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by Anica Boulanger-Mashberg
Dir. Sean Penn’s Into the Wild
Robyn Davidson’s
Tracks
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Insight Comparison Guides are written by experienced English teachers and professional writers with expertise in literature and film criticism. Each title provides a comprehensive, in-depth guide to a pair of texts, including a detailed study of their key elements and a close analysis of their shared ideas, issues and themes.
Features• Character maps• About the authors• Synopsis of each text• Context and background• Genre, structure and language• Chapter-by-chapter analyses• Themes, issues and ideas • Essay topics• Sample topic analysis and sample answer• References and reading
About the authorAnica Boulanger-Mashberg, BPA, BA (Hons), MA, has lectured and tutored in English at the University of Tasmania and in communications at the Queensland University of Technology. She works as an editor and freelance writer, and also has extensive experience as a playwright, performer and actor. She has a particular interest in Australian theatre and contemporary Australian writing.
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contents
Character map: Tracks 4
Character map: Into the Wild 5
Section 1: Tracks 6
Overview 6
Background & context 8
Genre, structure & language 11
Chapter-by-chapter analysis 14
Characters & relationships 25
Section 2: Into the Wild 32
Overview 32
Background & context 34
Genre, structure & language 37
Scene-by-scene analysis 40
Characters & relationships 51
Section 3: Comparison 57
Ideas, issues & themes 57
Questions & answers 72
Sample answer 77
References & reading 80SAMPLE
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Richard (Rick) Smolan The National Geographic
photographer who accompanies Robyn
to capture parts of her journey. They have a
sexual relationship but Robyn is also frustrated
by his presence on her trip.
Eddie A Pitjantjara elder who
accompanies Robyn on part of her journey,
Eddie is one of few humans with whom
Robyn forms a lasting and positive relationship
in the book.
Dookie, Zeleika, Goliath, Bub
The camels who accompany Robyn across
the desert. She relies on them completely and knows their individual
personalities well.
Robyn’s friends These include Toly
Sawenko, Jenny Green and Nancy. While Robyn
tries to avoid human contact much of the
time, she also relies on them at other times for
support.
conflicted relationship
loves
positive relationship
conflicted relationship
difficult relationship
positive, mutually dependent relationship
Character map: tracks
Robyn Davidson The author and
protagonist, who learns about camel handling in Alice Springs and then travels alone across the desert with three camels
and a dog.
Diggity Robyn’s adored, loyal
dog; Diggity travels with her but dies after taking
poisoned bait.
Kurt Posel An expert camel-man
who takes Robyn on as an apprentice; can be
cruel and unpredictable.
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chapter-By-Chapter analysis
Part One: Alice Sprung
Chapter 1 (pp.3–16)
Summary: Robyn arrives in Alice Springs; she secures a job and board at the pub; she begins working for Kurt Posel; she has a run-in with Kurt and leaves.
Robyn arrives in Alice with meagre belongings and even less money, resolute
in her intention to learn to train and handle camels so she can trek across
the Australian desert to the west coast, but with little idea of how to go
about achieving her goal. However, with the matter-of-fact approach that
characterises her entire journey and, indeed, her personality, Robyn is not
the least put off by the seemingly insurmountable challenges ahead. She
quietly goes about finding a place to work and stay. The way she acquires
information about camels is presented as being part focus and determination,
part luck – a blend that recurs throughout her adventure. In an apprentice
position at Kurt and Gladdy Posel’s ranch, she first experiences what will
become a routine of almost incomprehensibly hard work (four a.m. starts,
long days of labour, and abuse from the frightening Kurt). This sets the
pattern for her physical and mental determination throughout her journey.
Robyn’s first impressions of Alice also establish a narrative pattern:
observation of her surrounds will continue to be of great interest to her. Her
description of the Todd River comprises characteristic attention to detail and
a rich, poetic language: ‘still, straight columns of blue smoke chimneying up
through the gum leaves marked Aboriginal camps’ (p.8). This is her first
mention of Indigenous Australians, in whom she takes a deep interest.
The book opens as though in mid-sentence: Robyn’s arrival in Alice is the
culmination of ideas, planning and travel to which we are not privy. This
indicates an immediacy – the book will not contain detailed background
information on events and decisions. Rather, Davidson focuses on the situation
in the present, and the things we learn about Robyn in the first paragraph
will remain consistent throughout: her relationship with Diggity, her
independence and determination to follow her own course, her lack of fear
and her willingness to face the future with few material possessions.
