-plated stainless steel container.”
• Clarity
• What is mounted in the container?
Task: Scientific Writing
• “Because the receiver presented the radiometer with a high-flux environment, it was mounted in a silver-plated stainless steel container.”
• Clarity
• What is mounted in the container?
Task: Scientific Writing
• “Because the receiver presented the radiometer with a high-flux environment, it was mounted in a silver-plated stainless steel container.”
• Clarity
• What is mounted in the container?
Task: Scientific Writing
• “Because the receiver presented the radiometer with a high-flux environment, it was mounted in a silver-plated stainless steel container.”
• Clarity
• What is mounted in the container?
• “Because the receiver presented the radiometer with a high-flux environment, the radiometer was mounted in a silver-plated stainless steel container.”
Task: Scientific Writing
• “The achievement of success in these advanced technologies depends very heavily on a rather detailed understanding of the complex processes that govern the velocities of the unburned gases prior to combustion.”
• Conciseness
Task: Scientific Writing
• “The achievement of success in these advanced technologies depends very heavily on a rather detailed understanding of the complex processes that govern the velocities of the unburned gases prior to combustion.”
• Conciseness
Task: Scientific Writing
• “The achievement of success in these advanced technologies depends very heavily on a rather detailed understanding of the complex processes that govern the velocities of the unburned gases prior to combustion.”
• Conciseness
Task: Scientific Writing
• “The achievement of success in these advanced technologies depends very heavily on a rather detailed understanding of the complex processes that govern the velocities of the unburned gases prior to combustion.”
• Conciseness
Task: Scientific Writing
• “The achievement of success in these advanced technologies depends very heavily on a rather detailed understanding of the complex processes that govern the velocities of the unburned gases prior to combustion.”
• Conciseness
Task: Scientific Writing
• “The achievement of success in these advanced technologies depends very heavily on a rather detailed understanding of the complex processes that govern the velocities of the unburned gases prior to combustion.”
• Conciseness
• “The success of these advanced technologies depends on understanding the velocities in the unburned gases prior to combustion.”
Task: Scientific Writing
• “Once sample A had been added to sample B, the contents of the test tube turned a beautiful blue colour.”
• Objectivity• ‘Beautiful’ cannot be measured or accurately explained to the
reader.
• How could you re-write this sentence?
• “Once sample A had been added to sample B, the contents of the test tube turned a bright blue colour.”
Task: Scientific Writing
• “The Cascade Range, with its prominent chain of towering cones, is a volcanic region in the western United States. There are numerous areas across the globe currently experiencing volcanic activity.”
• Logic
• Broad -> narrow
Task: Scientific Writing
• “The Cascade Range, with its prominent chain of towering cones, is a volcanic region in the western United States. There are numerous areas across the globe currently experiencing volcanic activity.”
• Logic
• Broad -> narrow
Task: Scientific Writing
• “The Cascade Range, with its prominent chain of towering cones, is a volcanic region in the western United States. There are numerous areas across the globe currently experiencing volcanic activity.”
• Logic
• Broad -> narrow
• “There are numerous areas across the globe currently experiencing volcanic activity. One of these areas is the Cascade Range, a prominent chain of towering cones in the western United States.”
Swierk et al. (2011) also used erythrocytes and 3 d weighed
food record as reference methods for validation of the Australian
Dietary Questionnaire (ADQ). Their validity coefficient for
omega-3/b was comparable to that of the NZ Dietary
Questionnaire (NZDQ) (=0.69 [95% CI (0.39, 0.95)]), while
they found slightly higher validity coefficients for omega-3/a
(=0.92 [95% CI (0.63, 0.99)]) and omega-3/c (=0.78 [95%
CI (0.42, 0.98)]). These stronger validity coefficients may be a
result of the different timeframes covered by the questionnaires;
the ADQ assessed dietary intakes over the past three months,
whereas the NZDQ assessed intakes over the past year.
Scientific Writing: Original
As erythrocyte levels have a life cycle of approximately 120
days, it is possible this biomarker correlates more strongly
with the timeframe of the ADQ. In contrast, the NZDQ had
stronger validity coefficients for omega-3/a, omega-3/b and
omega-3/c than were found in two other validation studies for
omega-3 dietary questionnaires. These other questionnaires
covered the whole diet and therefore had reduced specificity
for omega-3, and this may explain their lower validity
coefficients. Further, McNaughton et al. (2010) used plasma
phospholipids as a reference method for a questionnaire that
assessed omega-3 intakes over the past six months, and this
biomarker may only reflect intake over a shorter period.
