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SENTENCE VITALITY
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1. Pets, cars, teachers.2. Rover, my english professor.
EXAMPLES:An old blue car.A rusted baby-blue ´59 buick.
GENERAL AND SPECIFIC LANGUAGE
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WORDS AND PHRASES THAT DESCRIBE NOUNS AND VERBS
Laura was a pretty girl with nice brown eyes.Laura was a fair-skinned girl with laughing brown eyes.
CONCRETE, SPECIFIC MODIFIERS
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The city housing manager pointed out a row of old wooden houses.
The city housing manager pointed out a row of peeling and crumbling houses.
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REPLACE STATIC VERBS WITH ACTION VERBS.
This problem will soon become evident.This problem will soon erupt.
STRONG VERBS
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