extended essay electronic comm

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What is yourstand?

The world today is turning more to electroniccommunications such as the e-mail, facebook and ShortMessage system (SMS). What is your opinion of thisgrowing trend !iscuss. "ou should write at least 350words.

This is goingto be the

norm for us.

The trendwill have apositive

impact onus

The use ofelectronicmedia is

replacing thetraditional

ways of

communicating

Thisgrowingtrend ismakingour lifeeasier

This growingtrend will bringnegative impact

on our lives

Impliedstand

Impliedstand


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POINTS /IDEAS

The world today is turning more to electroniccommunications such as the e-mail, facebook and ShortMessage system (SMS). What is your opinion of thisgrowing trend !iscuss. "ou should write at least 350words.

Positiveimpact

Saves time

Cost efective

Convenient

Negativeimpact

lacks ace toace

communication

Increase ocy er crimes

People areecoming

la!ier


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ESSA!O"T#INE

1. Introduction: Stand: Thesis statement:

2. Content: (3 main ideas / topic sentences)

Topic sentencea. supporting detail 1

i. examples / illustrations b. supporting detail 2 i. examples / illustrations conclusion / sums up

3.Conclusion Summarise all the points. / !""er solutions to the problems discussed.


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A $ew %o onethods usedto write the

introdu%tion

#elate a dramatic anecdote.

$%pose a commonly held belief.

&resent surprising facts and statistics.

'se a fitting uotation.

sk a pro*ocati*e uestion.

Tell a *i*id personal story.

!efine a key term.

&resent an interesting obser*ation.

+reate a uni ue scenario.


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&ow to writeintrodu%tion?'y De$inition

The world today is turning more to electroniccommunications such as the e-mail, facebook and ShortMessage system (SMS). What is your opinion of thisgrowing trend !iscuss. "ou should write at least 350words.Electronic communication is a orm o

communication that is used or the trans er o

data& images& and signals& through )ire&

electromagnetic energy& radio&

photoelectronic or photo+optical system* No)&

people are turning more to electronic

communications such as the e+mail& ace ook

and Short ,essage System -S,S. as their

means o communicating )ith others* In my

opinion, this growing trend is here to

stay and will eventually replace the

traditional ways of communicating. The

growing popularity of electronic

D

tand

Thesisstatemen

t! mainideas


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$as a clear main idea$as an opinionIs related to the thesis statement

Electroniccommunicatio

ns areconvenient

2elpeaseour

lives

Electroniccommunications are

convenientas they help

ease ourlives.

,ain idea opinion

E ectivetopic

sentence

#opicsentence


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,o )are and%ontrast

)ara*ra)h

3* %lectronic communications ena le us tocommunicate )ith

others instantly compared to the traditionalmethod o

communicating*(* ,o ile communication technology and

porta lelaptops ena le people to stay in touch

)ith riendsand co+)orkers at all times*

i* )hatsapps& telegram& e+mail

B* #his lets us )ork and go online in pu liclocations& such as trains and in ca es& and hasena led people to avoid travelling long distances to)ork rom

home*

C* In contrast & the traditional method such assending letters y mail is no longer popular dueto it eing

today

past


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