A Case Study by Deb Kerr
Technical Communicator
Survivor of Breast Cancer Experience
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Cancer journey from November 2010 to November 2011
Two types of breast cancer:
• Non-invasive Ductal Carcinoma In Situ (DCIS) – Stage 0
• Invasive Stage IIB
• Area of cancerous material
12 cm x 6 cm x 4 cm = 4.72 in x 2.4 in x 1.6 in
Mastectomy, chemotherapy, radiation, and ongoing
medication…the party pack of treatments
Worked during my chemotherapy and radiation treatments
Believer that wigs and fake boobs = humour
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Technical communicator for over 25 years as technical
writer, newsletter editor, and business analyst
Council member with the STC Southwestern Ontario
Chapter (Canada) – have held nearly every position
Winner of Best of Show in STC’s newsletter competition
Budding author in Grade 6 and poetry
contest winner in Grade 12
Inability to read without critiquing or editing
Great sense of humour (See a trend?)
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To re-evaluate technical communication
To appreciate the importance of audience and the impact on documentation (format, content, delivery)
To understand the impact of missing, incorrect, and conflicting information
To see how seemingly unrelated things can create a mental image that is unforgettable
To recognize new opportunities to use technical communication, even outside of work
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I cannot easily say prosthetic breast (mouthful) or
prosthesis (lisp) so I say fake boob or boob for short.
There will be some fake boob stories, but I will not
give any prior warning (other than this).
My joking manner is in no way meant to lessen the
seriousness of breast cancer.
Laughter is encouraged
throughout this presentation as
long as you are laughing with me.
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This is just a test.
Fake boob picture
was intentionally
left out.
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Name of my email group (about 40 members)
Communication to family, friends, co-workers, and
family doctor
• Provided information and status updates
• Explained concepts and procedures
• Provided real-life examples
• Made people laugh
Therapeutic for everyone
Did not start until after my surgery, once I got my
cancer “legs”
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http://www.flickr.com/photos/wonderlane/11903341854/
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Before
During
After
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Boob
Keys
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Traditional Information Cancer Information
Generally one audience and
one perspective
Personality types and ages are
not usually considered
Expect a happy path to get from
point A to B
Readers skim pages to complete
time-sensitive tasks
Many audiences (patient, family,
co-workers, friends)
Many personality types and
ages to consider
Chaotic experience with no one
way to do anything
More likely to re-read
information and read it carefully
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Traditional Information Cancer Information
A description of terms
Assembly or installation instructions
Procedures to complete a task and reinforcement that it is being done correctly
Explanation of how everything fits together (concepts)
Major focus: procedures
A description of terms
Descriptions of upcoming tests
and treatments
General concepts
What each audience can do to
improve the situation (physical
and emotional)
Major focus: concepts and
terminology
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Traditional Information Cancer Information
Quick Reference Guide
Websites (wikis, forums, articles, discussion boards)
Manuals (installation, getting started, user’s guide)
Newsletters and books
Online Help
“How to” videos
Training (in-person, webinars)
Single sheets of paper
Websites (blogs, forums,
articles, discussion boards)
Brochures and pamphlets
Booklets, books and
newsletters
Videos (websites or DVDs)
Seminars, workshops, and
support groups
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Usability: Too much information, incorrect
information, contradictory information, and missing
information can produce some interesting results.
Concepts: Existing knowledge is an important tool for
explaining things like concepts.
Terminology: The best description can’t add clarity if
the reader doesn’t understand the words.
Procedures: Traditional communications have more
clearly-defined steps than cancer communications.
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Checking out one page on the Internet is like only
eating one chip…not possible
Every page is chip one until the
package is finished
Lack of structure and volume of data
on the Internet are problematic
Results in conflicting information, information
delivered at the wrong time, unfortunate discoveries
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1. Manual sets: Getting Started, Reference Manual,
User’s Guide, Installation Guide (Printed)
2. Same as above but online
3. Single-sourcing: Same information used in
multiple documents
4. Mark Baker’s Every Page is Page One, where each
web page can stand on its own.
