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Thursdays Lesson: Click on the pink + in thebottom right hand corner and either uploador copy and paste your Monster procedureinto the text box. Please write your initialswhere it says 'title' and your text where itsays 'write something'.(Please remember to include your initials in your comment box -so I can see your posts. E.g. .......  (SC, 5SC)

How to Sneak your Monster into School byDH 5SCHow to Sneak your Monster into School

Aim: To sneak your monster into school

Materials:- wig and sunglasses- magazine- food to eat

Steps:1 wake up before any of your family members/ 1 to 2 hoursbefore.2 carefully wake up your monster so no one in your family wakesup3 tell your monster to carefully go up the stairs.4 pack your monster some food and yourself some food.5 get a magazine or something to distract the monster on thebus. When your family wakes up tell your monster to go outsideand you will be back soon.6 give your monster something so it does not run off and keep itdistracted.7 put your school clothes on and wait for your parents to tell youthe bus is coming.8 when your parents tell you to go to the bus say ok and gooutside to the monster, it should still be there.9 give your monster a bit of a disguise by putting clothes on themonster or give it a wig or sunglasses.10 once you get on the bus distract the bus driver so yourmonster can get on. 11 when on the bus make sure your monster does not take of hisdisguise.12 when you arrive at school do the same thing as when you gotonto the bus.13 hide your monster somewhere where no onegoes to.14 be the last one to go inside the school building. 15 get inside the classroom and put your monster inside and goback out to wait.16 when you get inside with everyone else do not act weirdaround anyone.17 you have successfully snuck your monster into class!

How to sneak your Monster to schoolMaterials:Skipping rope Helmet Water Toothbrush Wig 

Comb Uniform Sunglasses Comics Pecan Pie with Spider Webs Steps:1. Wake up 1 hour earlier then your parents.2. Sneak into your monsters room.3. Slightly wake up your monster by slapping the �oor with theskipping rope or else your monster will destroy anything.4. Brush your monsters teeth and don’t let it play with bubbles.She will make a huge mess.5. Put the chosen wig onto your monsters scalp.6. Make sure to brush it using the comb.7. Put on the uniform.8. Put on sunglasses.9. Let your monster stand outside of the front door. Make sureto give her the jar of strawberry jam so your Monster won’t eateverthing.10. Say goodbye to your parents which will make them veryhappy and won’t make them suspect a thing at all. Since theydon’t need to know that you are bringing a monster to school.11. When you are on the bus, make sure you give your Monsterthe comics. Or else she might make some mischief.12. When you are at school make sure you pretend to not knowwho your monster is. Since she also has her monster friends.13. When you are walking into the classroom make a huge lot ofnoise to attract most of the students. So your monster couldsneak in.

Congratulations. You have successfully sneaked your Monster toschool.

How to sneak your monster into schoolName:EC1 Aim: To sneak my monster intoschool Materials: Muffins Bananatoothbrush toothpaste milk Fancy straw adisguise Method: 1.Wake up 1 hour beforeyour parents. 2. Wake up your monster 3.Tickle your monster 4. Feed your monsterbananas and muffins 5. Give your monstermilk with a fancy straw 6. Brush yourmonsters teeth 7. Tell your monster to go tothe bathroom 8. Make the monster wear adisguise 9. Distract your parents so theydon’t notice the monster 10. When you enterthe school bus distract the bus diver so hedoesn’t notice the monster. 11. Sit in thevery back of the bus 12. When you exit thebus, give the bus driver a high 5 so hedoesn’t notice your monster sneak out 13.Make your monster enter the classroomthrough the open window 14. Smile! Youhave just snuck the monster to school!

Well done EC1 I really liked your procedure but you could makeyour steps in a row. IG ― ANONYMOUS

Title: How to sneak your monster intoschoolAA 5SCAim: To sneak your monster into school without anyone seeing.

