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Shot Numbe r Photo Type of shot/angle/move ment Dialogue, Sound, Setting, Colour, M en-scene 1 N/A N/A 2 Shot: close up of her eyes showing her waking up from a nightmare Angle: high Movement: none Dialogue: as she wa up Sound: su music Setting: bedroom Colour: b and white Mise-en-s childlike hair, pyjamas, make up d so looks tired, high key lighting, shocked expressio

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Page 1: Ellie storyboard feedback

Shot Number

Photo Type of shot/angle/movement

Dialogue, Sound, Setting, Colour, Mise-en-scene

1 N/A N/A

2 Shot: close up of her eyes showing her waking up from a nightmareAngle: high Movement: none

Dialogue: gasp as she wakes up Sound: subtle musicSetting: bedroomColour: black and whiteMise-en-scene: childlike hair, pyjamas, make up done so looks tired, high key lighting, shocked expression

3 Shot: wide shot showing her running down the stairs of her house to show how she’s leavingAngle: high Movement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: footsteps and music quietly buildingSetting: stairs in her houseColour: black and white Mise-en-scene: stairs, childlike hair, pyjamas, make up done so looks tired, high key lighting, arms by her side,

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4 Shot: mid shot showing her running down the streetAngle: straightMovement: tracking

Dialogue: noneSound: music buildingSetting: street as she’s running to the churchColour: black and whiteMise-en-scene: childlike hair, pyjamas, make up done so looks tired, high key lighting, out of breath,

5 Shot: wide shot showing her from behind running down the streetAngle: straightMovement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: music building stillSetting: street as she’s running to the churchColour: black and whiteMise-en-scene: childlike hair, pyjamas,make up done so looks tired, high key lighting

6 Shot: close up of her face to show her panting/ tired expression Angle: straightMovement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: dramatic music and heartbeatSetting: street as she’s running to the churchColour: black and whiteMise-en-scene: childlike hair, pyjamas, make up done so looks tired, high key lighting, out of breath

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7 Shot: wide shot showing the church as it will appear in the backgroundAngle: straightMovement: pan

Dialogue: noneSound: music gets less dramaticSetting: front of the churchColour: black and whiteMise-en-scene: childlike hair, pyjamas, make up done so looks tired, high key lighting

8 Shot: wide/ establishing shot as we see her in the entrance of the church.Angle: straightMovement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: music gets more quiet and less dramaticSetting: entrance of the churchColour: black and white Mise-en-scene: childlike hair, pyjamas, high key lightingarms by her side

9 Shot: close up as the pan up shows the young woman in the entrance of the churchAngle: high to low Movement: pan up from feet to face

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack continues Setting: entrance of the churchColour: black and whiteMise-en-scene: childlike hair, pyjamas, make up done so looks tired, high key lighting, blank facial expression

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10 Shot: point of view shot from the young woman to show the flashback of her parent’s deathAngle: straight and high Movement: pan as she looks down at her father and back up at black figure.

Dialogue: noneSound: gun shotSetting: outside of church (flashback)Colour: black and white with low contrast and high brightness to show flashbackMise-en-scene: and low key lighting, black figure in dark/black clothing, father’s expression blank when dead on the floor

11 Shot: close up showing the articles and photos the young woman is looking throughAngle: high Movement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack continuesSetting: young woman’s bedroomColour: black and white with low contrast and high brightness to show flashbackMise-en-scene: news articles and photosHigh key lighting

12 Shot: aerial shot showing the young woman sitting cross legged looking through the photos and articlesAngle: high Movement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack continuesSetting: young woman’s bedroomColour: black and white with low contrast and high brightness to show flashbackMise-en-scene: childlike hair and

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clothingNews articles and photosHigh key lighting

13 Shot: close up of the titles on the articles to show that her parents are deadAngle: high Movement: zoom on the word ‘dead’ on the article title to emphasize

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack continuesSetting: young woman’s bedroomColour: black and white with low contrast and high brightness to show flashbackMise-en-scene: news articlesHigh key lighting

14 Shot: point of view shot from the black figure to show that she’s watching her in the entranceAngle: straightMovement: handheld camera/shaky effect

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack gets more dramatic to add tensionSetting: churchColour: black and whiteMise-en-scene: Churchhigh key lightingChildlike hair and clothing

