evaluation 2 by lara faber-johnson
TRANSCRIPT
EVALUATION
The character Nicole from
Fear
Our character Elizabeth
Explanation of slide 2
• On slide 2, I chose a character called Nicole from a film called
Fear. This film is about a man who controls his girlfriend and
becomes extremely obsessive. ‘When Nicole met David;
handsome, charming, affectionate, he was everything. It seemed
perfect, but soon she sees that David has a darker side. And his
adoration turns to obsession, their dream into a nightmare, and
her love into fear.’ I chose Nicole because she is very similar to
our character, that Ophelia plays. Both character are madly in love
with there fellas and become wrapped around there fingers,
wearing rose tinted glasses but after time things change, their
man becomes obsessive and controlling but the woman stick by
their sides but this time mainly because of fear, remembering the
love they used to receive. Both hypnotised by love.
THE PICTURE ABOVE SHOWS HOW EXTREME HIS
OBSESSION WAS WITH NICOLE. (David from the film, FEAR).
He carved her name into his skin, and then rubbed black ink into
the words. Making his own version of a tattoo.
Differences
• While Nicole wears very provocative clothing, 80’s
outfits, short skirts and crop tops, our character that
Ophelia plays (Elizabeth) wears two different outfits,
one a white wedding dress which represents purity
and innocence, possibility of naivety, her devotion to
her husband, then some mini pj bottoms with one of
her husbands short sleeved big tops. Again the
colour white enforcing this idea of purity. Showing
that the two different characters wear very different
outfits, even though there story lines are pretty much
spot on similar.
This character is called Brad, he is from
our film.
This character is called David, from the
film ‘Fear’.
Similarities between David (from the film
Fear) and Brad (from our own production)
• In the film Fear, David one of the main characters, who is the controlling
obsessive boyfriend, wants Nicole to himself, so he cleverly cuts out and
pushes away her friends and family, do everything that he can. In our
opening, we see that, Brad (played by Ollie), does the same thing, when
Elizabeths mum calls, he tells her she's not aloud to answer, and he
answers for her, claiming that she is sleeping and that she will ring her back
later. Which clearly he wont allow her to do. David does the separation
process in a more charming way to start off with, but then does more violent
acts which even includes killing her best friend, threaghtening her dad and
accuses her dad of hurting him so Nicole doesn't want to be around him and
sleeps with her best friend. Our storyline in the opening has least twists and
is less dramatic in the way there are least deaths. Both David from the film
Fear and our actor Brad (Ollie) abuse their partners once clearly on screen.
Our actor does a less violent act due to our actors only being amateurs so
we couldn’t have fake punches in case it went wrong.
Natalie Milligan
18 years old.
Works on an eventing
yard.
Loves horses and
horse riding.
I went over to Nats house and asked her the
following questions:
• Blue= Questions
• Red= Answers
WHERE DO YOU SHOP?:
Asos
WHAT MUSIC DO YOU LISTEN TO?:
Stormzy, Skepta
WHAT IS YOUR FAVOURITE TV PROGRAMME:
Big Bang theory
WHY WOULD YOU WATCH MY FILM?:
I like watching films and I’m intrigued to find out more about the characters and
where the storyline goes.
HENRY
FABER
Henry is my big brother.
23yrs old
Trying to become actor,
working as a tutor, has just
finished studying at Oxford
university.
Enjoys acting, sports and
languages.
I asked Henry the following questions at home:
• Blue= Questions
• Red= Answers
WHERE DO YOU SHOP?
Urban outfitters
WHAT MUSIC DO YOU LISTEN TO:
Muse, Pink Floyd, Madness
WHAT IS YOUR FAVOURITE TV PROGRAMME:
Top Gear
WHY WOULD YOU WATCH MY FILM?:
Because the issues are current and the film is suitable for my age. I like
watching films.
LARA ARNOTT
( Lara is on the right )
Lara is my brothers girlfriend.
She is 23yrs old.
She has just left Bristol
university and is a professional
photography.
She enjoys taking photographs
and doing yoga.
I asked Lara the following questions at home:
• Blue= Questions
• Red= Answers
WHERE DO YOU SHOP:
Charity shops
WHAT MUSIC DO YOU LISTEN TO:
Ben Howard, Beethoven
WHAT IS YOUR FAVOURITE TV PROGRAMME:
Documentaries
WHY WOULD YOU WATCH MY FILM?:
Because i like to go to the cinema and its a film that is showing issues that are
sadly everywhere in the world everyday but is an interesting topic.
What does a production
company do?• A film production company is what it pretty much states in
the title. Produces company, takes in people who have an
idea, or a person who has written book and produces that
idea into an actual film screen viewing product. Sometimes
production companies approach someone who has written
a book and asks for the rights to turn it into a film and
sometimes a person may have an idea or has written an
actual script and thinks it could work as a film. A big
example of a film production company is Warner brothers,
which is based in Los Angles. A film production company
has many people working for them,and therefore have script
writers who will produce many ideas for a film, and the best
ones will be produced.
Which company would
distribute my film:
Sent from Messenger
What kind of money would
our film generate:
• I discussed this question with Millie over and over, and
researched other films like ours to try and get some idea.
The thing is that this is our first film and this is our actors
first film as well, therefore our names and are actors
names are not known by the public, so wouldn't be
looking out to watch our film or watching our for films
made by us. The topic also makes it a film that would only
attract certain collection of people. This film could even be
possible used as a teaching tool. We don’t know how a
wider audience would react to our film. We hope that we
receive enough back to cover the costs and make a profit.