Materials:Alarm clockFeatherNanasMuf�ns Milk fancy strawTooth brushSunglasses Pink wigLeftover pizzaSticky peanut butter Umbrella Red clown noseFlowerSteps:S1: Wake up one hour before your parents.S2: Wake your monster.S3: Tickle your monster.S4: Feed your monster bananas and a muf�n.S5: Give it milk and a fancy straw.S6: Brush their tooth/teeth.S7: Tell them to go to the bathroom.S8: Put the sun glasses and a pink wig on it.S9: Put extra the leftover pizza into your lunchbox.S10: Grab the morning paper from the front step.S11: Give them some sticky peanut butter and tell him to wait onthe front step.S12: Kiss your parents goodbye and tell them you love them.S13: Take the umbrella from your closet, put your red clown nosein your backpack and pick a �ower for your teacher.S14: Wait at the bus top with your monster.S15: Give the bus driver a high-�ve when you walk in.S16: While your sitting on the bus make the monster read thenews paper.S17: Give the bus driver another high-�ve when you walk out.S18: While you wait for your entry bell stand 10 feet away fromthe monster and wave your arms around.S19: When the bell rings �nd your line on the blacktop and standin front of it with the umbrella.S20: When you walk past your teacher tell her she looks prettyand give her the �owers you got.S21: If your monster passes gas, put your red clown nose on andif it does it again apologise to your teacher.Congratulations you just sneaked your monster into school

i love it you added a aim and a conclusion. i love the monster GIF.you could add a little more to your steps. but i loved reading it by

RC ― ANONYMOUS

MCHOW TO SNEAK YOUR MONSTER INTO SCHOOL

AIM: to sneak your monster into school without getting caught 

Materials: newspaper, �owers, clown nose and umbrella pizzaalarm clock feather bananas muf�ns milk fancy straw toothbrush sun glasses pink wig sticky peanut butter.

STEPS:-

Step 1: Wake up one hour before your parents

Step 2: Wake up your Monster 

Step 3: Tickle your Monster

Step 4: Feed your Monster bananas and muf�ns

Step 5: give your monster milk with a fancy straw

Step 6: brush your monsters tooth

Step 7: tell your monster to go to the bathroom

Step 8: put pink sun glasses and a pink wig on your monster

Step 9: Put Extra left over pizza in your Lunch Bag

Step 10: Grab newspaper from the front step

Step 11: give your monster a jar of sticky peanut butter and tellhim to wait on the front step.

Step 12: Kiss your parents goodbye and tell them you love them

Step 13: take umbrella from the closet and put bright red clownnose in your backpack and pick �owers from the garden

Step 14: wait at bus stop with your monster

Step 15: when bus arrives give the bus driver a high �ve

Step 16: when sitting on the bus give your monster thenewspaper to read

Step 17: when bus arrives to school thank the bus driver and givehim another high �ve

Step 18: while waiting for the entry bell to ring stand 10 feetaway from your monster

Step 19: when the bell rings go in your line and use the umbrellaso your teacher does not see him

Step 20: when you walk past your teacher tell her she lookspretty and give her your �owers so she does not see yourmonster go inside the classroom

Step 21: if your monster passes gas put on your red clown nose

You have just sneaked your monster into school.

Good job. SS ― ANONYMOUS

For your materials you should have done the materials one on eachline .For example: news paper �owers instead of:

newspaper,�owers EC1 ― ANONYMOUS

Please include your initials at the top of your post. ― MS CASEY

How to Sneak Your Monster into School, ByIG

Aim:

To sneak your monster into the school.

Materials:MonsterSchool workFoodToothpasteToothbrushNewspaperDisguiseUmbrellaBallFlower

Steps:Step 1, Wake up at least one hour before your parents.

Step 2, Go straight down to the basement to wake up yourmonster.

Step 3, Then go straight to the room, and get all of the thingsyou need for school.

Step 4, Run to the kitchen and get all the food that you need forschool. 

Step 5, Brush your monster’s teeth.

Step 6, Go and get the daily newspaper.

Step 7, Tell your monster to wait outside.

Step 8, Tell your parents you love them.

Step 9, Go get a disguise and an umbrella and a ball.

Step 10, Tell your monster to wear the disguise.

Step 11, Go get a �ower from your neighbour’s house.

Step 12, Have a small chat with the monster at the bus stop.

