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Feedback – Nando’s PEE Assessment
LO: To be able to understand what could be improved, and write a ‘response to marking’ paragraph
Monday, 21 March 2016
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What presentational devices and language devices have been used to
make the advert persuasive?
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In each paragraph, you must have…•P
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When quoting text from the advert, you must…• Use inverted commas• What are inverted commas?
• The Nando’s advert uses the headline #Wing Roulette• The sub-heading of the advert used in the advert asks the audience
what they gonna get?
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Use connectives• What is a connective?
• Word that joins one part of a text to another
Contrast• However• Although• Except• Unless
Cause/effect• Because• Therefore• So• Consequently • As a result of
AddingAndAlsoFurthermore
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Embedding quotes• The quote is inside a sentence
• ‘What you gonna get?’• The advert uses the colloquial phrase ‘what you gonna get?’• The colloquial phrase ‘what you gonna get?’ is below the headline
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Word Classes – higher level skill!• Identify the word class if you zoom into a word
• Noun• Verb• Adverb• Adjective
• Intu Watford is ridiculously big and scary• Newton are the best house ever
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Response to marking paragraph1. Look at the targets and choose the paragraph you
could improve most on2. Using that paragraph, write a ‘response to
marking’ paragraph, focusing on your targets, and what we have talked about in the lesson.