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Section 1: Tracks
Key point
The chapter concludes with Robyn finally snapping under the pressure
of Kurt’s unfair treatment. This shows another side to her solidly
determined personality: she also has a fierce emotional capacity that
is aroused at several significant moments in the text.
Key vocabulary
Shanghai: to trick or force someone into participating in something, as Robyn
feels Kurt does to her.
Q Which of the text’s themes are introduced or foreshadowed in this
chapter?
Chapter 2 (pp.17–37)Summary: Robyn works at the pub; she goes back to work for Kurt; she leaves the pub; she trains Akhnaton, a crow, before leaving Kurt again; she begins work with Sallay Mahomet.
The pub where Robyn works is a microcosm of Alice society, particularly in
the gender-related behaviour she witnesses and the unstated rules about
serving Indigenous locals. Without explicit statement, Davidson indicates
that she does not condone the discrimination against Indigenous people
– for example, she is grateful that at least this pub doesn’t stoop quite
so low as to have the ‘dog window’ out the back that other pubs have for
serving ‘booze … to the blacks’ (p.17). Her attitude towards Indigenous
rights remains unwavering throughout the text.
When Kurt convinces her to return to the ranch, despite her slavish duties
and poor treatment, she begins to feel a hint of the ‘limitless power’ and
freedom she seeks and will eventually encounter on her journey (p.23). This
chapter emphasises Robyn’s connection to her environment, to the outback
and to the camels. She works incredibly hard and withstands physical pain
as well as Kurt’s abuse, finding friendship and solace not only in Gladdy and
the neighbours at Basso’s Farm, but also in Dookie (a camel who will eventually
be hers) and, to an extent, in Akhnaton, a wild crow she trains. She admits
that she really does ‘enjoy the company of animals better than people’ (p.30),
with whom she has become uncomfortable, distrustful and defensive. This
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Section 2: Into the Wild
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Key point
The last example of a character looking directly into the camera is very
brief: as Walt surrenders to grief, falling to the ground, he momentarily
looks at the camera. Here it serves to connect him to both the
audience and his son, revealing how this once-dominating character
has become so vulnerable: there is nothing that can be hidden when
you look directly into another’s eyes.
Q List the cinematic techniques used in the film’s final twenty
minutes. How do they contribute to your understanding of the
narrative?
characters & relationships
Christopher Johnson McCandless / Alexander Supertramp
Key quotes
‘Chris measured himself, and those around him, by a fiercely rigorous
moral code.’ (Carine, 18:26)
‘Think I got my head on my shoulders pretty good.’ (1:47:19)
‘I think careers are a twentieth-century invention and I don’t want
one.’ (1:48:02)
Chris is academically successful, a loving brother to Carine (though an
ambivalent son to Billie and Walt), friendly, confident and compassionate:
a man in his early twenties with the world laid out at his feet. He has saved
almost enough money and earned good-enough grades to enter the elite
world of Harvard to study law; his parents are financially comfortable and
willing to help support this endeavour. We meet Chris at a clear crisis point
in his life, when he could have followed this conventional path but makes a
completely different choice.
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Section 3: Comparison
IDeas, Issues & themes
Freedom and independence
Key quotes
‘… for someone like me, nothing was as important as freedom. The
freedom to make up your own mind, to make yourself.’ (Tracks, p.257)
‘Tramping is too easy with all this money … My days were more
exciting when I was penniless.’ (Into the Wild, 1:00:22)
Both texts explore a cultural fascination with the allure of life away from
society and its conventions: an existence unrestrained by others’ expectations,
lived in a kind of ‘authentic’ spiritual resonance with the wilderness. In Into
the Wild this idea is first described in Chris’ voice-over, which draws on the
words of Wallace Stegner:
It should not be denied that being footloose has always
exhilarated us. It is associated in our minds with escape: from
history and oppression and law and irksome obligations; with
absolute freedom. (20:00)
By including the quotation from Stegner (although it is unreferenced), Penn
reinforces this concept by showing that it has support beyond the film.
Davidson, conversely, reinforces the theme by relying on a deeply honest
and very personal description of the idea of freedom when she argues that
what she wanted to do with her trip was:
to be alone, to test, to push, to unclog my brain of all its
extraneous debris, not to be protected, to be stripped of all the
social crutches, not to be hampered by any outside interference
whatsoever, well meant or not. (p.91)
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Analysing a sample topic‘Compare the portrayals of family in Tracks and Into the Wild.’
Don’t be misled by a question that appears to be very straightforward: just
because it is concise and phrased as a clear directive, it is not necessarily
going to be ‘easier’ to answer. Even if the question is very short, such as
this one, your answer still needs to have depth and complexity, and you will
need to make decisions about how to achieve this. While this offers you more
freedom in your essay planning – since you can choose your own areas of
focus – it can also be very challenging.