Step 13, Wave at the bus driver and get inside the bus.

Step 14, Give your monster the newspaper to read.

Step 15, Wave at the bus driver when you get off the bus.

Step 16, Line up outside the classroom and cover your monsterwith the umbrella.

Step 17, When you enter the classroom tell your teacher that youlove her and give her the �ower.

Step 18, Tell your monster if it needs to go to the toilet, thenbounce the ball

Step 19, If your teacher asks you why you keep bouncing the ball,tell your teacher you’re practising basketball.

Step 20, Say hip hip hooray because you sneak your monsterinto the school. 

 By (IG 5SC)

You should have added materials EC1 ― ANONYMOUS

Great job i think you did well but some thing you could work on issome more detail I really liked the bit at the end were you said hip

hip hooray PN ― ANONYMOUS

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Great Job. SS ― ANONYMOUS

i like how you showed your i love reading it. you added it pic toyou writing and it helped if the reader was unsure of the thing.

you could try next time to write your monster text on something ofyour because you used the video, like add things that make your

writing yours. but, i enjoyed it. by RC ― ANONYMOUS

I really liked the effort you put into using pictures and photos tosupport your presentation. The pictures were relevant and greatcues. I think it would be even better without the background you

used for each slide. That was distracting. Maybe next time youcould get a grown up or older sibling to read over your work for

grammar errors. Overall great idea and I really enjoyed it. AJ:)― ANONYMOUS

How to sneak your monster to school byAZ1Aim : To sneak your monster into school without anyonenoticingMaterials : Disguises = a wig and some clothes for your monsterto wear so he won't be seen .

Steps :1.Wake up early ; before your parents wake up 2.Your monster and you need to get ready for the day.e.g:getdressed , brush your teeth and wash your face.3.Make yourself , your monster and your parents breakfast

4.If you and your monster have �nished eating breakfast don'tforget to wipe your mouth5.Before leaving the house with your monster, write a note toyour parents letting you know that you have an early meeting oris your friends birthday and wanted to give him or she a presentearly to surprise him or she, and also write that you have madebreakfast  for them and let them know that you have alreadyeaten breakfast and that you are safe, just in case they getworried of where you might have been.3.Walk to the bus stop and wait there till the bus gets there.4.Once the bus have arrived get onto the bus with your monsterand say hello or good morning like you usually do .5.If the bus driver asks you who is that behind you, just tell himthat he is just a friend or a new student at school.6.Once you and your monster have arrived at the school,remember to act normal.5.Go to your school of�ce when there is nobody around, and�nd the principal's folder and write your monster's name in thefolder as a new student.6.Once you have �nished the day off; you can go home.7.Remember to act normal because your parents might notice.8.I hope you enjoyed sneaking your monster into schoolby AZ1

 

You should have added more materials for example : Mabe atoothbrush for brushing your teeth EC1 ― ANONYMOUS

You should include all the steps. MH 5SC ― ANONYMOUS

HOW TO SNEAK YOUR MONSTER INTOSCHOOLBy RC {5SC}Aim: To successfully sneak your monster into school

Steps: 

1)     Wake up before your parents {so there are no question}.

2)     Wake up your monster {quietly so your parents don’t wakeup}. 

3)     Get changed into your clothes and dress your monster {ifyou want}. 

4)     Eat breakfast {pancakes and a milk shake for you andmonster food and monster shake for your monster}.

5)     Grab a big bag so your monster can �t, with some space.

6)     Put the bag at the front door make sure that your mum ordad don’t see it. 

7)     When hugs and kiss are done and mum and dad have goneto get ready, get your bag and walk out the door.

8)     Wait at for the school bus {try not to get attention}.

9)     Sneak onto the bus and sit at the very back {don’t talk toanyone}.

10)When you get to school wait to be last off the bus.  

11)Stay at the back of the group of students and then hide behinduntil you get to you class room.

12)Your teacher should not be there because she is in a meetingbut will be back to teach you.   

13)Place your monster in a quiet corner {where no one goes} andlet it have fun at school {be fast so your teacher does not seeyou}. 

