Improving my movie magazine

After I got feedback I went back and improved my magazine

I decided to delete the star with the text ‘WIN FREE CINEMA TICKETS PAGE 27’ but I didn’t think it was professional enough and decided to right win it on at the side of the main image.

Sell linesOn the feedback it explained that I had to include more sell lines and make the magazine cover less about my film and more different things on it. So I included information about a poster, winning tickets inside and a competition.

But I kept the main topic with the main image and anchorage text about my movie to show that it still is the most important thing in the magazine.

I made sell lines which included One Direction and Twilight because I hope that this would appeal to audiences like 15 to 16 into buy the magazine.

As the movie is only rated 12A they might not have thought that it would be scary enough and wouldn’t watch it but by buying the magazine to get the One Direction exclusive and twilight poster it would also make the read about the film Mystery because they would want to waste their money so they would read the whole of the magazine.

I changed the ‘See exclusive pictures from behind the scenes of the latest horror film’ to red from white because it made it stand out but mainly because on a magazine there is usually two to three colours. So I kept it the same as the anchorage text to make it show that the interview with Gemma Habgood and the exclusive pictures are about the same thing.

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