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  • 8/10/2019 Examples of Good and Bad Writing

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    Examples of Bad Writing

    Within our society, it has been shown that there is an individual. An individual with individual thoughtsand actions. But who determines whether or not he is correct in their choices? Are our thoughts brainwashed through the media with its hellish ideas or our closet friends that try to direct us in the right

    direction? No one may ever know what is right or wrong. So what is ethical relativism anyway? Andwho is behind all of the madness of ethical relativism? t has been said that relativists are believed tothink that relativism is true. !thical "elativism is of a mind to say that whatever ones culture says isright is the right thing for him or her to do. #ne might conclude that the world we human beings live inis not without a variety of many different and diverse cultures with different cultural $ractices andhence different moralities. Studying ethics from a $hiloso$hical $oint of view, ethical relativists mightconclude that your wasting your time %ust like $hiloso$hers have always wasted theyre time.

    &his change will allow us to better leverage our talent base in an area where develo$mental roles areunder way and strategically focuses us toward the u$coming Business System transition whereSystems literacy and accuracy will be essential to maintain and to further im$rove service levels toour customer base going forward.

    f the theories of science were the laws of origin how is it said that $eo$le have such strong emotionsfrom a science e'$eriment? (reud s$eaks of a child that is lost, but love created this child and )odgave him a soul to love back. *e thought religion fulfilled the ga$ for new adults who had no $arentsbut there seems to be a lot of children with $arents that give them love, security, and their needs andthey still believe highly in )od and the scri$tures. &his $roves that religion does not fill the ga$ of a$arent which has been lost.

    Examples of Good Writing

    n +une immense schools of small, silvery fish called ca$elin enter the hundreds of bays that dot theeastern coast of Newfoundland to $erform a fascinating ceremony. &he males and femalesse$arately a$$roach the gravel beaches and are borne ashore in waves so laden with their bodies asto be virtual walls of fish. &here, on the gravel, the females lay their eggs and the males fertili e them-then most of the fish die. /&he S$awning of the 0a$elin,1Scientific American

    /0olors,1 said 2eigh *unt, a 34th century $oet, 5are the smiles of Nature.5 +ust how does an observerdistinguish one smile from another? &o a great e'tent the answer lies in the three classes of conesha$ed, color sensing cells in the retina of the eye. !ach class res$onds differently to light reflectedfrom a colored ob%ect, de$ending on whether the cells have within them red, green, or blue$igments.1 /&he )enes for 0olor 6ision,1Scientific American

    0an a machine think? 0an a machine have conscious thoughts in e'actly the same sense that you

    and have? f by 5machine5 one means a $hysical system ca$able of $erforming certain functions7and what else can one mean?8, then humans are machines of a s$ecial biological kind, and humanscan think, and so of course machines can think. And, for all we know, it might be $ossible to $roducea thinking machine out of different materials altogether say, out of silicon chi$s or vacuum tubes. nrecent decades, however, the 9uestion of whether a machine can think has been given a differentinter$retation entirely. &he 9uestion that has been $osed in its $lace is, 0ould a machine think %ust byvirtue of im$lementing a com$uter $rogram? / s the Brain:s ;ind a 0om$uter

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    What makes writing bad?

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