14)And there you have it you have done it. Make should yourteacher goes not see your monster!   THANKS FOR READING 

I like your procedure but can you add more information ― ANONYMOUS

I’ll like all of your text but I don’t you needed a lot of info you putin LC 1 ― ANONYMOUS

Great job RC you have included some amazing description in yourprocedural text I also think you used brackets really well. You

could improve by adding a conclusion at the end of yourprocedural text but overall you did a great job. EH ― ANONYMOUS

I think you did a great job and i love the picture but something youcould work on is that it was a little unclear PN ― ANONYMOUS

HOW TO SNEAK YOUR MONSTER TOSCHOOL Step 1: wake up 2 hours beforeyour parents Step 2: have breakfast Step 3:brush your teeth Step 4: wake up yourmonster by jumping on it Step 5: take yourmonster to eat fresh worms and dirt fromthe garden Step 6: brush your monstersteeth for any extra dirt and worms. Step 7:get changed into your school clothes Step 8:put a wig a realistic face mask and some ofyour dad’s clothes on your monster Step 9:give yourself food and put some worms inyour monsters bag Step 10: when yourparents wake up late say you’re going toschool and say goodbye they will be tootired to notice the monsters walking out thedoor Step 11: high-five the bus driver sohe’s distracted from seeing the monsterStep 12: when you get to school hide in thebathrooms so no one sees the monster, ifsomeone comes in hide him in the stall Step13: when the bell goes grab your monsterand put him through the open window,unless it’s rainy then you’ll have to gothrough the door quickly Step 14: if yourmonster starts to walk around just say “lookis that bird purple” and tell him to sit downStep 15: run as fast as you can back to thefront of the school Step 16: say to the busdriver thank you for driving me to school hewill probably smile and say thank you back,while he does that shove your monster tothe back of the bus and sit down Step 17:walk back to your house and enter thoughsome sort of back door with a key Step 18:let your monster finally rest

try and add materials and Aim ― ANONYMOUS

Please include your initials at the top. ― MS CASEY

How to sneak your monster to school MH5SC1. Wake up 1 hour before your parents. 2. Wake up your monster.3. Tickle your monster. 4. Feed him bananas and muf�ns. 5. Giveyour monster a cup of milk with a fancy straw (No BUBBLES) 6.Brush the monster's teeth. 7. Tell your monster to go to thebathroom. 8. Put some sunglasses and a pink wig. 9. Put leftover

pineapple and worm guts pizza in your lunch box. 10. Grab thenewspaper at the front step. 11. Give your monster a jar of stickypeanut and tell him to go to the front step. 12. Kiss goodbye andsay I love you to your parents. 13. Take the umbrella from thecloset, get a bright red clown nose and put it in your backpack,then pick a �ower at Mrs. Oldermeans Garden. 14. Wait at thebus stop. 15. Give the driver a high �ve to distract the driver sohe would not notice the monster.16. When sitting on the bus give the newspaper to your monsterto read. 17. When the bus arrives to school, thank and give thedriver another high �ve. 18. While waiting for the bell ring, stand10 feet away from your monster. 19. When bell rings, �nd the lineand �nd a spot and stand in front of your monster with theumbrella opened so your teacher wouldn't notice your monster.20. When you pass your teacher (Miss Casey) give her the�owers. 21. Whenever your monster farts, pit on your clownnose and apologise to your teacher. 22 (Final Step) Smile, youjust sneaked your monster to school!

MH You did well in sequencing but I think you can improve yourorganisation by giving them gaps ― ANONYMOUS

How to sneak a monster to school

Next time you cold have an aim, but I liked it. IG ― ANONYMOUS

i like how you have your materials but you don't have your aim― ANONYMOUS

how to sneak your monster(or someoneelse's monster) into school. by JH1. wake up 1 hr before your parents.2. wake up your monster3. make your monster and your self breakfast 4. go to the bathroom and brush your teeth and your monsters5. have s drink of water( don't forget to give your monster sometoo).6. prepare lunch for both of you.pack your bags( don't forget your home work)7. quickly go to the toilet.8. leave the house.9. walk to school.