Chunking is becoming less popular.
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Control speed information is accessed
Audience’s personality determines the chunk’s size
• One test at a time
• One type of cancer treatment at a time
Booklets, pamphlets, single sheets of paper, DVDs
Just-in-time delivery is key to success
Emotional response leads to great information
being missed
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List of some of the booklets available on the
Canadian Cancer Society website.
Understanding your Diagnosis
Understanding Treatment for Breast Cancer
Exercises after Breast Surgery
Chemotherapy and Other Drug Therapies
Radiation Therapy
Life After Cancer Treatments
Questions to Ask about Cancer
Complementary Therapies
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Learn About Breast Cancer
Whether you’re worried about developing breast
cancer, making decisions about treatment, or trying
to stay well after treatment, we can help. Find
detailed information in our Detailed Guide, or get a
shorter, simpler version in our Overview Guide.
http://www.cancer.org/cancer/breastcancer/index (American Cancer Society)
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The Canadian Cancer Society understands that Canadians are concerned about
cancer, but recommends that you be cautious of any information or claims obtained
from unmonitored sources, in particular the Internet. The Internet can be an
empowering source of information, but a healthcare professional should be
consulted before making medical decisions.
http://www.cancer.ca/en/prevention-and-screening/be-aware/cancer-myths-and-controversies/
(Canadian Cancer Society)
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Cancer Myth: If it’s on the Internet, it must be true.
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Information can be contradictory because:
The volume of information makes it more likely to differ.
Procedures vary between hospitals and doctors.
Breast cancer is unique for each person.
There are a large variety of opinions and perspectives.
Incoming information is different than current beliefs.
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Contradictions can leave readers more confused than
when they started reading it.
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Me My Friend
Drains out after fluid output
under 30 ccs (12 / 15 days)
Can shower with drains in
Chemo (AC - T):
• 2 drugs over 4 treatments
• 1 drug over 4 treatments
Steps for breast reconstruction
only after radiation treatments
completed
Drains out after 5 days
regardless of fluid output
No shower until drains removed
Chemo (ACT):
• 3 drugs over 4 treatments
Steps for breast reconstruction
started as part of mastectomy
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http://www.cancer.ca/en/cancer-information/cancer-type/breast/overview
(Canadian Cancer Society)
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The part of the body between
the chest and the pelvis that
contains the digestive system
and other organs.
Abdominal means referring to or
having to do with the abdomen,
as in abdominal wall.
Commonly called the belly.
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The biggest piece of
missing information
http://www.cancer.org/cancer/breastcancer/moreinformation/breastcancerearlydetection/
breast-cancer-early-detection-signs-symptoms-br-ca
(American Cancer Society)
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Graphics by Kyle Kerr
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Graphic by Kyle Kerr
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On the bright side, the peeling stops just under my one tattoo, so I know that if the purpose of the tattoo was to identify the range of the radiation then they hit it. Very impressive this accuracy. The line between the regular skin and the new skin is starting to get less noticeable too. I told people that I looked sort of like a text box (I am a writer so that is how my mind works). There is a line around the outside of the box but there is nothing in it.
Boob Buddy email of December 8, 2011
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It turns out that over the course of 25 treatments (5 days a
week for 5 weeks), I received a total of 5000 centigray (cGy)
of absorbed radiation. This means I had about 200 cGy per
day. One rad (older terminology for unit of measurement) of
radiation is equal to 1 centigray.
Boob Buddy email of November 7, 2011
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It turns out that over the course of 25 treatments (5 days a week
for 5 weeks), I received a total of 5000 centigray (cGy) of
absorbed radiation. This means I had about 200 cGy per day. One
rad (older terminology for unit of measurement) of radiation is
equal to 1 centigray.
To put things into perspective, one abdominal x-ray is equal to
about 0.14 cGY (found this on the internet). This means that I had
the equivalent of about 35,714 x-rays over 25 treatments.
