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Personal-Reflective essay feedback (draft 1)
November 2013
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Key
MD= go into more detail.STO= too much storytelling.DFT= describe your thoughts and feelings.ETF= explain your thoughts and feelings.
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Remember!
Length must be between 650-1300 words.
You must separate your ideas using paragraphs.
You must use a good standard of English with a wide range of vocabulary.
You must use a high standard of spelling and punctuation.
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Next steps
• Read the comments that you have been given; and
Read the marking grid.
• Identify which improvements you have to make.
• Have another look at exemplars.
• Redraft your first draft accordingly.
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Black ink.12 pt.Times New RomanDouble Spaced.Justified.Title. Your name.Title of essay.Page numbers.Word count.Two drafts.
If any of this is not done, I will not accept your essay.
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Your final draft must be handed in on:
Wednesday November 27th