10. pick some �owers for Miss Casey(to give to her she doesn'tknow you have a monster)11. give Miss Casey the �owers.12. go home after a long day at school.

Next time you probably add your materials and your aim. IG― ANONYMOUS

i loved reading it, i like how you added your steps clearly, but youcould add a aim and a conclusion and you can add pic. but i love it

by RC ― ANONYMOUS

How 2 sneak your monster to SCHOOL🧠LC1 5SCAim:To bring your monster to school

Materials:AlarmMonsterSomething to tickle withBananasMuf�nsCup of milk with fancy strawToothbrushBathroomSunglasses Pink wigPizzaLunchboxMorning paperSticky peanut butterParentsUmbrellaBright red clown noseBackpackFlowersBusLine spot Excuses A big smile

Method:1.Wake up 1 hour before your parents.2.Wake up your monster.3.Tickle your monster.4.Feed him bananas and muf�ns.5.Give your monster a cup of milk with a fancy straws(NoBUBBLES)6.Brush the monsters teeth.7.Tell your to go to the bathroom.8.Put some sunglasses and pink wig.9.Put leftover pineapple and worm guts pizza.10.Grab the newspaper at the front step.11.Give your monster a jar of sticky peanut and tell him to go tothe front step.12.Kiss goodbye and say I love you to your parents.13.Take the umbrella from the closet, get a bright red clown noseand put In your backpack,Then pick a �ower at Mrs.OldermeansGarden

14.Wait at the bus stop.15.Give the driver a high �ve.16.When sitting on the bus give the newspaper to your monsterto read.17.When the bus arrives to school thank and give the driver ahigh �ve.18.While waiting for the bell stand 10 feet away from yourmonster and frantically wave your arms.19.When bell rings,�nd the line and �nd a spot and stand in frontof your monster with the umbrella opened.20.When you pass the best year 5 teacher(Ms Casey) give her the�owers..21.When ever your monster farts pit on your clown nose andapologise  

you can edit ― ANONYMOUS

I like how you included everything that you could possiblyneed.You could improve by adding brackets to explain each step

with more detail.EH ― ANONYMOUS

Many spelling mistakes where made but very good structure― ANONYMOUS

I like how you went back and reread your text and then addedsome editing YS ― ANONYMOUS

I forgot end to say smile 😃 ― ANONYMOUS

How to sneak your monster to school( onlyfor small monsters)From ALAim: to sneak your monster to school. Materials: monster whistle, paper pencil, crickets and a bag.

Steps1 wake 2 hours earlier than your parents. 2 prepare breakfast foryour parents ,monster and yourself(but put your breakfast inyour bag for later use). 3 wake your monster with a monsterwhistle.4 write a note to your parents that you had to go to ameeting(not 😆)and say that you have prepared breakfast forthem(do this when your monster’s having breakfast 🥞). 5 brushyour teeth with your monster (you may need to help he /shesince he/she is so small). 6 prepare your lunch(remember toinclude cricket 🦗 in the monsters sandwich 🥪)7 put your lunchand monster in your school bag. 8 walk to school(drive inpossible)9 If your monster keeps on moving in your bag 💼 thenopen the lunch of its and concentrate on your work. 10 when theteacher hears the munching noise take out your breakfast andsay you didn’t have it(which is true).11 go to your room afterschool then relax before doing homework 📚.AL hope youenjoyed  my procedure 😆 

Hi AL. You have done a fantastic job organising your procedure. Itwas good but next time, to make it better, you should put step by

step into different columns. I mean you should put the numbers inorder. Have a look what other people did. You've done really well!

