Final Ancillary Rejected ShotsDanny Norton

Negative Space

•There is too much space between mine and Lorna's heads this is not conventional of a magazine front cover•Lorna is facing away at too strong an angle, also her height means that I would struggle to place features around the image.

Actors not in character

•Actors aren’t in character•Shot is landscape and should be portrait for a magazine front cover•Tim is not central in the shot

Negative Space

Tim’s head is cut off meaning that even if I did erase the background part of his hair and head would be missing.

There is too much negative space between the two actors, this is not conventional for a billboard image as I would struggle to position text around it.

Wrong Facial Expression

Lorna’s facial expression conveys the wrong kind of emotion.

She also has one strand of hair in her face which stops the audience from seeing all of her emotion.

Lorna is leaning slightly forwards this would look odd if I edited this photo with others.

Also the way she is holding her hands is not conventional of a billboard or TV magazine

Wrong Costume

The colour white makes Amelia look sweet and innocent this is not the look that we want to create as in the trailer her character is a femme fatale style character

Silouette

The lighting does not illuminate the actors face, and the background is too white.

The actors pose is not meeting the stereotypes of his character.

Not following straight lines

The horizontal lines of the end of the car park are not straight as the camera was held at an angle this makes the shot look unprofessional

However, the framing and use of rule of thirds works well.