15 Shot: point of view from young woman to show she’s looking around and no one’s thereAngle: straightMovement: pan to show her eyes scanning the area

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack continuing to buildSetting: front of churchColour: black and whiteMise-en-scene: High key lighting

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16 Shot: mid shot showing how she’s walking further into the churchAngle: straightMovement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack slows and gets less dramatic for this shotSetting: churchColour: black and whiteMise-en-scene: ChurchChildlike hair and clothingHigh key lighting

17 Shot: close of up black figures black boots walking up the pathway of the churchAngle: straight/lowMovement: tracking following the black figures steps

Dialogue: noneSound: footsteps and soundtrack building againSetting: pathway in front of churchColour: black and white Mise-en-scene: Black bootsHigh key lighting

18 Shot: close up of the young woman’s feet walking into the churchAngle: straight/highMovement: tracking following her footsteps

Dialogue: noneSound: footsteps and soundtrack buildingSetting: inside of the church Colour: black and whiteMise-en-scene:Pyjama bottomsNo shoeHigh key lighting

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19 Shot: close of up black figures black boots walking up the pathway of the churchAngle: straight/lowMovement: tracking following the black figures steps

Dialogue: noneSound: footsteps and soundtrack buildingSetting: pathway in front of churchColour: black and white Mise-en-scene: Black bootsHigh key lighting

20 Shot: close up of young woman’s feet walking into the churchAngle: straight/highMovement: tracking following her footstepsHow is this different from #18?

Dialogue: noneSound: footsteps and soundtrack buildingSetting: inside of the church Colour: black and whiteMise-en-scene:Pyjama bottomsNo shoeHigh key lighting

21 Shot: wide shot showing the young woman walking down the aisle of the churchAngle: straightMovement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: footsteps quiet in background but still present, soundtrack slightly quietens Setting: church aisleColour: black and whiteMise-en-scene:ChurchChildish clothing and hairHigh key lighting

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22 Shot: mid shot showing the young woman kneeling at the end of the aisleAngle: high Movement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack continuesSetting: inside the churchColour: black and white Mise-en-scene: ChurchHigh key lightingChildish hair and clothing

23 Shot: aerial shot showing the young woman looking at a photo of her and her parent’s Angle: high Movement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack continuesSetting: inside the churchColour: black and white Mise-en-scene: Family photoChildish hair and clothingHigh key lightingChurch

24 Shot: close up shot of the photo and a tear landing onto itAngle: highMovement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack continues Setting: inside the churchColour: black and white Mise-en-scene: Family photo

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25 Shot: wide shot to reveal the black figure appear further behind (out of focus) her in the churchAngle: straightMovement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack continues, slightly buildingSetting: inside the churchColour: black and whiteMise-en-scene:Childlike hair and clothingAll black clothingChurchHigh key lighting

26 Shot: close up showing the black figures black glove holding the same photo but with her parent’s faces scratched outAngle: highMovement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack continues, slightly buildingSetting: inside the churchColour: black and white Mise-en-scene: Black gloveChurchFamily photoHigh key lighting

27 Shot: point of view of the black figure looking at the young woman at the end of the aisleAngle: straightMovement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack builds more to add more tensionSetting: inside the churchColour: black and whiteMise-en-scene: ChurchHigh key lightingChildlike hair and clothing

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28 Shot: wide shot now showing the black in focus behind herAngle: straightMovement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack continuesSetting: inside the churchColour: black and white Mise-en-scene: Childlike hair and clothingAll black clothingChurchHigh key lighting

29 Shot: aerial shot to again show her looking at the photo of her and her parent’sAngle: highMovement: none

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack continues slightly building to add tension to last shotSetting: inside the churchColour: black and white Mise-en-scene: ChurchHigh key lightingFamily photoChildlike hair and clothing

30 Shot: mid shot and close up as we see the young woman turn around and a close up of her eyesAngle: straightMovement: noneIf there’s no movement (i.e.- zooming in from a medium to an extreme close-up of the eyes, then these are 2 different shots because you’ll be cutting to the ECU)

Dialogue: noneSound: soundtrack begins the same, getting more intense as we get closer to her faceSetting: inside the churchColour: black and whiteMise-en-scene: ChurchHigh key lightingChildlike hair and clothing

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31 ‘Shadow’ Film title N/A N/A