Keep up the great enthusiasm! MH 5SC ― ANONYMOUS

It was really good but maybe when you get to a new step you couldpress the return or enter button to make it more clear AA 5SC

― ANONYMOUS

AL Your work was good but it owuld be eve nbetter if you spaced itout a little because i can't rALLY READ THAT WELL

― ANONYMOUS

I like how you did the emojis to show what you were ment to givethe monster ys ― ANONYMOUS

How to sneak you monster into schoo1. wake your monster 1 hour befor your parents.2. wake your monster.3. Tickle your monster.4. make breakfast for you monster and youself.5.give you monster a cup of milk with a fancy straw (no bubbles)6.brush you monster tooth.7. tell your monster gu to the bathroom (no drink toilet water)8. put sunglasses and a pink wig on your monster.9. put some pizza on your lunch box.10. grab morning paper11.kiss your parents say good bye to them.12. take a umbrella13. pick a �ower for your teacher.14.wait for the school bus with your monster.15.when your sit on the bus give your monster newspaper toread.16.when the school �nish give the �ower for your teacher andtell she is pretty（NW 5SC)

Absolutely amazing, you wrote very speci�cally but how do you gethome ― ANONYMOUS

I think you could of checked your work a bit better for anygrammar mistakes because i saw a tiny bit of them while i was

trying to read it. RH ― ANONYMOUS

Hi NW, please include your aim and a list of materials you wouldneed to sneak your monster into school ― MS CASEY

How to sneak your monster to school SS5SCMaterials:Monster,Jacket,whoopee cushion,�owers

Aim:To sneak your monster into school

Step 1: Wake up when your parents are showering.Step 2: Wake up your monster by playing really annoying sounds.Step 3: Play a game with himStep 4: Feed your Monster your whole fridge.Step 5:Give it a hole bottle of coke and force it to chug it all so ithas energy.Step 6:Make you monster clean himself.Step 7:Tell him practice his robot acting.Step 8: Pull out your leftover sandwich with crickets and put it in

container if he gets hungry.Step 9: Get your whoopee cushion, �owers and your jacket.Step 10: Right before your parents come out of the shower runto the bus with your monster.Step 11: Sit at the corner and tell your monster to not move.Step 12: Get of the bus and quickly run to the toilets.Step 13:STAY there until you hear the bell.Step 14: you know that your teacher has hay fever so give her the�owers and when sneezes and closes her eyes go sneak yourmonster inStep 15: Give him a jacket so he does not be seen that easily.Step 16:If your monster farts use your whoopee cushion andlaugh so you get the blame and not himStep 16 : Say he's a high tech toy for show and tellStep 17 : At lunch time eat your weird sandwich and normal oneand play with each otherSS 5SC

Maybe next time be more descriptive ― ANONYMOUS

I really enjoyed how you added your own personal changes to theprocedure. I particularly liked steps 5 and 16 (the whoopee

cushion). Next time you should check and read over your workbefore you post it (there are 2 step 16s). Overall great effort. AJ :)

― ANONYMOUS

How to sneak your monster into schoolAim:To sneak a monster in classMaterials:Monster,a lot of food and an extra toothbrush1. Wake your monster 1 hour before your parents2.wake up your monster 3.Tickle your monster 4.Feed your monster bananas and muf�ns 5.Give your monster milk with a fancy straw 6. Brush your monsters teeth 7. Tell your monster to go to the bathroom8.put sunglasses and a wig on your monster 9.Put extra food in your bag10. Distract your parents so they wont see the monster11. Get on the bus and distract the bus driver so they wont seethe monster 12. Do the same as 11 but get off the bus this time13.Enter the class room earlier so that the teacher wont see themonster 14. Smile ! You have just snuck a  monster to school(BM,5SC)

Hi BM, please include a list of the materials you will need.― MS CASEY

How to Sneak your Monster into Schoolby AJ 5SCAim:      To successfully sneak your monster into school! Equipment Needed·      Backpack (large enough to �t all the food – probably thebiggest you have)

