English ARC Work Sample Courtney

End Stage 4 English student work sample – Grade B

Effectively shifts the modality to convince

Directly appeals to the reader, describing a range of enticing experiences

Grade Commentary Courtney has demonstrated thorough knowledge and understanding of conventions of writing a persuasive letter. A strong sense of audience and purpose is apparent and is sustained throughout the response. A thorough understanding of the use of persuasive devices is apparent in the selection and application of persuasive techniques. The content is varied and a comprehensive overview on Australia is provided, but greater detail would enhance the response.

Courtney’s response demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade B standard at the end of Stage 4.

English ARC Work Sample Courtney

Effective range of appeals

Promotional offer is used to convince