Make sure that you understand what the topic is asking you to do before
beginning your essay plan. As always, underline key terms or ideas:
• ‘compare’ (your answer must evaluate two texts, considering
differences as well as similarities)
• ‘portrayals’ (suggesting that you need to discuss narrative techniques
as well as thematic concerns)
• ‘family’ (this connects the two texts by identifying a shared theme).
Next you should consider the underlying expectations in the task. The
prompt gives you a clear directive: compare two texts. The expectation in
a comparison essay is that you analyse relevant elements of each text, and
also examine the intersections between them. Are they making the same
thematic arguments or different arguments? How do they make these
arguments? Although this prompt does not use the word ‘how’, it is implied
in the term ‘portrayals’. You will need to discuss the ways in which the
texts portray families (how are particular narrative techniques used to
communicate ideas?) as well as the perspectives from which the theme
of family is portrayed (what are the views on and arguments about family
presented by the texts?).
Once you have established what the question demands of you, frame a
contention, or main argument, in response – this will shape your discussion
and determine the evidence you select. A simply worded question offers you
a broad scope because it does not dictate the nature of your contention (it
does not ask you to ‘agree’ or ‘disagree’ with a statement, for example). Your
contention for this style of prompt might focus on narrative techniques, settings
and contexts, character development, or specific ideas and issues explored by
the texts.
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Body paragraph outline
Paragraph 1 – identify evidence in Tracks of family structures and how they
function in Robyn’s journey.
• Robyn rarely mentions her biological family (or her conflict with
them), though they do travel to Alice to farewell her (pp.96–100).
• Robyn’s friends constantly thwart her desire for independence, yet
they are always there for practical and emotional support, such as
when she flies home to see Nancy (p.35).
• Diggity and the camels become a kind of family: ‘without them I
would be nowhere’ (p.117).
Paragraph 2 – identify evidence in Into the Wild of family structures and
their function in Chris’ journey.
• In flashbacks, Chris’ relationship with his biological family is
dysfunctional and damaging; however, this at least partially prompts
his journey, which brings freedom and pleasure.
• Chris, Jan and Rainey, as a surrogate family, fulfil emotional needs
in one another.
• Chris and Ron also share mutual affection – Ron even proposes to
formalise the relationship: ‘Whaddya say … you let me adopt you?’
(2:07:47).
Paragraph 3 – discuss similarities in how the texts portray family.
• Both show individuals who try to resist or escape ties to their
biological family, but find they can never escape their chosen, or
‘social’, families.
• Both use textual features (e.g. dialogue, flashbacks, voice-over) to
juxtapose solitude with beneficial family-like relationships.
• Both use minor characters (Robyn’s father; Ron) to emphasise the
importance of family and/or the sorrow of losing family.
Paragraph 4 – discuss different strategies the texts use to present similar
ideas.
• Tracks uses a positive outcome to demonstrate that family is vital –
Robyn learns to accept the help and companionship ‘family’ (such
as Rick and Eddie) offers, and to rely on her animal ‘family’, and the
result is her ultimate success.
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• Into the Wild uses tragedy to demonstrate that in rejecting biological
family and resisting connections to chosen family (Chris could have
stayed with Jan and Rainey, or accepted Ron’s adoption), survival
becomes impossible.
• Through textual omission, Tracks suggests it is possible to abandon
biological family; conversely, through Carine’s persistent voice-over,
Into the Wild argues that biological family relationships will always
accompany us.
Sample conclusion
While there are subtle differences in the way the two texts
construct and communicate ideas about family, both Tracks
and Into the Wild show that individuals can only thrive when
they accept and nurture strong relationships with some form
of family. The protagonists in each text believe in solitude and
independence, but the events of each narrative demonstrate
that these values are only beneficial when balanced with
healthy familial support: without it, the only conclusion is a
tragic death.
Sample answer
How do Tracks and Into the Wild portray those who abandon social conventions?
Both Tracks and Into the Wild feature protagonists whose deepest desire
is to abandon conventional society and survive alone in the wild. Although
outcomes differ for Robyn and Chris – one survives while the other does
not – they share similar motivations. The contrasting forms of the texts
also allow Robyn Davidson and Sean Penn to convey ideas in diverse ways,
though they address many of the same themes. In each case the text
uses relationships between characters, plot events and various narrative
techniques to communicate the idea that while avoiding convention can be
desirable, it can also bring challenges and damage relationships.
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