·      Small bunch of pretty �owers·      1 newspaper·      Large golf umbrella (or the biggest one you can)·      Extra-large jar of super crunchy peanut butter·      Big breakfast for your monster (to last him until morning tea)·      Enough morning tea for you and the monster (for example -4 bananas, 10 wholemeal apple and cinnamon muf�ns)·      Lunch for your monster and you.  (for example – leftoverpizza and fried rice, 6 double-stack ham and cheese sandwiches)·      A well-rested brain and body·      Disguise (wig, large sunglasses and a cap or hat big enoughfor your monster)·      Clown nose (·      Money to buy extra lunch for your monster and a littlesomething for yourself.  Remember monsters eat a lot and theywon’t want to eat alone. (Bring about $20 from your piggybank) Instructions1.   Wake up 1h before your parents.  That way they do not see what you are doing.  2.  Wake up your monster. Tickling his feet with a feather or feather duster will help wakeyour monster up faster.  3.  Feed monster a breakfast of bananas (because they areyummy and �lling) and muf�ns (to help him poop).   4.  Give him an extra-large glass of milk, making sure he doesn’tblow bubbles and make a mess.  5.   Brush the monsters’ teeth and yours as well.   Make sure you use separate toothbrushes and lots oftoothpaste.  6.   Get your monster to go toilet.   Remind him not to drink from the toilet bowl and to �ush thetoilet.  7.    Disguise your monster.   Get your monster to put on a wig, sunglasses and the hat orcap.   8.    Pack lunch for monster and you.   Take all the leftover pizza, fried rice and make at least 6 hamand cheese sandwiches.  9.   Quietly grab the newspaper from the front porch and put itin the backpack along with all the food.   10.   Get your monster to sit at the front door with the jar ofsuper crunchy peanut butter.   11.   Casually and quickly say goodbye to your parents, grabbing alarge gol�ng umbrella on your way out.     

12.   Walk to the bust stop with your monster and waitinconspicuously for the bus.  13.    When the bus arrives, get on the bus �rst with yourmonster behind you. Say a big hello and how are you to the driver.  Also, high �ve the driver to distract him, so the monster can sitdown without being spotted by the driver.  14.   Give your monster the newspaper you picked up earlier. This will give him something to read and hold up, to avoidattention.  15.     Keep a close eye on him, so that he doesn’t do anything todraw attention.  (for example – tickling the kids in the chair infront of you)  16.    When you get off the bus at school, thank Mr Turnwheel(the bus driver) and high �ve him again. This will distract him whilst your monster gets safely off the busunseen.   17.    While waiting in the playground for the bell to ring, stand 10feet away from your monster and distract everyone from seeingyour monster.   Do this by waving your arms around madly, do �ips if you canand tell really funny jokes at the top of your voice.  

18.    When the bell rings, line up with your monster and open anumbrella to hide him from the teacher.   If it is raining, it’s easy, otherwise say that you don’t want birdsto poop on your head.  

19.     When you go into class, make sure you have �owers to giveMrs. Chalkstone as a distraction and tell her she looks so pretty.  She will be so surprised that she won’t notice your monstersneak by.  20.   In case your monster passes a monster gas, put on yourbright red clown nose and apologise to Mrs Chalkstone.  If thishappens more than once, just say that you are going to be aclown at a birthday party and practicing for it.  Finally:  SMILE!  You just successfully sneaked you monsterinto school. 

Maybe you should make it shorter because people could get boredwhile reading something too long. Good job! I know you are

Alistair. MH 5SC ― ANONYMOUS

AJ, I liked how you made your procedure really long with goodgrammar, it kept me reading for a while but even so i still loved

every bit of it. RH ― ANONYMOUS

How 2 sneak your monster to SCHOOL🧠LC1 5SC

1.Wake up 1 hour before your parents.2.Wake up your monster.3.Tickle your monster.4.Feed him bananas and muf�ns.5.Give your monster a cup of milk with a fancy straws(NoBUBBLES)6.Brush the monsters teeth.7.Tell your to go to the bathroom.8.Put some sunglasses and pink wig.9.Put leftover pineapple and worm guts pizza.10.Grab the newspaper at the front step.11.Give your monster a jar of sticky peanut and tell him to go tothe front step.12.Kiss goodbye and say I love you to your parents.13.Take the umbrella from the closet, get a bright red clown noseand put In your backpack,Then pick a �ower at Mrs.OldermeansGarden14.Wait at the bus stop.15.Give the driver a high �ve.16.When sitting on the bus give the newspaper to your monsterto read.17.When the bus arrives to school thank and give the driver ahigh �ve.18.While waiting for the bell stand 10 feet away from yourmonster and frantically wave your arms.19.When bell rings,�nd the line and �nd a spot and stand in frontof your monster with the umbrella opened.20.When you pass  

i like that you had clear steps ― ANONYMOUS

Remember to add a aim and materials you will need― ANONYMOUS

I think it's all in order but maybe try and improve your timemanagement on keyboard SS 5SC ― ANONYMOUS