Scientific Writing: Original
Quiz
1. The Scientific Method is:
a) A process that guarantees the success of scientific experiments
b) A logical set of steps that allows the formulation and testing of a hypothesis
c) A comprehensive guide to Laboratory procedure
Quiz
1. The Scientific Method is:
a) A process that guarantees the success of scientific experiments
b) A logical set of steps that allows the formulation and testing of a hypothesis
c) A comprehensive guide to Laboratory procedure
Quiz
2. Which of the following is NOT considered a key principle of scientific writing?
a) Objectivity
b) Rhetoric
c) Conciseness
Quiz
2. Which of the following is NOT considered a key principle of scientific writing?
a) Objectivity
b) Rhetoric
c) Conciseness
3. At which stage of their research do scientists usually construct a hypothesis?
a) When the results of an experiment have been inconclusive
b) When they find that empirical methods are inappropriate for their research question
c) When they have gathered sufficient data to make an ‘educated guess’ about the outcome of an experiment
Quiz
3. At which stage of their research do scientists usually construct a hypothesis?
a) When the results of an experiment have been inconclusive
b) When they find that empirical methods are inappropriate for their research question
c) When they have gathered sufficient data to make an ‘educated guess’ about the outcome of an experiment
Quiz
Quiz
4. Which sources do scientists use for reliable reports about new discoveries in their field?
a) Peer-reviewed journals
b) The latest scientific updates to Wikipedia
c) Textbooks written by Nobel-Prize winning scientists
Quiz
4. Which sources do scientists use for reliable reports about new discoveries in their field?
a) Peer-reviewed journals
b) The latest scientific updates to Wikipedia
c) Textbooks written by Nobel-Prize winning scientists
Quiz
5. Which of these sections would you NOTexpect to find in a standard scientific report/article?
a) Abstract
b) Discussion
c) Delivery
Quiz
5. Which of these sections would you NOTexpect to find in a standard scientific report/article?
a) Abstract
b) Discussion
c) Delivery
Quiz
6. Which verb forms are most common in the Methods section of Scientific Reports?
a) Past tense (was / were / measured ....)
b) Conditionals (would / might / could ...)
c) Future tense (will do ... / going to do ...)
Quiz
6. Which verb forms are most common in the Methods section of Scientific Reports?
a) Past tense (was / were / measured ....)
b) Conditionals (would / might / could ...)
c) Future tense (will do ... / going to do ...)
Quiz
7. What is the standard, logical sequence of statements in Scientific writing?
a) Parallel
b) Recursive
c) From broad to narrow
Quiz
7. What is the standard, logical sequence of statements in Scientific writing?
a) Parallel
b) Recursive
c) From broad to narrow
Quiz
8. Many scientists use the C.A.R.S framework when writing an introduction to a report. What does it stand for?
a) Create a Research Space
b) Consider All Reasonable Speculation
c) Conduct a Responsible Study
Quiz
8. Many scientists use the C.A.R.S framework when writing an introduction to a report. What does it stand for?
a) Create a Research Space
b) Consider All Reasonable Speculation
c) Conduct a Responsible Study
Quiz
9. Which of these statements might you expect to read in a Scientific Report?
a) The alternative hypothesis has been proven
b) The null hypothesis has been rejected
c) The null and alternative hypotheses have been rejected
Quiz
9. Which of these statements might you expect to read in a Scientific Report?
a) The alternative hypothesis has been proven
b) The null hypothesis has been rejected
c) The null and alternative hypotheses have been rejected
Quiz
10. Which of these would be considered a weakness in a Scientific Report?
a) The experiment it reports on reproduces an earlier one
b) Limitations are explicitly acknowledged by the authors
c) Everyday English words are avoided in favour of Latin and Greek vocabulary
Quiz
10. Which of these would be considered a weakness in a Scientific Report?
a) The experiment it reports on reproduces an earlier one
b) Limitations are explicitly acknowledged by the authors
c) Everyday English words are avoided in favour of Latin and Greek vocabulary
Quiz
11. Which of these factors is especially relevant in longitudinal studies with groups of participants?
a) Attrition
b) Synthesis
c) Synchronicity
Quiz
11. Which of these factors is especially relevant in longitudinal studies with groups of participants?
a) Attrition
b) Synthesis
c) Synchronicity
Quiz
12. What might the term ‘Figure 1’ in a scientific report refer to?
a) The leader of a research team
b) A chart or graph
c) A table of results
Quiz
12. What might the term ‘Figure 1’ in a scientific report refer to?
a) The leader of a research team
b) A chart or graph
c) A table of results