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English ARC Work Sample Kim
Mid Stage 5 English – Persuasive Essay – Grade A
Engages with question demonstrating strong personal voice
Perceptively integrates knowledge of genre
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English ARC Work Sample Kim
Applies knowledge of genre and film techniques
Attempts to sustain evaluative language
Relevant discussion with evaluation
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English ARC Work Sample Kim
Grade Commentary
Kim demonstrates extensive understanding of genre and film techniques and shows a high level of competence in analysis. There is a strong sense of personal voice, and expression is fluent and appropriate to audience and purpose.
The persuasive essay is well structured demonstrating a strong personal analysis integrating judicious choice of textual evidence.
Kim’s response demonstrates characteristics typically produced by a student performing at a Grade A standard midway through Stage 5.