Draft 4 Planning :Timeline and Storyboard

Girl is walking into the park.

She finds a tree trunk , sits down and takes out her phone and texts her friend. ELLIPSIS.

Reads text from friend that says, ‘I’m Busy’.

She puts her phone away and takes out her journal.

She opens her journal and looks over her previous entries.

FLASHBACK.Girl checking her bruises in the mirror.END OF FLASHBACK.

FLASHBACK.Mother strangling her.END OF FLASHBACK.

Turns the next page of the journal.

Turns the next page of the journal.

FLASHBACKGirl’s friend sees her bruise and quickly covers it up. END OF FLASHBACK.

Timeline= Time change

Timeline

Puts away her journal and rushes out the park.

Girl gets on the bus. Keeps checking the time.

Running down her street.

Stops running at the front door.

Door.Girl.Door.

Checks the time. 4:20

Voice over of mother telling her to be home by 4:30.

Door.Girl.

Storyboard

Storyboard

Storyboard

Storyboard

Storyboard