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This is the creative WT that was sent to the IBO. I made a print ad and a blog post to demonstrate the contrasting viewpoints in the Palestinian-Israeli narrative, discuss cultural identity in depth, resistance, and other themes.English L&L was an HL subject for me.

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    Momina Amjad

    Candidate Number: 002223-0028

    Session: May 2014

    English A1: Language and Literature

    Written Task 1

    Unit Language and Culture Text type(s) A print ad and a blog post

    Purpose To demonstrate the contrasting viewpoints in the Palestinian-Israeli narrative, discuss cultural identity in depth, resistance, and other themes

    Audience The general American public in the 18-34 demographic.

    Context A hummus ad claiming it to be Israeli food causes controversy, a Palestinian activist and blogger criticizes that ad campaign

    Word count Rationale Written Task

    298 990

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    Rationale:

    In this Language and Culture unit, we learned extensively about the importance of

    cultural context in understanding language, and consequently, how a readers

    interpretation of a text determines the meaning that text has. We mainly studied that

    via analyzing advertisements; advertisement campaigns use advertising techniques and

    persuasive language whilst being culturally sensitive to appeal to their audiences. I hope

    to demonstrate these skills in the first text Ive created; an American print advert for

    hummus which claims that it is Israeli food. It is implied that this ad created controversy

    among the Palestinian and Arab community in America.

    The second text is a popular blog post by a Palestinian activist criticizing the hummus

    advert. I discuss the larger themes of cultural identity and national heritage when this

    fictional blogger dismisses said advert completely on the basis of it being cultural

    appropriation and theft of the Palestinian identity. The design of the blog as a whole

    displays themes of resistance, anti-colonialism and struggle against apartheid, all of

    which constitute an important part of the Palestinian narrative. The format allows me to

    be expressive of the various facets of Palestinian resistance such as art, music and

    literature, as well as different cultural and sociopolitical viewpoints via a subsequent

    comments section; illustrating how peoples social or cultural background has an

    influence on what they have to say.

    By juxtaposing these two texts together, I aim to highlight the inevitability of bias and

    subjectivity in the media and literature of people in conflicts such as the Palestinian-

    Israeli one. This was my focus because it elaborates the impact of culture on language as

    well as the impact of language in the assembling of a political movement. I have

    attached a mini-glossary at the end for some of the italicized words in the text.

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    Whether you eat it as a dip, a sauce or an appetizer, Savras Hummus

    provides you with the fresh and fine Israeli delicacy all the way in America.

    A unique blend of the east and the west awaits you at your nearest

    grocery store!

    Savra Truly savory

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    From you steel and fire, from us our flesh. From you yet another tank, from us stones. So leave our country, our land, our sea, our wheat, our salt, our wounds

    Mahmoud Darwish

    Falasteeni

    Why Savras latest ad campaign offended so many

    Palestinians

    1 March 2013

    A recent hummus ad by Savra shows the Israeli delicacy in the midst of

    American crackers and talks about unique blends of the east and the

    west. Most of you reading this post are already thinking something along

    the lines of, Okay, whats so wrong with that that? Agreed that hummus

    is probably not an Israeli delicacy per se, but cant we just appreciate

    people crossing borders and learning to love the enemys food? Why are

    all the Arab students across college campuses in the States going crazy

    about this non-issue?

    The problem is not so much about them appreciating and accepting our

    food. The problem is that when you steal a peoples land, when you steal

    their sense of belonging, or try to wipe out their history, they hold an

    unmeasurable importance to their sense of cultural identity. Culture is an

    umbrella term for a lot of things, the shared attitudes of people, their

    behaviors well as their material traits, such as dress code and the cuisine.

    Ah! Cuisine. It is no secret that hummus, along with tabouleh, falafel and

    olive oil, forms a quintessential part of the Arabic cuisine. No mezze is

    complete without these small dishes in Lebanon, Jordan, Syria or

    Palestine. Yes, hummus is not unique to Palestine, but it has long been a

    staple food for Palestinians, often served warm with bread, for breakfast,

    lunch and dinner. So why all this anger for something that isnt even

    Layla Jabbari

    Palestinian American culture and

    politics enthusiast with a special

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    distinctively Palestinian? The thing is, hummus is only a symbol. It

    represents a lot more about the stolen Palestinian identity and its peoples

    frustrations.

    It is the lost olive culture and the Palestinian farmers who were no longer

    able to collect their olive harvest after the Nakba. We know from an

    Electronic Intifada article that some of the remaining olive farmers are

    regularly attacked by the Zionist settler population when they attempt to

    care for their trees or harvest them in BTselem and Al Khalil (Hebron).