Boob Buddy email of November 7, 2011
5,000 / 25 = 200 x 0.14 = 35,714 x-rays
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Pathology reports, in addition to stage and grade,
identify whether you are estrogen and/or
progesterone positive (ER+/PR+)
Being estrogen or progesterone positive means your
cancer is hormone driven
Being positive is considered good because
medication can be used to block the hormones
The question is…how does the medication work?
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No Tamoxifen
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Estrogen
binds with
estrogen
receptor
The bound
items acquire
new shape
The new
shape binds
with
cooactivators
With Tamoxifen
Tamoxifen
binds with
estrogen
receptor
Estrogen receptor
does not acquire
change in shape
There is no
new shape so
cooactivators
cannot bind
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Estrogen receptors are like suction cups on the
bottom of your bath mat.
When the mat is new, it sticks extremely well to the
bottom of your tub.
Over time, the suction cups lose their effectiveness.
The cups get flattened and get disgustingly dirty.
Tamoxifen acts like dirt to fill the suction cups so
bad estrogen cannot adhere to the receptors.
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Bad Estrogen Bad Estrogen
Tamoxifen
Estrogen Receptors Estrogen Receptors on Drugs
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The sentinel nodes are the first line of defense. For me,
my sentinel nodes (2 of them) were cancerous, which is
why they removed my axillary nodes (20 of them) for
testing.
The (auxiliary) axillary nodes are the second and last
line of defense for keeping cancer from spreading to
other parts of the body. Had any of these axillary nodes
been cancerous, it could have meant that the cancer in
my breast had breached the area and gone to other
areas of my body.
Boob Buddy email of April 20, 2011
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adjective 1. additional; supplementary; reserve: an auxiliary police force.
2. used as a substitute or reserve in case of need: The hospital has an auxiliary power system in case of a blackout.
3. (of a boat) having an engine that can be used to supplement the sails: an auxiliary yawl.
4. giving support; serving as an aid; helpful: The mind and emotions are auxiliary to each other.
http://dictionary.reference.com/
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Grade (appearance and behavior of the tumor) and
Stage (extent of the disease) are two different things.
The cancer I had was Grade 2. Grade 1 is the slowest
growing cancer and Grade 3 is the fastest one. So I
am middle of the road. This is one of those times
where you don't really want to excel, so I am okay
with my grade.
Boob Buddy email of May 5, 2011
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When it’s okay to have a
lower grade.
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1. See a doctor.
2. Get referrals for tests.
3. Wait for the test dates and wait for the results.
4. Get referrals to other doctors.
5. Wait to see those doctors.
6. Get referrals from other doctors for more tests.
7. Repeat step 3, that is, wait.
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8. Meet with one or more doctors to decide on a treatment plan.
9. Wait for the date to start treatment.
10. Start the treatment.
11. Depending on the treatment, meet with a doctor and possibly have tests in between treatments.
12. Wait to see a doctor to get results.
13. Complete next treatment if you get the thumbs up.
14. Repeat steps 10 to 13 as needed.
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Doctor and hospital – remember the shower and drain story
Grade – 1 to 3 (slowest to fastest growing)
Stage – tumor size, lymph node involvement, invasive or non-invasive, and whether it has spread to other parts of the body
Hormone Receptors (-/+) – medication an option
HER2 (-/+) – aggressiveness of the cancer
LVI– possible indicator of whether cancer will return
Size of breasts and chest wall – duration of radiation treatments
Height and weight – dosage given for tests and treatment
Existing health issues and medications – what needs to be monitored, drug interactions, and what is considered an emergency
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Process 1 Process 2 Process 3 Process 4 Process 5
1. Symptom
2. Doctor
3. Mammogram
4. Ultrasound
biopsy
5. Mastectomy
6. Oncologists
7. Chemo
8. Medication
ER+ (pre-
menopause)