What your film is similar to
‘institutionally’
Who and why we mentioned
in the credits:• We decided to have the credits playing on the first half of the opening as the footage was playing
slowly and there isn't much going on, just the flashback of the wedding. We decided to have the
credits on the left hand corner over the black side, and had them in a white font so they stand out
but don’t distract the viewer from whats going on in the scene. As the wedding scene is still
important. We have placed our production logo ‘Broken Mirror Productions’ at the beginning of the
opening which takes up the whole screen and then the opening starts. This is usual for production
logos to be placed at the beginning for all films. We have done this to follow ‘typical conventions’.
We placed the credits in order of importance. To start off we had Ollie Lavis first, as he appears the
most and has the most lines. Following after we had Ophelia Cidey as she is clearly a main focus
but is second as she has no lines throughout and is a few less shots. Then we have Sam
Flippance, he is a very small part, just playing a priest at the wedding in the first half. His part may
of only been small but still was important and we appreciated his help and time. We again decided
to carry on using the typical conventions by putting in the directors name in next. Therefore my
name was next followed by Millie crediting her for the editing. There were a few names that were
missed out. Most importantly we missed out the artists who we used their songs and they should of
got credit, music is a big part of both half’s of our opening, and helped form our final result. Our
props were from various places, some brought, some found at home and some were kindly lent to
us by a woman called Debbie, who runs and owns my local post office. She should of been put in
the credits, she also got hold of the woman who runs my local church to get us permission to film
there. Therefore she really did deserve some credit.
Credits in order:
• Broken Mirror Productions
• Starring Ollie Lavis
• Ophelia Chigy
• Sam Flippance
• Directed by Lara Faber-Johnson
• Edited by Millie O’Connor
EVALUATION 6
• What have you learnt about the technologies from
the process of constructing this process?
BLOGGER
• When Mr Bunce told us we would be making our own blogging account and
have to blog about our work, I was very nervous as i am not the best with
technology and I struggle with writing things down. After getting a few posts
down my confidence grew and I came to enjoy blogging. As I work best with
colours, I made sure all the text in my work was in different colours, in my
eyes making it more appealing to look at. Our teachers introduced us to two
new websites called Prezzie and Slideshare. Slideshare was my favourite
and the one i used the most because you could upload your work onto it and
then simply copy a link onto your blogger and it would be right there and
would work, where before I had issues with my word documents and Power
presentations on blogger so this was a quick easy solution. The other
problems I have had with Blogger is the fact its online, meaning when you
think you have uploaded something and then the internet goes and no draft
has been saved, and you then end up loosing a whole big bunch of work
you've just spent hours on. But on a over all view I have had a good
experience using Blogger.
iMovie
• iMovie was very much new to me and i had never used it before properly.
Luckily Millie had some experience editing so that was very useful and
meant we could crack on straight away with editing with no dramas. The
problem was that right at the beginning we were planning on filming on my
camera and the battery had been on charge the whole night before, after
taking a few test shots the camera went dead and because we had to be
quick before the lighting was going outside and we needed the light we
ended up having to film on my iPhone which was all fine. Although, once
we started editing we realised that because we had filmed the opening on
my iphone the whole movie was in portrait view and when the opening was
played on full screen it was slightly blurry which was at first a big problem
and after all the stresses and dramas we had just filming the bits we had
we really didn't want to have to film it all over again. In the end we had a
go changing the affects and made it into a home video style and that was a
new skill i learnt how to do.
SOCIAL NETWORKING
SITES USED:I used Youtube and Facebook to
present our film opening to the public.
The uploading process from iMovie to
youtube and iMovie to Facebook took
quite a while. But in the end we got it
up there, and i was taken back by how
many people viewed it but pleased.
EVALUATION 6
• Looking back at your preliminary task (the continuity editing task), what
do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to full product?
• The problem is that our film opening has turned out completely
different than i imagined it to turn out. The script has changed and the
original idea has changed. The way we filmed it was unintentional but
that worked for the best. This evaluation question is a difficult one to
answer because its difficult for me to compare the different shot types
as in our final piece- Rose Tinted as we don’t have any shots that are
set, as we just filmed the footage constantly and smooth. There are a
few shots though that i can point out and so i will compare these shots
to the ones we took in the preliminary task.
Final Piece
Preliminary Task
I took a screenshot from this
scene in the preliminary task
and a screenshot from the
wedding in the final piece
because they are both Mid
shots. They compare well
because they are both very
similar even though at the same
time they are very different. In
the preliminary task we were
given set shots that we had to
capture and as you can we
therefore had practice for when
we did our final piece. This shot
that was taken in the final piece
is one of my favourite shots in
our whole production, in my
mind its clear what we are
wanting to show, a happy
couple clearly in love, setting
out to start their lives together.
This screenshots are
representing close up shots.
I chose these two
screenshots, one from the
preliminary task and the
other from our final piece
because they show clearly
that they are both close up
shots, they look similar
because their the same shot
but then again so different,
as they are from two
different scenes. Even
though are aim was for
Andrea are actress in the
first screenshot to look
angry, as Ollie does in the
second screenshot. If the
acting had been better in
our preliminary task then
you would of seen the
similar reactions, even if the
films were different story
lines. This is the only after
shot that we did the same as
the ones from the
preliminary tasks, I think this
shot has progressed from
the one we took of Andrea
in the preliminary task
showing the development of
our work and skills.