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CHARACTERS
Characters include:
• Jane – the possessed daughter• Mother- also know as Judith is the mother of
Jane• Father- Also known as Justin is the Father of
Jane
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STORYLINE• 1. Jane begins telling her story, happiness ‘I used to have a happy life, everything was close to perfect’… shots of family,
friends and social events• 2. But then something happened to me that would change my life forever, I tried to warn them• 3. Cuts to scene ‘mum, there’s something wrong with me, I can feel it’… ‘listen to me because this is the last time I’m
going to say this, it’s all in your head and im sick and tired of you telling me the same story, GROW UP (big climax).• 4. Creak of the door. Loud music comes, hands begin to grab Jane she screams’ leave me alone, leave me alone, and
finally shouts ‘go away’ they disappear, she looks around and nothing is there.• 5. It then cuts to a dialogues scene with her mum, “ I’m scarred i think its returning, that the thing is happening again”• 6. She looks around searching her room checking everything is normal, she then seats down and stares into her mirror,
but she see nothing, not even her own reflection, it’s just black. Then a face appears, slowly it evolves from a spec to her own reflection, but it’s not quite what she was expecting.
• 7. • 8. The camera zooms in towards the mirror, we hear a loud thud, she screams and begins fighting with herself banging
her head on the wall then you hear her final scream, she becomes evil, total transformation, we no longer see this happy girl, instead we see a demon, red eyes, thick matted black hair, blood dripping teeth, yellow in colour, ancient in age, panning shot, the transition is made.
• 9. Cuts to scene with mum talking “i think our daughters possessed” • 10. Flashing scene 1: jane goes into the mothers bedroom, point of view shot from janes perspective mother cries out
‘jane, jane, JANE’ also the ending• • 11. Flashing scene 2: preist casts out demon• 12. Flashing scene3: dad looking for jane‘ where are you?’
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THE FOLLOWING PREVIEW HAS BEEN APPROVED FOR
ALL AUDIENCESBY THE MOTION PICTURE ASSOCIATION OF UNITED KINGDOM
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Camera shotMedium/over the shoulder shot
Camera movementPanning shotFrom over the shoulder
AUDIO 1 – SPOKENMY NAME IS JANE AND I’M 14...
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Camera shotMedium, two shoot
Camera movementPans up
Dialogue I USED TO HAVE A HAPPY LIFE
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Camera shotMedium , two shot
DialogueMum there something wrong with me
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Close up/medium shot
Dialogue: mum I think there
something wrong with me
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Camera shotLong shotCamera angle:High angled ddialogue: please mum please
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Camera shotMedium/ long shot
Dialoguelisten to me because this is the last time I’m going to say this, it’s all in your head and im sick and tired of you telling me the same story, GROW UP
Camera angle straight view
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Camera shotClose up/mediu,m shot
Sound effectsCreek of the door
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Camera shotClose up shot
DialogueAaaah!!!
Sound:Intense music begins form this scene through to the next
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BDROOM SHOT
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Camera shotClose/medium shot
DialogueI think there is something wrong with jane
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Cmaera shot:Close up shot
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Camera shotOver the shoulder shot
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Tagline
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Camera shotClose up
Camera movementPans to the left
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Camera shotClose up
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Camera shot Close up
Camera angleHigh angle
Sound effectsDramatic music in back ground
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tagline
Can Jane change what now is apart of her
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Camera shotmedium-/two shot
Camera movement Static
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Camera shotMedium long shot/over the shoulder
TranasitionJump
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Camera shotMedium shot
DialogueJane?
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Camera shotClose up shot
DialogueJane?!!
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Close up
JAAANEE!!!