1. Regular
mammogram
2. Doctor
3. Results neg.
4. Relax. OK.
1. Regular
checkup
2. Mammogram
3. Ultrasound
4. Ultrasound
biopsy
5. Lumpectomy
6. Oncologists
7. Chemo
8. Radiation
9. Herceptin® for
being HER2+
1. Symptom
2. Doctor
3. Mammogram
4. Ultrasound
5. Ultrasound
biopsy
6. Lumpectomy
7. Oncologists
8. Radiation
9. Medication
ER+ (post-
menopause)
1. Symptom
2. Doctor
3. Mammogram
4. Ultrasound
5. Ductogram
6. Ultrasound
biopsy
7. MRI
8. MRI biopsy
9. Mastectomy
10. Oncologists
11. Chemo
12. Radiation
13. Medication
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Happy path
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Wrote “letter” of concern on December 13, 2010
No ordinary letter: Background, Areas of Concern,
Recommendations, and Conclusion
Expressed concerns about:
• Processes
• Collection of information
• Format of forms
• Communication issues
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Result: 20-minute phone conversation on December 24th
with director of problematic area
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Facility B Tests
• Mammogram
• Ultrasound
• Ultrasound Biopsy
• Fine Needle Aspiration
• MRI
• MRI Biopsy
• Sentinel Node Dye
Facility B Treatment
• Mastectomy
• Sentinel and Axillary
Lymph Nodes Removal
Facility C Treatment
• Port-a-Cath
• Chemotherapy
Facility C Oncologists
• Medical
• Radiation
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Contrast in service between Facility A and other facilities now very clear: • Communication
• Technical skills to perform medical procedures
• Attention to detail
More aware of potential ramifications of diagnostic issues prior to being sent to Facility B
Wrote second “letter” on September 12, 2011
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Result: Internal investigation and receipt of letter
from problematic medical specialist.
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Investigation into the Standard of Care, Communication, and Technical Skills at
Facility A
By Debbie Kerr
August 23, 2012
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Executive Summary
Some Background
General Comments about the Investigation
Summary of Concerns and Responses (from letter 2)
• Standard of Care
• Communication
• Technical Skills
Recommendations
Conclusion
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Date Test/Action Results Recommendation Comments/Next Steps
Nov. 9/10 Mammogram
(Medical
Imaging)
• Asymmetric ill-defined area of
increased density measuring 4
to 5 cm in diameter 12:00 mid-
left breast
• Spreads out minimally
• No associated
microcalcifications or
architectural distortion
Dr. Smith
• Focused ultrasound
• MRI may also be
helpful
• Focused Ultrasound booked for
November 16, 2010 (Medical Imaging)
Nov. 16/10
Focused
Ultrasound
(Medical
Imaging)
• Moderate dilation of the retro-
areolar ducts in both breasts
• 2 echogenci intraductal
“nodules” at 12:00, measuring
3.3 and 3.5 mm (compatible
with tiny polyps or echogenic
debris)
• Dense fibroglandular tissue
• No suspicious masses
• Believe to be query intraductal
papillomas as described
Dr. Smith
• Surgical consultation
• Ductogram
• MRI
• Ductogram requested on November 18
and scheduled for Nov. 22, 2010
(Facility A)
• Surgical consult scheduled with Dr.
Jones (December 9, 2010)
• Request for MRI submitted with
mammogram results but was not
approved.
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In an investigation, involve all the main medical
personnel associated with that care.
Recognize tests done at other facilities as part of the
standard of care.
Encourage and facilitate discussions between
medical personnel at different facilities.
Develop a procedure to address multiple requisitions
for a test and multiple rejections.
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Two-hour meeting with four
representatives from Facility A
• Family doctor attended for first hour
• Discussed my report (lots of questions
and answers on both sides)
• Many of my recommendations will be
implemented
• New areas for change were identified
during meeting
• Asked if my scenario could be used as a
case study
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Concepts and terms are more predominant in
cancer documentation than procedures.
Unusual connections (words and pictures) can make
information easier to understand and remember.
Unstructured nature of Internet and volume of data
can be problematic.
Technical communication can take many forms
including letters and emails.
Technical communication is a lifestyle.
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Twitter: @kerr_debbie
LinkedIn: ca.linkedin.com/in/kerrdebbie
Email: [email protected]
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