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What are the strengths of the proposal? What are the weaknesses of the proposal? What are the strengths of the generation of ideas? The generation of ideas has a good strong outline of different fairytales and stories, which shows that they have a good plan of different ideas they can work from which gives an advantage. It is presented well and thought of good well-known examples in each of the categories. What are the weaknesses of the generation of ideas? To improve I think that there needs to be another mind map which shows your final ideas your going to work from and this will help you have a clear understanding of the story your wanting to create and how your going to achieve this and in what format. There needs to be some more detail to the mind map about maybe the different methods you could use to create your chosen story and how your going to complete this and what age range you want to aim your book/novel at and what language you would use to appeal to your audience. The mood board needs to be created so you have a clear idea of the fonts you want to use, the type of images your going for (modern or traditional) and what your colour scheme for your story/novel is (so whether it’s going to be quite dark for more of an older audience or bright and cheerful for young children. This then gives us your final ideas and what your thinking.

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What are the strengths of the proposal?

What are the weaknesses of the proposal?

What are the strengths of the generation of ideas?The generation of ideas has a good strong outline of different fairytales and stories, which shows that they have a good plan of different ideas they can work from which gives an advantage. It is presented well and thought of good well-known examples in each of the categories.

What are the weaknesses of the generation of ideas?To improve I think that there needs to be another mind map which shows your final ideas your going to work from and this will help you have a clear understanding of the story your wanting to create and how your going to achieve this and in what format. There needs to be some more detail to the mind map about maybe the different methods you could use to create your chosen story and how your going to complete this and what age range you want to aim your book/novel at and what language you would use to appeal to your audience. The mood board needs to be created so you have a clear idea of the fonts you want to use, the type of images your going for (modern or traditional) and what your colour scheme for your story/novel is (so whether it’s going to be quite dark for more of an older audience or bright and cheerful for young children. This then gives us your final ideas and what your thinking.