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Questions and evaluates information, for example:

What is really important here?

How does it relate to what I know already?

What standpoint does the writer have?

Are there any weaknesses in the argument that is

being put forward?What other opinions are there on this topic?

Do I agree or disagree with the writer?


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Another key aspect in creating a logical piece of

writing is involves writing in paragraphs.

A report or essay is made up of a series of related

paragraphs.

Have a look at the organisation of the writing onthe next slide. What do you notice?


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This essay discusses the social and environmental problems associated

with the Kaituna River with particular reference to its lower reaches and

estuary.

This area has been of particular interest in an ecological , economic and

spiritual sense for hundreds of years.

Development of this water resource includes its use for food gathering,

transportation, recreation, effluent disposal and drainage.

Impacts resulting from usage and control are pollution, a changed

ecosystem, an altered landscape and increased human habitation in the

immediate vicinity.

This essay covers: the historical value of the river; its changing status of

the past 150 years and how the impacts listed above have affected the

the river and wildlife during that period.Rountree, K. (1991). Writing for success: A practical guide for New Zealand students. Auckland: Longman Paul.

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An assignment of any type must be based on a logical

structure which is your own way of analysing the topic.

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Writing is hard work, it takes time and

concentration. Good writers arent born that

way, rather they understand that writing is a

process. It can be broken down into stages

that make it more manageable.


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Analyse the question

Brainstorm ideas

Make a plan to guide researchDo research to get more ideas for your answer

Sort ideas by planning the essay/assignment structure

Write drafts

Prepare references

Edit and proofread


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