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Kamini88

ResearchandPlanning18

Thereareover40postshere,coveringagoodrangeofresearchandplanning,

wellillustratedandgivingasenseofthejourneyoftheproject.

Construction54

Aquitegrippingopening.Thedistributorbitdoesntcounttowardsthemarks

fortheproject,buttheproductioncompanyidentisagoodaddition.Thereis

someevocativeuseoflightingandsomegoodcamerawork.Thesequenceis

quitepacilyeditedandtitlesarewellconstructed.Soundislayeredvery

atmospherically.Theflashbackisverywellhandled.

Evaluation16

Unfortunatelysomeoftheoriginalembeddedmediahasnowdisappeared-the

perilsofarchiving!Thereisagoodmixofmaterial,thoughsome,suchasthe

targetaudience,appearsabitrandom.Allquestionsareaddressed,withsome

depth.

Snehal80

ResearchandPlanning14

Therearearound30postshere,plustheevaluation,whichgiveasenseofthe

journeyoftheproductionandindicatesomegoodresearchandarangeof

planning.Thereisenoughtojustifymidlevel3.

Construction51

Thisstartsreallywell,withsomeexcellentcamerawork,particularlyclose-ups.

Editingisreallystrongandthelightingisatmospheric.Titlesarewell

constructed,soundtrackisexcellentandthemise-en-sceneisvery

appropriateuntilthearrivalofthepolicemanwithhisill-fittinghat!Thereare

somegoodmomentsinthesecondhalf,butitisratherconfusingandthe

policemanscostumedistractsfromtheserioustone.Theendlaughterspoilsit

too.Thereisenoughtojustifylowlevel4forexcellenceinsomerespects,butit

wouldneedtobemoreconsistenttogettothehigherpartofthelevel.

Evaluation15

Arangeoftoolsisusedfortheevaluation,whichhassomedegreeofdepthand

somegoodillustrationsandexamplestosupportpointsmade.Thepowerpoint

forQ.6isabitpointless,asthematerialwouldprobablyhavebeenmoreeffectivedirectlyontheblog.Q.5triestomakeuseofannotation,whichisquite

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effective.ThevideoforQ.4isabitsimplisticandQ.2isalittlelimitedasaprezi.

Q.1hasquitealotofdetail.Overall,amixedbag,butenoughagaintojustifya

clearlevel3.

Anujan52

ResearchandPlanning8

Therearerelativelyfewpostspriortotheevaluationandlittlesenseofthe

journeyoftheproject

Construction32

Thereisavarietyofshotsandsomewelleditedmoments,butoverallthisisvery

confusing.Agoodidentandsomeatmosphericmusic,someunderstandingof

conventionsoftitling,butastructurethatdoesntreallymakesense.

Evaluation12

Thoughquitedescriptive,thereisatleastsomevarietyintherangeoftoolsused

fortheevaluationandsufficientdepthtogettothebottomoflevel3.