I wanted my front cover to

me simple, clear whilst

being able to appeal to

school pupils.

Negative/ constructive :• Change colour of school today to match front cover

• Add a tag line ( with pictures )

• Make it Positive : • Good and clear pictures

•Editoral pillas are good and consistent with the school theme

This is my final table of conents. I

followed my constructive criticism

and added a tag line which works

with my front cover. Also this will

attract the pupils of the school. I

also changed the colour of the font ‘

School today ‘ to match the

Masthead colour on the front cover

of my magazine.