How to sneak your monster into school1.      Wake up 1 hour before your parents.2.      Wake up your monster 3.      Tickle your monster4.      Feed your monster bananas and muf�ns5.      Give your monster milk with a fancy straw6.      Brush your monsters teeth7.      Tell your monster to go to the bathroom8.      Make the monster wear a disguise9.      Distract your parents so they don’t notice the monster10.   When you enter the school bus distract the bus diver so hedoesn’t notice the monster.  11.   Sit in the very back of the bus

12.   When you exit the bus, give the bus driver a high 5 so hedoesn’t notice  your monster sneak out13.   Make your monster enter the classroom through the openwindow14.   Smile! You have just snuck the monster to school!EC1

Maybe next time be more descriptive. MH 5SC ― ANONYMOUS

I liked that the steps were short and concise with good grammarand with the steps in perfect order RH ― ANONYMOUS

I liked that it was clear and easy to read. Next time try to addmore detail and maybe some of your own ideas as well. Great job.

AJ:) ― ANONYMOUS

How 2 Sneak Your Monster To School YS.Aim: To Successfully sneak your monster into class. Steps:Step 1 :Wake up 1 hour before your parentsStep 2: Wake your monster up (if your struggling tickle him)Step 3: Feed Him bananas and muf�ns.Step 4: Give him a glass of milk with a squiggly straw(make surehe doesn't blow bubbles)Step 5: Brush your monsters teethStep 6: Tell your monster to go to the bathroomStep 7 Put sunglasses and a pink wig on your monsterStep 8 Put leftover pineapple and worm guts pizzaStep 9 Distract your parents to not see your monster.Step 10: Kiss your parents goodbyeStep 11: take an umbrella and a  clown noseStep12: Wait until the buss comes and give the driver a high �ve.Step 13:While waiting for the bell stand a good 1.5 metres awayfrom everyone.(social distancing rules) and �nd a spot and standinfront of your monster with the umbrella opened.

i like how you have an aim but you don't have materials― ANONYMOUS

Hi YS, please include the materials you would need. ― MS CASEY

HOW TO SNEAK YOUR MONSTER TO SCHOOL Step 1: wake up 2 hours before your parents Step 2: have breakfast Step 3: brush your teeth Step 4: wake up your monster by jumping on it Step 5: take your monster to eat fresh worms and dirt from thegarden Step 6: brush your monsters teeth for any extra dirt and worms.Step 7:  get changed into your school clothes Step 8: put a wig a realistic face mask and some of your dad’sclothes on your monster Step 9: give yourself food and put some worms in your monstersbag Step 10: when your parents wake up late say you’re going toschool and say goodbye they will be too tired to notice the

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monsters walking out the door Step 11: high-�ve the bus driver so he’s distracted from seeingthe monster Step 12: when you get to school hide in the bathrooms so no onesees the monster, if someone comes in hide him in the stall Step 13: when the bell goes grab your monster and put himthrough the open window, unless it’s rainy then you’ll have to gothrough the door quickly Step 14: if your monster starts to walk around just say “look isn’tthat a storm” and tell him to sit down Step 15: run as fast as you can back to the front of the school Step 16: say to the bus driver thank you for driving me to schoolhe will probably smile and say thank you back, while he does thatshove your monster to the back of the bus and sit down Step 17: walk back to your house and enter though some sort of

back door with a key Step 18: let your monster �nally rest

I think that it is a good essay but maybe write about how you gethome ― ANONYMOUS

i liked your work but you could of added your initials aim andmaterials ― ANONYMOUS

I like all of your work but you could add more description thenhave breakfast ― ANONYMOUS

I think it is good and organised but I think you can improve it bydoing the main objective sneaking him into school SS 5SC

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