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ALEXANDRA FRANZEN Promotional Wordsmith & Personal Scribe 855-RING-ALX alexandrafranzen.com @alex_franzen [email protected] How to write a heart-stopping TESTIMONIAL 1 :: Ask for a framework If your requester hasn’t prompted you with specific questions (cough, cough) to guide your praise, ask them what kind of testimonial they want. : “Are you looking for a quick soundbite, or a nice, meaty paragraph?” : “Should I emphasize your photography skills, or your coaching prowess — or both?” : “Is there a particular module you’d like me to highlight?” : “Should I talk about how we first met — or just jump straight to the goods?” 2 :: Go for specifics Heart-stopping testimonials (like heart-melting compliments) are highly specific especially when it comes to metrics of success & measurable results. Snooze-button review: “Megan’s book inspired me to make some very positive changes in my life. I feel great now!” Sublimely-specific review: “Megan’s book inspired me to make some immediate changes to my diet & self-care regime. I’m starting every day with her signature kale & melon-ball smoothie. I’ve started experimenting with cacao & quinoa. I’m back in the yoga studio, three times a week. My girlfriend commented that my skin is looking bright & luminous, and that I have a new swagger in my stride. But when you feel this good, it’s hard not to strut!”

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Page 1: heart-stopping testimonial-page 1 - Alexandra Franzen...How to write a heart-stopping TESTIMONIAL 1 :: Ask for a framework If your requester hasn’t prompted you with specific questions

ALEXANDRAFRANZEN

Promotional Wordsmith & Personal Scribe

855-RING-ALX alexandrafranzen.com @[email protected]

How to write a heart-stopping TESTIMONIAL

1 :: Ask for a framework

If your requester hasn’t prompted you with specific questions (cough, cough) to guide your praise, ask them what kind of testimonial they want.

: “Are you looking for a quick soundbite, or a nice, meaty paragraph?”: “Should I emphasize your photography skills, or your coaching prowess — or both?”: “Is there a particular module you’d like me to highlight?”: “Should I talk about how we first met — or just jump straight to the goods?”

2 :: Go for specifics

Heart-stopping testimonials (like heart-melting compliments) are highly specific — especially when it comes to metrics of success & measurable results.

Snooze-button review:

“Megan’s book inspired me to make some very positive changes in my life. I feel great now!”

Sublimely-specific review:

“Megan’s book inspired me to make some immediate changes to my diet & self-care regime. I’m starting every day with her signature kale & melon-ball smoothie. I’ve started experimenting with cacao & quinoa. I’m back in the yoga studio, three times a week. My girlfriend commented that my skin is looking bright & luminous, and that I have a new swagger in my stride. But when you feel this good, it’s hard not to strut!”

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ALEXANDRAFRANZEN

Promotional Wordsmith & Personal Scribe

855-RING-ALX alexandrafranzen.com @[email protected]

How to write a heart-stopping TESTIMONIAL

3 :: Mash it upIllustrative comparisons & mash-ups can convey a wealth of meaning, in just a few words.The key word? LIKE.

: “Using her PR Toolkit feels like having a thumb-sized public relations rep, tucked in your back pocket.”

: “He’s like Tony Robbins, after a six-day spa retreat. Brilliant, inspiring, but deeply chilled out.”

: “Their new music-promotion platform is like MySpace, minus the smatterings of spambots & adolescent angst.”

: “Reading her blog is like catching up with your best friend since childhood. You pick up right where you left off. And whether it’s good news or bad, you’re just glad to be there.”

4 :: Be vulnerableHeart-stopping testimonials are emotional. They give us a glimpse into your human experience with the product, offering or person in question — fears, hesitations, trip-ups & all.

: If you were nervous that the product was all shimmer & no substance, say so. : If you waited till the last minute to enroll & almost missed the whole show-boat, tell us. : If the product gave you an excellent kick-start — but there’s still work to be done — be frank.

Vulnerability infuses your testimonial with honesty. And honesty is more durable than hype.

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ALEXANDRAFRANZEN

Promotional Wordsmith & Personal Scribe

855-RING-ALX alexandrafranzen.com @[email protected]

How to write a heart-stopping TESTIMONIAL

5 :: (Don’t) put it in writing

If putting your review into words gives you a hectic case of praise-paralysis, then . . . don’t.Put it into words, that is.

: Record an unscripted, off-the-cuff audio testimonial. Start with, “If I had to describe XXX in a single word, it would be . . .” And riff on from there.

: Grab your webcam, and film a video testimonial. Imagine you’re sitting across the coffee table from a friend or colleague who’s just asked, “So, seriously — is XXX worth checking out?”

: Take a picture. If your relationship counselor’s latest program transformed your marriage, send a photo of you & your sweetheart renewing your vows on the beach. Pretty much says it all.

: Take a picture.

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