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Schools are sorts of institutions that have a big impact in improving intellectual and professional skills at students. There are a lot of ways to achieve this final purpose but the most useful are two classical methods, exactly competition and cooperation. This essay will discuss the importance of those methods and will provide more information to find out the best manner to promote capable students. Firstly, i think that competition is a helpful technique to practice during the school period because it aids students to be prepared for the future labour market. As the labour market nowadays is rude and wild, it would be better for students to face the competition difficulties during their studies in order to be capable to manage and to confront the severity of the labour market. Meanwhile, cooperation has a huge effect on the preparation of student background and helps them to be more sociable and to create appropriate conditions for a healthy society where prevail the respect for each other. Secondly, being part of a class where competition is used in the majority of the cases, stimulate all students to make efforts to develop their abilities and to be more skillful about the field they are studying for. So competition exercises student's psychology to learn more than the other part of students in class and it would be a good way to have efficiency and effective generations. On the other hand, cooperation coincides with a well- known method used in our past and present society that helps people to collaborate with each other. It's a fact that the evolution of the world is due to the cooperation between different cultures and it is impossible to have progress without collaboration. On conclusion, both of them are two methods that are related to each other and must be practice always in schools and universities in order to create an environment where diversity does not increase the possibilities to create conflicts in society. As cooperation and collaboration have their advantages and disadvantages, I think that both of them must be harmonized during

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Schools are sorts of institutions that have a big impact in improving intellectual and professional skills at students. There are a lot of ways to achieve this final purpose but the most useful are two classical methods, exactly competition and cooperation. This essay will discuss the importance of those methods and will provide more information to find out the best manner to promote capable students.

Firstly, i think that competition is a helpful technique to practice during the school period because it aids students to be prepared for the future labour market. As the labour market nowadays is rude and wild, it would be better for students to face the competition difficulties during their studies in order to be capable to manage and to confront the severity of the labour market. Meanwhile, cooperation has a huge effect on the preparation of student background and helps them to be more sociable and to create appropriate conditions for a healthy society where prevail the respect for each other.

Secondly, being part of a class where competition is used in the majority of the cases, stimulate all students to make efforts to develop their abilities and to be more skillful about the field they are studying for. So competition exercises student's psychology to learn more than the other part of students in class and it would be a good way to have efficiency and effective generations. On the other hand, cooperation coincides with a well-known method used in our past and present society that helps people to collaborate with each other. It's a fact that the evolution of the world is due to the cooperation between different cultures and it is impossible to have progress without collaboration.

On conclusion, both of them are two methods that are related to each other and must be practice always in schools and universities in order to create an environment where diversity does not increase the possibilities to create conflicts in society. As cooperation and collaboration have their advantages and disadvantages, I think that both of them must be harmonized during student studies in order to disappear the student’s fear to confront the others in the future. So, cooperation and collaboration are techniques that promote skillful and qualified people that will contribute to have a healthy society.

Kristo, 06/17/15,
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Kristo, 06/17/15,
This essay is well organised and provides a good structure and examples.This essay wil recieve a score of 4.
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Your introduction is perfect