    Falafels are now an Israeli National Dish. This kind of cultural

    appropriation is by no means limited to food and agriculture. It is evident

    in the linguistic imperialism of Hebrew over Arabic in all the academic

    institutions and workplaces in Israel. It is the suppression of Arab literary

    figures in Israel because they offer voices of dissent. It is calling the Keffiyeh

    a terrorist garb. And it affects Palestinians so much more than it seems.

    Apart from the aforementioned cultural concerns, the main reason why

    Savra caused such widespread controversy among the Palestinian and

    Arab-American community is because it was found out that its parent

    company, The Stoche Group, is one of the funders of the IDF. The so called

    Israeli Defense Force, IDF is a terrorist organization responsible for killing

    and torturing Palestinians in the West Bank and Gaza on a daily basis. All of

    this is well documented on Aljazeera, Ali Abunimahs blog and other news

    sites. Also as a consequence of having hummus mass produced by

    companies like Savra, the already minimal economic opportunities for

    people in the occupied Palestine plunge even lower as their food products

    dont even begin to surface in the international markets.

    So to sum it all up, by buying and eating Savras hummus (and other

    products), you are not only capitalizing upon a peoples stolen identity and

    minimizing the their economic opportunities, you are also funding their

    apartheid and torture. That to me sounds like a very valid reason for those

    people to be furious. So please, reject the gooey mush Savra calls hummus.

    Its nothing like the real stuff. Boycott Savra and all their products. And

    spread the word around. The BDS campaign needs you.

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    Moshe

    Im sorry, but this is a load of BS. There is no Palestinian identity! Youre all a bunch of Arabs with

    similar customs and cuisine. I have to admit that hummus is tasty, and its kosher, so we all love it.

    Savra made a mistake, theres no need to get melodramatic about it lady.

    6 Likes | Reply

    Maria

    So this is an innocent mistake? How do you explain Stoche Group funding your terrorism?

    Zionists and their logic is unbelievable. Do you think were stupid?

    4 Likes | Reply

    Moche

    Stoche Group is not even Savra, its ONE of their parent companies, and

    who they donate their charity to doesnt matter. Stop getting so

    emotional at every damn thing. 1 Like | Reply

    Maria

    This comment violated Falateenis community

    standards

    David

    Thank for this post, Layla. Its unfortunate that our consumerism funds your suffering, and Im sure

    its not just Savra. The other day I read about Starbucks Chairman Howard Schultz being a staunch

    Zionist and supporting Israels apartheid. Not enough people currently know about the BDS

    movement.

    10 Likes | Reply

    Word Count: 990

  • Glossary:

    BDS campaign: Boycott, Divestment and Sanctions (BDS) is a global campaign which uses economic and

    political pressure on Israel to comply with the stated goals of the movement: The end of Israeli occupation and

    colonization of Arab land, full equality for Arab-Palestinian citizens of Israel, and respect for the right of return

    of Palestinian refugees1.

    Kefiyyeh: Various types of Middle Eastern headdresses for men- the one referred to in the blog is the

    Palestinian variant which is typically black and white and has become a symbol of Palestinian resistance.

    Mezze: A selection of small dishes served at the beginning of all large scale meals in Levantine cuisines2.

    Comparable to appetizers.

    Nakba: The 1948 Palestinian exodus, known in Arabic as the Nakba (literally "disaster", "catastrophe", or

    "cataclysm") occurred when approximately 711,000 to 726,000 Palestinian Arabs fled or were expelled from

    their homes3.

    Tabouleh: A Levantine Arab salad traditionally made of bulgur, tomatoes, cucumbers, finely chopped parsley,

    mint, onion, and garlic and seasoned with olive oil, lemon juice, and salt4.

    Images Used:

    [1] Group Recipes. Goat Cheese Hummus. Digital image 2013. Web. 2 Mar 2013

    http://www.grouprecipes.com/85433/goat-cheese-hummus.html#

    [2] Paq, Anne. Graffiti, Separation Wall; Bethlehem, 16.01.2011. Digital image 2012. Web. 2 Mar 2013

    http://chroniquespalestine.blogspot.com/2012/01/graffiti-separation-wall-bethlehem.html

    [3] Ridz Design. Shadia Mansour. Digital image 2010. Web. 2 Mar 2013

    http://www.last.fm/music/Shadia+Mansour/+images/44021385

    Articles Cited:

    [1] Olive harvest once again marred by settler violence. 7 December. 2005. Web. 2 Mar 2013.

    http://electronicintifada.net/content/olive-harvest-once-again-marred-settler-violence/2274

    1 Svirsky, Marcelo. Arab-Jewish activism in Israel-Palestine. Farnham, Surrey: Ashgate, 2012. Print. 2 Davidson, Alan. The Oxford companion to food. Oxford: Oxford University Press, 1999. Print. 3 Mcdowall, David. The Palestinians. London: Minority Rights Group, 1987. Print. 4 Zubaida, Sami. Culinary cultures of the Middle East. London [u.a.]: Tauris, 1994. Print